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Published: 2011-10-20 02:09:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 134; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description if you hadn't been there
when I came home, it would be
different. but i've been

systematically
disappointing everyone
i care about, and

you're next in line. i'm
gone again and sorry, but
sorry saves no one.
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FISHKISS [2011-10-20 05:17:32 +0000 UTC]

8000
Someone has to find a name for a haiku-series-poem.

How can you continue to be made of so much awesome? :'3 Wonderful as always (and I'm kinda giggle-happy at their being a single-word line, no idea why xP)! I hope you write mooooooore soon 8DDD
(and tsch, you're the one whose incredible skills deserve and have the greatest chance of being published <3333333)

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jacKass-etUde In reply to FISHKISS [2011-12-26 03:28:57 +0000 UTC]

I agree -- they do! And this one was more catharsis than acutal poetry; I'm trying to write again, but it's hard because I don't want to put stuff up that isn't nice. I have about three lines of another poem started, but that's it.

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FISHKISS In reply to jacKass-etUde [2012-01-05 14:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh wait - I was so confused for a second, is this Chaos speaking? xD (if so: I'm so sorry for not having answered earlier, I've been kinda drifting lately :{
It's lovely to see you write again - I hope you get plenty of inspiration, and even if you don't I'm sure what you'll come up with will be wonderfully done <3333)

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gimpbeginner In reply to FISHKISS [2012-01-20 00:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Oops, yes, it was.

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Mandie-J [2011-10-20 04:49:58 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. Interesting, interesting.

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