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give-upand then he fell...

Published: 2007-04-27 21:03:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 26580; Favourites: 1002; Downloads: 470
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Description the man...

toward the heights of the tower of ivory he climbed,
rising on his waxen wings;
aiming for the heavens,
he swore to make great his name.

a plan both great in aim and folly,
for divinity is not in accomplished feat.

the crux...

his young body tired, he anxiously gasped for air
as the staples of his wings weakened.

earthen bricks,
the foundation of his civilization,
of his tower, of reason,
began to corrupt and crumble.

the fall...

alas, progress refused to come with his struggles.
one last futile pump of the crude wings,
and he tore them from his back.

amidst the agony and fear, for an instant,
he lay completely still. peace.
and then he fell...
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Comments: 130

Aftrskewl-Xperiment [2008-03-08 09:33:26 +0000 UTC]

Clever! A well deserved DD!

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ClickClickBangUK [2008-03-08 09:18:21 +0000 UTC]

wonderful, it took me a second to figure it out! i might have edited the blades of grass falling off his foot though a fabulous shot, and a worthy DD, congrats!

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Friedfry [2008-03-08 09:11:20 +0000 UTC]

Awesome Idea! i love this!! +fav

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AthenA-gRace [2008-03-08 09:06:54 +0000 UTC]

WOW
i really like this
you are right. it does look like he is falling from the earth
very well done
i love the shape he's in
perfect

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Zyrophosis [2008-03-08 08:54:55 +0000 UTC]

fantastic, i love the concept. it turned out very nice

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MTNNERR [2008-03-08 08:15:18 +0000 UTC]

SKIES ARE BEAUTIFUL <3

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xxkyokoxx [2007-08-20 18:17:25 +0000 UTC]

This is simply...
*gasp*
ammmaazzzing.

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give-up In reply to xxkyokoxx [2007-09-17 05:19:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much .

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Churant [2007-07-30 10:58:06 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of Myst game!
Great!

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give-up In reply to Churant [2007-08-14 15:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you... I have not played any Myst, but I may have to check it out. Peace.

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bad95killer [2007-07-02 19:14:54 +0000 UTC]

fantastic

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give-up In reply to bad95killer [2007-08-14 15:44:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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bad95killer In reply to give-up [2007-08-14 21:32:27 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure

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Clair-e-scapist [2007-05-27 02:46:52 +0000 UTC]

I find this amazing,
great great job I love it!
The colors are wonderful,
and it's so expressive. Even the poem I like.

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give-up In reply to Clair-e-scapist [2007-06-05 03:48:57 +0000 UTC]

I am glad that you like it all... I really enjoyed the evening on which this photo was shot, and taking a great shot made it even better (and more memorable).

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nimic-si-totusi [2007-05-20 20:04:30 +0000 UTC]

the fall... maybe he or she was aiming too high? truly beautiful picture...

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give-up In reply to nimic-si-totusi [2007-06-05 03:49:36 +0000 UTC]

Overstepping boundaries? Denying truth? Thank you !

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RiccardoTiddi [2007-05-09 15:51:48 +0000 UTC]

Original way to look at jump!

'Bye!

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give-up In reply to RiccardoTiddi [2007-05-12 16:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Peace.

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mrseq [2007-05-03 19:54:55 +0000 UTC]

Nice man. I made a pic with my girlfriend, just like that a few weeks back. Maybe I'll put it online some day. Lovely colors in this one, nice silhouette too.

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give-up In reply to mrseq [2007-05-12 16:27:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I was using my polarizer and the sun was getting really low, so the colours just came out great. I would love to see that shot some time.

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sisqo4u [2007-04-28 20:49:25 +0000 UTC]

thats quite a shot .. nicely captured

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give-up In reply to sisqo4u [2007-05-01 03:17:44 +0000 UTC]

it was one of those shots you take to be funny, and it ends up being one of your favourites. craziness. thanks.

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seventragic [2007-04-28 20:36:15 +0000 UTC]

This is AWESOME.

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give-up In reply to seventragic [2007-05-01 03:17:01 +0000 UTC]

i am glad you like it.

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DumbShark [2007-04-28 20:20:36 +0000 UTC]

this is F***ing great.

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give-up In reply to DumbShark [2007-05-01 03:16:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.

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bolinator [2007-04-28 01:42:14 +0000 UTC]

WOW.

Turned out beautifully, my good sir. I enjoy the introspection as well.

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give-up In reply to bolinator [2007-05-01 03:16:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you (for the jump and the compliment). it was a beautiful evening.

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