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gizmo01 — Escape from the bioborgs part 18

Published: 2014-11-16 11:28:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 813; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 2
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Description Please let me know what you think of the script I gave the Alfa-borg.
After all, I didn't wrote anything beforhand, I improvising the whole thing.

Rayman (c) Ubisoft
Yusuki (c)
Others (c) ME 
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Comments: 39

nina-L-klonoa [2014-12-06 18:16:17 +0000 UTC]

(sorry for the late comment! TwT) 
my darling is angry! OAO you can heal rayman....but more later xD the robot is more important 
the script is very good! so don´t worry ! 
I will read the next part! 

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gizmo01 In reply to nina-L-klonoa [2014-12-06 22:23:21 +0000 UTC]

(its alright
Rayman can wait a little more
Thank you, glad you love it  

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crosserdog1 [2014-11-20 00:43:21 +0000 UTC]

he's boned

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gizmo01 In reply to crosserdog1 [2014-11-20 15:29:35 +0000 UTC]

OUCH!

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StephDragonness [2014-11-18 13:44:29 +0000 UTC]

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gizmo01 In reply to StephDragonness [2014-11-18 20:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Need salt on that?

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StephDragonness In reply to gizmo01 [2014-11-18 23:48:33 +0000 UTC]

lil butter

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gizmo01 In reply to StephDragonness [2014-11-19 09:38:53 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmmmm  

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CherryCreamFairy [2014-11-17 17:42:26 +0000 UTC]

cant wait to see what happens next

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gizmo01 In reply to CherryCreamFairy [2014-11-17 21:04:25 +0000 UTC]

Be patient now

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CherryCreamFairy In reply to gizmo01 [2014-11-17 21:06:18 +0000 UTC]

I will

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ToaDJacara [2014-11-17 00:16:13 +0000 UTC]

Yay Rayman's alive!
Alfa-borg doesn't know when to quit does he?

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gizmo01 In reply to ToaDJacara [2014-11-17 00:22:17 +0000 UTC]

HUZZAH
If he does, Sacke running out of jobs DX

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Randommode [2014-11-16 22:12:08 +0000 UTC]

I am not sure if you can convince a robot that it's behavior is wrong. But I know I know they are part biological so they should know better. They are correct on paper, you can't stop something that does not to eat and sleep as we do , but I know the Team can pull it off  

Great art and writing Gizmo  

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gizmo01 In reply to Randommode [2014-11-17 00:26:13 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like my writing ideas
Machines who are driven by human part must learn as well.

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Randommode In reply to gizmo01 [2014-11-25 06:38:21 +0000 UTC]

I really do Giz 

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Vivere-Sectam [2014-11-16 21:11:27 +0000 UTC]

Man things are getting tense, but is he right about feelings beng worthless compare to technology?
also the Alfa-borg's script is great really sets the mood

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gizmo01 In reply to Vivere-Sectam [2014-11-16 21:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it pal
We reashing the big finally here

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Bloomydia [2014-11-16 18:41:27 +0000 UTC]

This is so dramatic! That's amazing!

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gizmo01 In reply to Bloomydia [2014-11-16 21:07:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you think so

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Bloomydia In reply to gizmo01 [2014-11-17 16:31:37 +0000 UTC]

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Zelsmith [2014-11-16 12:15:45 +0000 UTC]

I gotta love the dialogue of the Bioborgs.

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gizmo01 In reply to Zelsmith [2014-11-16 12:18:34 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it

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Alan-G-Brandon [2014-11-16 12:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Dun. Dun. DUN!!! Dramatic Build-Up inbound!

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gizmo01 In reply to Alan-G-Brandon [2014-11-16 12:06:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank, we need that

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Alan-G-Brandon In reply to gizmo01 [2014-11-17 11:18:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Niekurzakova [2014-11-16 11:39:56 +0000 UTC]

pheuf still alive

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gizmo01 In reply to Niekurzakova [2014-11-16 11:44:25 +0000 UTC]

But he need a doctor quick!

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Niekurzakova In reply to gizmo01 [2014-11-17 10:12:53 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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void-af [2014-11-16 11:39:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow awesome!!!!
Rayman's alive!
Now let's see what Yusuki will do...she seems dangerous...that's good...hehe >:]

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gizmo01 In reply to void-af [2014-11-16 11:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
But he need help.

She will give him the leason of life philosophy

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void-af In reply to gizmo01 [2014-11-16 11:54:10 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^^
Oohhhhhhhh

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Fanofmanymedia [2014-11-16 11:36:45 +0000 UTC]

He's alive!

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gizmo01 In reply to Fanofmanymedia [2014-11-16 11:43:32 +0000 UTC]

But for how long? 

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Fanofmanymedia In reply to gizmo01 [2014-11-16 11:47:06 +0000 UTC]

1 minute?

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gizmo01 In reply to Fanofmanymedia [2014-11-16 11:54:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear! Whare is Gizmo then you need him!

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Fanofmanymedia In reply to gizmo01 [2014-11-16 11:59:33 +0000 UTC]

He's there!

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gizmo01 In reply to Fanofmanymedia [2014-11-16 12:06:24 +0000 UTC]

But he cant get in at the moment

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Fanofmanymedia In reply to gizmo01 [2014-11-16 12:17:23 +0000 UTC]

Kay.

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