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Glitched-Nimbus — Fluttershy isn't sure about Angel
Published: 2012-07-29 12:38:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 6118; Favourites: 123; Downloads: 4197
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I did this vector in 8 hours flat, I did this in the time i should have been sleeping between my shifts, but hell you can sleep later, amiright? Anywho, I would very much so appreciate your feed back on this one guys, I know i'm a little new at this, but i try my best to put out quality work for my followers. Enjoy all those wonders guys
Edit: please please please comment on anything you might see that is iffy or off, even if you don't have time for a full critique a couple words is very appreciated, and helps me stay motivated.
Fixed:SHE HAS A NOSE GUYS!!!
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Comments: 34
Very good work! The only issues I see are small ones. One of the inner tail lines starts and ends a bit thick and the other starts out a bit too flat, given the nature of Fluttershy's tail it should really start at more of a curve.
Her wing is a bit off as well, not being as consistently thick in a few places at the tips of the feathers.
On the top bit of her hair the hair lines gradually get thicker one after the other. At the bottom part of her hair the lines are just a little too thick in general, approaching close to the same thickness as the hair strokes.
The background is really good and looks natural. Good gradients. The overall image is cute, funny, and of best pony. 8 hours well spent.
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My excuse... It's late, I'm tired.
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overall is looks great 
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Not sure why Fluttershy is looking at him so oddly.
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Ate the apple in one savage bite. its the opening theme, and he just devours this apple viciously
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right
i will totally fix that right now!!!
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Could you make her shadow a shape more like her shape and less like a circle.
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Could you make her shadow a shape that is more like her real shape and less like a circle.
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The original source material uses oval shadows. This is in show-accurate style.
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...i was working off what the initial animators did...
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Where's her nostril? One of the lines near the base of her tail looks a bit wonky. Excellent work otherwise.
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Well...i did do this vector from 10 PM to 6 Am
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Thanks, anything wrong catch your eye?
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she looks like shes missing an upper torso
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it does look like that to me as well, but fir the life of my i don't know how to adjust to allow for the upper body
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Thanks
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