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Published: 2013-07-12 20:18:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 3465; Favourites: 151; Downloads: 2
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Hihi :3 well i decided to draw myself as a anime-manga character and this is com it turned out..i wanted to make the shirt black but my marker decided to stop working -_- well anyway i didnt have inspiration so i did myself :3 hope you like itRelated content
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Mr-Pink-Rose In reply to ??? [2013-08-07 15:20:26 +0000 UTC]
You look beautiful in anime form.Β And I'm glad your black marker stopped working that day.Β I think your shirt looks better in color.Β I also hope you decided to get a replacement marker.
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Ginchi-chan In reply to Mr-Pink-Rose [2013-08-07 16:12:55 +0000 UTC]
haha i did take a replacement marker and thank you for your kind words :3
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Mr-Pink-Rose In reply to Ginchi-chan [2013-08-07 16:54:12 +0000 UTC]
You're most welcomeΒ ...and I've just added you to my watch
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TheWriterMirage In reply to ??? [2013-07-29 22:54:11 +0000 UTC]
hi i'm with but you already know that
first of all, i'd love to say this is such a nice drawing, i love the innocence the character is displaying, also the casual style. the braided hair added a lot more innocence as well. I adore it. Technical point of view: the lines are clear and well done, no excess edges and no sign of error. Anatomy wise i believe it's pretty accurate, though the face comes down a bit too sharp, but since this is anime style i believe this is quite normal. one thing though about the shoulder blades, the right one is a bit lower that the left, and there's nothing in the picture to indicate she's leaning to the side other than the fact that her head is slightly tilted, but not hard enough to cause the shoulder to go down, unless that's been done on purpose of course. Arms wise, they're a bit of a mismatch if you notice the right side is thinner than left and the elbow point is slightly lower too, again this might be due to the tilt but i can't tell if it's on purpose or not.
shading and coloring: i love the colors that you chose, the striking red for hair, but then again i always loved girls with red hair most
the thing about the coloring though is that it's a bit all over the place, especially on the blouse, the direction lines are quite clear and in some places you've pressed the pencils a bit too hard. To get the most out of coloring, the lines should be all going in the same direction. I've taken a look at the rest of your drawings and the colors are more accurate as the coloring lines nearly all go in the same direction which gives the image a higher quality, art wise. shading part the shadow takes the shape of the object, keep that in mind, if you notice the shadow under the braids it's going in straight lines which doesn't really match the shape of the braids themselves. A bit of a sharp edge on the left shoulder as well, a shadow is smooth and nearly fading, a blurred image of the original. the closer to the original the better it is. now you see on the right braid you've attempted that on a few places and they turned out quite natural, but then you went with straight lines and that kinda takes away from the drawing, slightly.Β
over all this is a great drawing and you should keep going. would love to see more of your art
out of 5
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Ginchi-chan In reply to TheWriterMirage [2013-07-30 13:52:51 +0000 UTC]
aww thank you for helping me improving :3
and thank you for this critique
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Xxbrokenwristxx In reply to ??? [2013-07-29 22:19:27 +0000 UTC]
I am a huge fan of Anime, and I think it is a genre of art that is put down a lot. Others don't realize how much work it does take.
I absolutely love the facial features and hair. It is in the usual anime style that I never get sick of, and the hair contains a lot of realism - which many anime artist seem to forget about, but I think anime should always contain a kind of realism.
I do have some suggestions...Β
The arms of the shirt seem slight overly bunched, this isn't wrong - it is just a style choice. Secondly, the cleavage shown through the shirt seems odd. It would come off better if you did the slight outline of "under boob".Β
Besides that, this is a near perfect piece - that can improve with simple touch ups. As well, I love the background!
I apologized for the wait, our galleries are a little backed up, but we are getting on it right away!
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Ginchi-chan In reply to Xxbrokenwristxx [2013-07-29 22:22:01 +0000 UTC]
wow thank you soo much you made my day i will fix my mistakes thank you for helping me improve
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Xxbrokenwristxx In reply to Ginchi-chan [2013-07-29 22:34:30 +0000 UTC]
You welcome! I hope you use our service again, and I apologize for the wait!
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Ginchi-chan In reply to Xxbrokenwristxx [2013-07-29 22:35:58 +0000 UTC]
o problem and i sure will
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Ginchi-chan In reply to Geltschereis [2013-07-29 07:49:44 +0000 UTC]
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Ginchi-chan In reply to waiting-for-wings [2013-07-26 13:46:38 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much
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HarrietMae23 In reply to ??? [2013-07-22 21:35:40 +0000 UTC]
I didn't mean to post that three times, my phone malfunctioned but actually you deserve to hear it three times
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HarrietMae23 In reply to ??? [2013-07-22 21:32:11 +0000 UTC]
Your pictures are amazing! You're so talented!!
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Ginchi-chan In reply to HarrietMae23 [2013-07-23 16:16:00 +0000 UTC]
thank you you are soo sweet
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Ginchi-chan In reply to Madina123 [2013-07-23 16:15:39 +0000 UTC]
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Ginchi-chan In reply to Madina123 [2013-07-23 16:15:27 +0000 UTC]
thank you soooooooo much
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Ginchi-chan In reply to princebardon [2013-07-22 06:18:05 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much
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