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Published: 2008-11-20 23:26:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 240; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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the first ever school dance we had, i thought that some of us would fly to heights uncharted and some of us would stay here stuck on earth and crane our necks to watch the glory and sew the pieces back when you fell.once i was on a mountain on a field trip and i shouted at you to stop pushing people to the railings because i couldn’t stand to play the scene behind my eyes.
i can’t remember if you listened.
i put you in that little band of gravity but now i have to wonder how many times you’re going to cry for him
and whether you’ll have any creative excuses or not.
my doubt has always been my lowest failing.
i could tell you it will be okay but that would set me wondering on the law of averages and how much time it will take before we all grow up without each other.
this was all so much easier back when i knew how to cry.
i will never be a seamstress or a pilot.
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vhat is this sighing thing about, hmm?
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I could tell you it will be okay but that would set me wondering on the law of averages and how much time it will take before we all grow up without each other.
especialy this bit.
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that was for us all.
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i know. and its so sad. so so sad.
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it is. it breaks my heart every time.
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oh btw i'll note you a list of the ppl they were for.
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i could've geused some xD
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yeah u could've. just out of curiosity who could oyou have guessed?
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uhm the nessa one the kiefer one the all of us one
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i'm amazed that you remember the kiefer one... i'm sure he doesn't and it wasn't that big an incident...
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i know but i remember you telling me abt it afterwards
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oh really? hm. i must have been really freaked then.
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no youd be suprised how much unimportant things i remember XD
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Uhm. You were always part of my list of flying ones.
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that makes me cry.
i dont know why.
its so beautiful.
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i'm glad you think it's beautiful. i always think there's beauty in everything, and it doesn't detract from the beauty if it makes us sad or scared or angry.
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You know, I'm still gawping at how come you say you don't write that well. o_o This is what I call talent.
-tackleglomp-
Gimme your skills. DD:
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But I... URGH. It's not enough, you know? I am good enough to get praise from my friends and even some of my teachers, and feel smug about it, but I am not good enough to make a living out of it and it's the only thing I'm really good at so I'm sunk.
-hands skills over-
They multiply when they touch you - I think they're breeding with your own very prolific ones.
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Bahr, I always forget to reply to everything x0 Sorry.
PFFT. Nah, they're just so pwnsome they automatically become more 83 It's like cells, 'cept your skills would never degenerate and live forever as well.
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That's okay. You posted on Bumps in the night and I know I won't get to it this weekend...
And no, they shall breed with yours and result will become a new super-race of skills that will take over the world and communicate by mind-wave-telepathy and bring about world peace and develop alternative energy sources and make s'mores.
Yep.
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MMMS'MORES. I'm 'kay widdat.
Bah, no worries 'bout posting x33 Typing to you is already wonderful.
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Oh good. I feel the same way about you. Sometimes I think I'd go crazy if I didn't have you guys to rant to.
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I agree 8D
It feels good to rant sometimes. Lets out all the steam.
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Hey, Chaos, it's already loads. You get emotion through every time, and that's one of the hardest things to get in writing (most people sound horribly BLAND, I swear x_x). And there are plenty of other skills I just know you can tap in if an author's not what you want to be, or don't feel up to being (and really, I don't see why you don't - you're amazing, to put it simply). In any case, I hardly think most people make a living out of what they write - plenty of authors are mediocre, unoriginal, horrendous in spelling and grammar areas as well as plotlines, all of which I assure you you excel in. If your teachers are giving you praise, you've already attained a very respectable level <33
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Wow. Thanks...? I'm glad I get emotion through though, it's one of the big reasons I write poems. So I can foist off all my anger and bitterness on you guys, haha.
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Hum, you're welcome xDD
I like emotion. They're fun to read about, because different people have different perspectives. So now I must thank you for being so pwnsome <33
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