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Description today i am missing the nice little kid i used to be. i put signs up all over : have you seen this girl? but nobody called to say where she is and i got tired of saying the previous owner is deceased so i cut the phone line and with it my hope. it was only a matter of time anyways - i never seem to pay my bills on time.

today i am laughing fit to burst at the unfunny joke you just told because if i didn't i would never laugh at all.

today i am far away in my head and i think if you looked in my eyes you would see undiscovered galaxies and dizzy planetary orbits and maybe falling stars but not me.
tomorrow i will visit the cretaceous.
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Comments: 15

ThunderingNight [2008-12-07 20:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I swear I pretty much never comment on these things, but the first part really did get to me.

Beautiful, well done.

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gimpbeginner In reply to ThunderingNight [2008-12-08 01:08:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you!

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Upthendown [2008-12-06 04:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Fwaaah, I don't think I could come up with a compliment great enough to praise your writing skills, so I'm just gonna say I LOVE IT, and hope that that covers all the bases <33

I really like the last stanza. It reminds me of something someone told me, I dunno who, but that that little sparkle in your eye is a distant galaxy. I think very deeply about stuff like that sometimes xD

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gimpbeginner In reply to Upthendown [2008-12-06 04:37:34 +0000 UTC]

THANK YAO.

And I think the last stanza is my favourite too. I think I said that in comments, or said it and deleted it. I'm pretty sure I typed it, anyways. I think that's cool.

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FISHKISS [2008-12-02 05:14:18 +0000 UTC]

8| If you keep writing so beautifully, I think my brain will melt. I have nothing more to say than the other times, because I know I'm getting repetitive, but once again I say it: you are a goddess of writing.

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gimpbeginner In reply to FISHKISS [2008-12-06 03:33:35 +0000 UTC]

Okay, this time I will just say thank you and leave it at that, not because I believe you but because you're right, our arguments do get repetetive.

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FISHKISS In reply to gimpbeginner [2008-12-06 11:12:15 +0000 UTC]

x33 Heehee.

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gimpbeginner In reply to FISHKISS [2008-12-06 21:50:58 +0000 UTC]

Choor evil. You know that?

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FISHKISS In reply to gimpbeginner [2008-12-08 05:23:58 +0000 UTC]

Yussums. Thankee. <33

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gimpbeginner In reply to FISHKISS [2009-01-05 03:59:48 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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sadicticvamprie [2008-12-01 23:59:44 +0000 UTC]

you think its happy?
i think its freaky how we both write someting about childhood
the same fuckin day.
but i like it.

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gimpbeginner In reply to sadicticvamprie [2008-12-05 23:41:15 +0000 UTC]

It's hopeful at the end. It's wistful, not depressing.

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sadicticvamprie In reply to gimpbeginner [2008-12-06 04:59:34 +0000 UTC]

maybe. kinda sad tho

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gimpbeginner In reply to sadicticvamprie [2008-12-06 05:04:45 +0000 UTC]

a little maybe. but less bitter than some of my others.

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sadicticvamprie In reply to gimpbeginner [2008-12-06 16:30:24 +0000 UTC]

true xD

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