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Published: 2008-08-30 21:40:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1497; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 53
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Good ole' fat cheetah.Corel Painter X
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alrighty
itza been a while since ive been on but, heres some GOOD CRITISIZISM.howevea u spell it
the head might be a bit small
the front legs a bit wierd
but everything else is awesome
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i know that already xD thanks anyways though.
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Painter is really slow on my computer. I never use it.
Cheetah seems a little fat, or the head and neck too small. Apparently Cheetahs are really similar to greyhounds, their claws are non-retractable and stuff, but they are definitely cats. Darn cheetahs.
Also the other side of the cheetah... where has it gone? Grass isnt so thick and long that it would be totally covered up.
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i've already been told that many times... like half a year ago lol
the other side of the cheetah wasn't visible in the ref photo.
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Screw the ref photo.
TAKE SOME ARTISTIC LIBERTIES.
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it was half a year ago... :/
when i sucked more than i do now.
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I really like the background on this, especially the sky, its very simple, but pretty too.
I like the pose that you have the cheetah in too, but again, you may want to look at some photos for reference, it may help you alot
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thanks
hmm, i refrenced it from a photo.... ive noticed that the head is small and the body is fat, is there anything else?
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Its just the proportions of the animal really, and possibly the coloring, if you made the shadows a bit darker maybe, and if you have a program for blending the coloring, that may help too
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about the blending, i drew it in corel painter, the gradient is messed up and the blenders are a bit difficuult to use D:
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oh well that could cause problems, if you would like to try a new program look up GIMP in google, its a free program, its what i used to draw my picture of Hazard
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i tried to download gimp, the computer's internet breaks every time i try to download it
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That's pretty cool. Good, for one of your first tries. Try more shading and detail in the background next time, add some mini trees, put more clouds in the sky, though I think the leopard's anatomy could use a little work (I think its head is too small... I dunno, it looks weird to me). I do like your color choices, though.
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thanks
yeah, the cheetah's anatomy is definetly wrong, not only is its head too small its also too fat.
i will try your suggestion for the bg
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What a great backgound!!
I can't do backgrounds worth crap xD
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thank you!!
well, i sorta scribbled the background... maybe you should try that XD
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That sounds easy enough xD
Maybe I will try it ^^
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Still looks like the Savannah desert to me 
And pureheart's critique is what I was going to say so I won't be repetitive. Though the head is a bit too small. Otherwise this is a very nice cheetah out in the savannah
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yeah, i noticed the part about the head D:
but thank you
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omg this is awesome! Super cute
And my critique for you...
Well, Cheetahs are usually alot thinner, so maybe next time you could make the arms a little skinnier, and same for the stomach
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i know D:
i think the legs are the right thickness, but the belly is DEFINETLy too fat... i will need to keep that in mind next time.
but thank you
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You're welcome ^__________^
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That really is a great background, like anthonyS13 said! ^^ I don't know if it's just my computer, but I can't see the bottom part of your picture... is a gray box... (?)
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um... im not sure what happend, but it looks like a gray box to me too and its not supposed to be like that...
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