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Published: 2010-02-13 00:14:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1212; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 45
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Collab with ~Black-pantheress lines:[link]
Mitsuki and Shiko will never change, right?
I got my tablet today, I colored the BG with it 
I colored the woman in the foreground like Tsunade. Any way, I hope you like it. :3P.S.: I need to learn how to creat lines like this one. Chuuu <3
Mitsuki (C) black-pantheress
Shiko (C) me
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I know that I have already given critique to another piece of yours, but it's fun to give advice - and I like to think that it helps. ^^
Now, I do like the lighting for this picture; you can obviously tell that it is night time. I am not all that wonderful with lighting myself, and this is an awesome example of evening-time lighting. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
I'm just wondering what the striped things are behind Shiko - are those stairs or a wooden ramp? If they were supposed to be stairs, I would suggest that instead of a smooth, curved side (the side of the staircase that connects to the building), you make it more zig-zagged, and apply shading on each step to make them look like separate surfaces. ^__^
Also, I do think that the crease in the red and gold skirt flap should be curved a bit more- it sort of interrupts the flow. Shiko's left 'sleeve' is a bit bulky and awkward, but the outfit is still awesome.
The facial proportions and anatomy needs work- Shiko's features do not fit the angle of which her head is bent. The neck and head should be connected more naturally- her neck is too long and is not physically correct(It's too snake-like e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
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I really love the stlye how she drew it, I really don't mention about the anatomy, 'cause it's realy really great, I loved to color it. :3 Any way, thanks for the critique.<3
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This is great! I especially adore the atmosphere.
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thank you very much
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jut eszembe, meg van a táblám :3
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AAAAAAA! Gratu. Sokkal könnyebb dolgod lesz a rajzzal.
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hááááát az egérrel még mindig jobban megy
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Az osztálytársam amerikából rendelt tablettet. Jó borsos volt, de azonnal tudott vele bánni. Én csak néztem rá. A másik haverom meg kezébe vette és egy vonalat sem tudott húzni. De szerintem te hamar belejössz.
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remélem, most is dolgozom vele
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I soo love your coloring style
I love Shiko's eyes.
But why you don't color girl in window and Mitsuki's gloves?
Thank you again
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That's what I call "lazyness"
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Haha don't worry i love you coloring work
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