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giuliadrawsstuff In reply to Indigo81 [2017-05-15 16:58:59 +0000 UTC]

yep!

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Indigo81 In reply to giuliadrawsstuff [2017-05-15 17:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Read this and tell me what you think.

"I'm breaking up with you."

The words were like poison-tipped arrowed that pierced her soft, pink heart. And she had said them so casually, so matter-of-factly, that for a split second the young elemental thought she was just pulling one of her sick practical jokes. But no, there wasn't a trace of mirth or amusement in the Vampire Queen's voice.

She was serious.

Dead serious.

"Whu-Whu-What are you talking about? Break up? We can't just break up. We're so good together."

"Bonnie, I... I'm sorry, I never wanted to hurt you. I just... I've been thinking about this for a while now and, well, after everything that's happened these last few days I... I'm convinced you're not the person I want to spend eternity with."

"Last few days... No! Marceline, please wait! Whatever you remember, that wasn't me talking! That was whatever Patience did to my brain!"

"Bonnie... that was you. Maybe not the real you. But it was you. And even if that... thing was only like half a percent you, its enough to prove that somewhere, deep down, you have a problem with me. Otherwise, why would you think you needed to 'fix me'."

"No! I swear to Glob, that wasn't me! I would never say that about you! I love you! I love everything about you! I love your grungy, depressing songs! I love the way you're always changing your hair! I even love how you smell like you only shower every other day! You're perfect just the way you are! So why would I ever want to fix you?"

"Bonnie, do you even understand what you did to me?"

"Whu-What?"

"You did to me the exact same thing you do to yourself every single day. You pushed all the bad thoughts to the back of my brain and then you built a huge, impregnable wall around so they'd never see the light of day. But you know what. Those bad thoughts are the real me. The fact that I'm over a thousand years old. The fact that I secretly hate myself for being a vampire. The fact everyone I've ever loved either died, abandoned me, or tried to manipulate me. I need those thoughts, Bonnie. I need them because they define who I am. I need them because I can take all those memories, all that pain and sadness and I can channel it into something beautiful. You took away my muse and turned me into... into that... thing! And I... I don't think I can ever forgive you for that."

"Marcy, please, I..."

"Don't! Just... don't, Bonnie. Don't make this any harder than it has to be."

"But I didn't... that wasn't..."

"Look, for what its worth, I had a lot of fun. But if you wanna be with me, you gotta take it all. Not just the parts you like."

"Please... please don't go. We can talk about this. I know we can." 

"No, I... I'm sorry, Bonnie. I have to go. I... I have a... I have a date tonight."

"Whu-What? No... No! No! No! Don't say that! Not even as a joke, don't ever say that!"

"Guh... Guh-Guh... Goodbye."

"No! Wait!  Marceline!"

But it was too late.

She was already gone.

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giuliadrawsstuff In reply to Indigo81 [2017-05-18 17:02:15 +0000 UTC]

wow...that's good, really good...and sad

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Indigo81 In reply to giuliadrawsstuff [2017-05-19 02:17:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

I'm glad you liked it.

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