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GindyDraws — Suit Gassing, Part Two alternate
Published: 2014-02-11 16:35:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 4242; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 36
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This is from another angle. I did this because, while I was happy with the colors and posing, there were a few mistakes. I'm hoping this shot clears up how Tiffany reacted.Related content
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Not too bad, you've kept much of what made the first work and improved upon the flaws. Most of the remaining ones are more niggling issues than true failings. For example, it's a bit hard to tell why she is in that pose and the way her body is turned could have been better interpreted. Perhaps through using the positioning of the zipper to show how she has twisted herself to one side.
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Yeah, I'm still trying to get better, but I know I am going to make mistakes.
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