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Name: Christopher ("Chris") Nelson ThorndykeAlias: Phoenix (Given to him by the leader of an alien mothership that he first traded with. She said "Christopher, I bestow the name 'Phoenix' upon you. Not only is your hair of reddish hue, but your heart is full of a fiery passion. From your story, you saw from the moment you crashed here that the odds were against you- yet you prevailed and rose from the ashes to become greater than you once were. You are very deserving of this name. Not many people in past generations are. You are something special.")
Age: 18 years
Occupations: Strandee (formerly), Salvager, Survivor, Builder/Maker/Crafter/Whatever, Spacecraft Pilot, Trader
Side occupations: Warrior in self-training, self taught medic, amateur blade smith
Point of origin: Earth
Point of current Residence: Yonkilnin (Pronounced Yawn-Kill-Nin. A planet mainly inhabited by a lot of vegetation and wild alien animals, most of which are pretty aggressive. It's also rich with natural resources, good for making a wide variety of helpful things.)
Powers: None
Type of skillset on a team (Muscle, Leadership, etc.): Brains and a bit of brawn
Backstory: After leaving Mobius and homebound for Earth, an error occurred in the planetary shift, causing Chris to end up on a planet unknown to him, but a planet that was between Sonic's and his own. Crash landing and being flung out of the spacecraft Eggman made, he managed to get some scars (the worst one being on his left side which he bandaged up) and burn marks on his arms and right leg. Gaining consciousness and looking around, he knew he wasn't on Earth, probably not even close to it, but he didn't whine or complain or worry. If there was anything he learned from Sonic, it was to not worry and make the most of the situation. This in mind, his brain switched to survival mode, pushing himself to do things he has never done in his life, like build a new home and hunt for food, start a garden and breed animals to use for future meat and other materials.
After meeting up with an alien mothership that landed there to rest, he got into trading- he did something for any ships that landed on the planet, and in return the visiting aliens would give him materials that he thought useful to him. This is also the beginning of Chris' new alias; Phoenix.
After growing up once again to be an 18 year old, Chris had finished building a new spaceship and left the planet, going back to Mobius once again to stay, but he did not reveal himself to any of his friends until much MUCH later.
Notes:
-Chris built his spaceship using the one Eggman made him.
-He calls his spacecraft "Red Lightning" after Yonkilnin's oddly discolored lightning bolts and red sky during thunderstorms.
-Chris has used the same bandages to cover his old wounds with, but replaces the bandages on his feet quite a bit.
-His hooded cape is made from his old jacket, while he still wears the same pants from before, but modified to his liking and his size.
-If he let down his hair, it would at least be shoulder length.
-Chris landed on the planet while he was still in his 12 year old body, so he spent 6 years on Yonkilnin.
-In his spare time, Chris studied planetary shifts and its affects on time. Doing so made him certain that he wouldn't end up older or younger when he went through a shift cycle, which is why he maintained the current age of 18 when he returned to Mobius.
-Some tossed out aliases I made for him were "Crimson Cape", "Red Wire", and "Phoenix Radcliff" before I decided on his final alias.
-He still sometimes wonders if he'll ever get home to Earth but isn't as concerned with it as he was before.
-His eyes seemed to develop in a way to instead of being rounder, his upper eyelids now lay lower, making his eyes thinner and more cold in appearance.
-This version of Chris shows up in season 4 (and onward if there were any more seasons).
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Comments: 13
CrazyEchidnaLady [2019-08-03 03:00:01 +0000 UTC]
Bruh, I'm still in love with this design of Chris XD
The backstory and everything are just right.
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SonicExp626 [2019-08-02 05:31:17 +0000 UTC]
Since Sonic was somewhat Chrisβ father figure, how do you think he would react to what had happened to him? Would be concerned? Proud? Or both?
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GingyGin In reply to SonicExp626 [2019-08-02 05:44:31 +0000 UTC]
Well, in this version, this isn't spoiled brat Chris. I actually made a new one where I stated in some notes "Since Sonicβs friends arenβt there in this world, it leaves room for Chris to grow and develop as a character, making him more likeable instead of shoving a new character in thatβs lackluster." and "Chris is at first a dependent boy that relies solely on Sonic to come and rescue him every time. Then Sonic takes Chris under his wing to teach him to become his own hero."
It's a lot different from what I originally had in mind, because I thought it'd run a lot smoother this way, but Sonic is still technically a mentor figure- though now I probably wouldn't say he's a "father figure". I'd say more that their like "bestest of best friends". So close that you can't tear them apart.
But concerning your initial question, I'd say probably both. Proud that he thrived and survived after being taught to be tough and persevere, but also concerned at the fact that Sonic had no idea that Chris had been stranded on a planet unknown to him for 6 years on end. And it just makes it worse when Chris finally reveals himself after a long while.
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SonicExp626 In reply to GingyGin [2019-08-02 12:20:20 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh, that makes sense. I thought that this Chris was continuation of the spoiled brat Chris, my bad. Still looks cool, though!
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MobianCanine [2019-08-02 05:06:30 +0000 UTC]
You have a sort of Soul Eater and JoJo's Bizarre Adventure manga style in your humans, but with your own flair! I love it!
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GingyGin In reply to MobianCanine [2019-08-02 05:27:54 +0000 UTC]
Do I? I haven't seen the Soul Eater Manga, and only very little of the JoJo manga. XD
And thank you!
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MobianCanine In reply to GingyGin [2019-08-02 05:52:20 +0000 UTC]
Well, a little more on the Soul Eater side, but still! It's very good!!
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