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Fifth render for the Free sketch meme .'s character William with a crazy haircut ^_^
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It's probably the hair that made me think that he was a she.
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I like the perspective of this one, but I have to say, I like how the blur effects came out on the person closer to the camera than how the larger person came out. (No offense.)
The sense of distance, height and size are really well conveyed in this picture, though with all the other fine details added in, I think some textures need to be placed within the clothing. It looks odd to have the giant's clothing almost completely smooth looking, with the fine details of the chain link fence by his feet.
The hair on the smaller person (in my opinion) seems to have better texture and came out overall better than the giant's. Something about the texture and hair flow of the giant looks off. Maybe its the back hairs? They look kinda transparent and I think it's throwing off the rest of his hair. (Don't overly know, it just doesn't look quite right if you know what I mean.)
I really like the texture and colors of the stone walls. The bricks are visible, without over taking everything else. The rust on the fire escape is a nice touch as well.
I always love the small details you add into your renderings. You seem to always remember the little details that would have slipped my mind if I was trying to do this picture.
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Thank you for the constructive criticism. It is true - I do not pay much attention to these "sketch" renders. These scenes (and this one in particular) are more of a quick "pose-and-hit-render-button"-style pics, although sometimes I get carried away and start tweaking and adding things
And as much as I would love to take all the credit to myself, I must admit that modelling buildings in not one of my strengths - so the building in the picture is a pre-made prop made by the P3DA group.
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You'd be chasing giants all the time ^_^
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As fast as my little legs could go!
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I love the perspective. 
So is that just a random normal-sized guy, or is he supposed to be the creator?
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That's right, just like in previous "sketches" the normal-sized guy is supposed to be .
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I like this.
He looks friendly enough go up and say hi XD
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I'd be scared stiff to do that
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well since my DA persona is an Airship flying elf. I could at least say Hi at eye level. XD
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Thank you. At first I wanted to use a wider field of view and show some annoyed basketball players around his feet, but then I decided against it - the perspective started to look too weird.
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