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Published: 2009-03-02 22:51:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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i told you so ahundred thousand times, but i
still hate being right.
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I love these short poems. They're almost like riddles, at least for me. I always try to decipher what you mean. I'm not always successful though.
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Hmm... well, this one was written after ugly breakups between Jake and Tasha and Jake and Erin. After I warned them, too! Rrrr!
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They make me think of Post-Its on a refrigerator door. Short and sweet <33 I like these as much as your old style, but one has to agree with Shadeh on them getting the point across quick.
However, I believe that the words you used in your old style perfectly conveyed what you meant to say before you even said it. :]
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How do you mean?
-insanely curious-
I really really want to go back to my old style, actually, but it seems to be that all that's coming out now are haikus. I think my standards are getting higher, is what it is. I don't feel like I can just crank out any long poem and expect you guys to read it anymore.
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I dunno... I just had the general gist of it before getting to the end of the poem. Sometimes the tone you used was just sorta sad, and other times it was a bit harsher, harder maybe... Hah, I find it hard to explain myself xDD
You could expect me to read it x33 Don't force yourself if haikus come naturally for now, though, it'll get back to you at some point. :]
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These are all really good. I'm liking these little messages and whatnot, I should follow 'em more.
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Thank you. You of all people should be able to guess who it's for...
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Erin and Tash, but at least you got one right.
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Y'know, I think that sometimes, these short little poems are my favorites <3
They seem to get the message across more quickly.
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