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GindyDraws — Suit Gassing, Part Three
Published: 2014-02-11 16:35:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 5026; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 37
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In haste, our fair heroine tries to take off her helmet in an attempt to avoid breathing the sleepy fumes, but the helmet is jammed. She can contemplate pulling out the airhose, but doing so will not only destroy the hose, but also void the warranty for the air backpack.Related content
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Pretty good on the whole, it's definitely come together a bit better than last time. The pose works well overall and most of her dimensions seem to be fine. The issues mostly come from symmetry or some of the more minor aspects of her positioning. For example, her raised leg looks decent enough, but the bottom outline makes it look as if it is disproportionately positioned with her body. It could have done with being a bit shorter as a result. The other is some of the finer details and continuity points. The filters on the helmet are different here and it's odd to see there are now two straps for the air rank whereas previously there were one. Some of the lines used to represent reflections also seem to be a bit more awkwardly placed given the lighting and less solid this time.
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Well, I am always striving to make things better.
Now, the reason why you see two air straps is because Tiffany's arm covered up one of them in the previous piece.
As for the continuity, I do try to work hard, but I know I'm going to forget small details every now and then.
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