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Nekokorochii [2013-08-17 08:01:04 +0000 UTC]

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I think this is a very good piece of artwork! Although there are a few things you need to improve on. (I hope I don't sound too mean ;_; )

I think the shine and shading on the hair could have been coloured a little better. But then again, I shouldn't be saying this. The shading and shine on my characters hair is very good too TT^TT. I think the right eye needs to be lifted a little higher. (Only a little bit!!) But other than that, I think the face looks pretty e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I also think that maybe her shoulders are a little..... uneven. The left shoulder is a little bit higher than the right one.

I feel like her body and arms are a bit too thin. The arms look a bit..... scrawny and thin and her body is a bit too skinny. I also feel like her shirt should have a bit more shading on it. Maybe some creases where her arms are lying by her sides. Also, her necklace is a bit small, but it is your choice how small you draw it.

Overall, I think this is a beautiful picture, even though there are still some things you need to improve on. But don't worry; keep on improving your artwork, and one day, you won't be a good artist anymore..... you will be a brilliant artist. So keep improving always and never give up, okay?

~ Neko--Chann

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mikelovesus [2013-08-07 17:45:05 +0000 UTC]

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This is a beautiful piece of art e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> It is excelent skeched and colored.I love her soft expresion and i really love her eyes.The vision is perfect and its quite original.Your techique is good and you have a nice style.I can see how hard you worked for this drawing and it payed off cause as you can see the outcome is very nice.The only thing i think should be fixed are her arms cause they looked miss placed and too thin.Another thing is her shirt you should make the shadows more realistic.Anyway that is all from me and i hope i see more drawings from you like this one e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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FazbearCutie [2015-08-01 19:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous! Also its me FazbearCutie from youtube  lol

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Symmetry4Life888 [2015-06-18 12:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Do you happen to have a watt pad or a YouTube channel I feel like I've seen this and your Cheshire Cat girl somewhere before

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GretelGreen [2014-05-12 23:56:09 +0000 UTC]

aww
you look super cute as an anime character
love the picture by the way

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Noelagaman [2014-05-08 23:49:36 +0000 UTC]

I like how you did the hair, how it dus not look perfect but still pretty

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dotty99212 [2014-02-13 18:06:14 +0000 UTC]

I rhink this is one of your best You've definitely improved from your very first posts and I LOVE her hair xxx

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supergurl1345 [2014-02-11 01:08:09 +0000 UTC]

ooooooooooo cute i love it!!!!!!

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ecimer [2014-01-22 01:24:37 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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CeloTheImpossible [2014-01-17 14:32:30 +0000 UTC]

awesome drawing!

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Fireheart-Art [2014-01-15 15:51:08 +0000 UTC]

wow this is really amazing! XD   her hair is really cool!! ^.^

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Mi-Rin [2013-11-04 15:52:55 +0000 UTC]

this is so cute! ;u;

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SirTinypaws [2013-11-02 16:08:39 +0000 UTC]

This beautiful!

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NallTWK [2013-10-18 05:25:51 +0000 UTC]

I love drawing persona characters based on myself or other people I know ^^

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KurlyCrazyKat [2013-10-17 14:05:04 +0000 UTC]

What do you use for coloring her in?

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