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Published: 2014-06-28 16:35:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1414; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 0
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Music that goes along with this picture can be heard at the website below!Justin and Miral are ©Michele M Scott
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HAAH I don't know!! Well that is you're opinion! Just because she was rescued doesn't mean anything! But welcome to the Mistin shipping bandwagon.
AWWW thank you for that! I'm glad you like the music!!
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And the king loves all his fans graciously. You're most welcome!
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*Justin nods to you in appreciation*
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Omg my king -fangirling even im boy-
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İm making this day as "hug your king day" and *hugs justin* first im celebrating it x3
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OH!!! A splendid day! Of course you have to get past the royal body guards first! XD
However Justin knows you and will welcome the hug. *Justin hugs Hayfie*
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Justin chuckles* "I thank you friend."
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OH yes indeed!!!! I thank you kindly!! He is the superman of Flourisha LOL!
Did you get to listen to his badass music too? =3
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Not yet. =X But I'll do it asap, this looks way too epic to be missed !
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All right!!!
I hope you find it as epic as it looks!
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Justin looks like a saviour, he is so kind like you
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He is a hero type! No doubt! He's my hero too!
Thank you! We are very similar.
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I have a question is Justin a dinosaur or a lizard? Or is he a lizosaur a combination of a lizard and a dinosaur o3o?
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Look at his feet! He is a velociraptor, so he is a dinosaur!
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Oh that's pretty amazing!
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Thanks! I love dromaeosaurus, my favorite dinosaur group! I had to have a raptor oc and Justin was born!
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Yes! At first he had no head feathers! XD I don't have any of those pictures anymore sadly. It looks so much better with that wild mohawk!
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Yes it certainly does
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Have shared this to my friends on Fb, the link and your page, because they're both so cool!
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OH!!!! Thank you so very much!!!!!! You are so awesome!
Facebook! Would you like to be FB friends too? 
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Sure
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Thanks!! Yes that they do! It is sad!
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One word- Awesome! I know lots of guys that would love this saga!
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OH wow thank you so very much!! You do? That is awesome!!! Thank you !!!!!
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No problem
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Yes! They are gifs or icons!
Justin one is great! I love to la so I had to have my own!
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I must find out how to make them
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I used this tutorial fav.me/d5we99j and fav.me/d5wyh43
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The music is really well done, sure wish I had some skills in anything music-based. xD Would really help with animation soundtracks for my coursework.
Well done on that, bro.
As far as the animation goes it's okay as a loop but it feels like with the music a lot more imaginative things could be done with the visuals. Don't get me wrong, it looks nice, but it gets a little old after a while. I'm not asking for anything out there but a little change of visuals would be nice is all I'm saying. xD Like... if there was a couple or so more images that are animated in loops. I know that it would take a lot of time, but that's just how things go in terms of creative media.
Also the font at the start kinda made things a bit hard to read, for me anyway. I know that you're probably going for a theme but maybe some things, visually, would be better off straying from it from time to time.
Last thing, I think the summary might be a bit too long and detailed... Like, it's not badly written or anything, but it doesn't really feel like a 'summary' you find at the back of books or dvds. It seems to give seemingly important plot-points away which to me seems like a bit of a waste. I have no clue about how your novel is structured, so forgive me if I get the wrong idea, but it feels like a lot of the scenes mentioned sorta got ruined in terms of suspense or heart-breaking scenes since now we more or less know what happened and it won't be too much of a surprise, may as well skip it (aka, spoilers?). I'm not trying to sound harsh, bro. xD It's a good video, just some aspects of it could be made better. Keep up the good work~ Looking forward to seeing more of this.
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Thank you!
Oh I want to animate the whole thing but I don't have the time, experience or the means, maybe one day. A lot of the other stuff is just fillers for the music. Figured I would toss the summary in there. It was really something to looks at besides a still picture I was after something like this fav.me/d7hndyq
Oh no that is not the plot, that is all backstory that influences the plot.
wow, well I got this summary help from another writer though! You make me feel duped! But there is no good way to summarize this novel without having some of that suspense and give away. Like I said this is back story and happens in the first few chapters.
I had the summary up in the group for months!!!! Its already every where!
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Trust me, I don't either and for some odd reason I'm on an animation course. :I Go figure. xD Doing a course without the needed programs is friggin difficult, man.
It's still /part/ of the plot. And since it's in the past it could have been referenced at some point in the main story. Like... in flashback or a character motivations reveals. |D I mean, that might just be my way of story-telling these days (and I get that different people have different ways of writing) but I restrain myself from giving that much away about any aspect of the story. Heck, anything major about the story in general so the readers/viewers would be more curious about what's happening and why. Like... Peak their curiosity about something and then have them stick around for answers. Idk. Just kinda rubs me the wrong way sometimes when some answers are just thrown at you from the get-go. xD I'll just be a pain about it. *thumbs up*
Yeah I don't think I'm officially part of that group so I don't know. xD So as someone who doesn't know much about the story and just casually walking in, it just sorta spoils some of the aspects of it. I mean, if people know what will happen then why should they bother with something? :u That might just be me though. And I'm sure this doesn't seem like a huge deal on the greater scale of the story, but then again I don't know what you know about the size of it aha.
I'm sure your story is awesome either way. c: Looking forward to more.
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lol!
I didn't like it either honestly but I was told Justin's life goal had to be in there and that is what triggers his life goal. its unfortunate that is it, but it is!
Of course anyone can find out all this by looking at the art. Justin is labeled as a prince/King everywhere!
Of course now this is on youtube and you're the first to call me out on it!
Now im thinking.
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And thus I stay clear of saying anything related to character developments or directions. |D Adds more opportunities for twists and god I love those. You like this character? TOO BAD THEY'RE DEAD. muahahahaha! Good times. *smacked*
And really? Told by who? (if I may ask) :u I mean, life goals aren't really to be held secret too much since those goals normally are what move the plot along but there are more subtle ways of expressing them.
Sorry..? |D; I was just stating an opinion. Really sorry if it put a damper on your spirits, that wasn't my intent. I guess getting constant feedback for work at uni, it's sort of becoming second nature to me. Sorry again. :c
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Yes. I do avoid spoilers though. I wont share anything that isn't needed to define the story.
Ah yes well, you will love this series because its full of twists!
The author that helped me write it.
No it's ok you're just the only one who felt this way so far! =3
I have to wonder if Im wrong with that summary but im not sure who to ask. I read Harry Potters and I get where and how and part of me felt like it was to much but everyone told me they loved it and wanted to read more so I never questioned it.
Do you know anyone good at writing I can ask?
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Good, good~ c:
Then I can't wait to read it~
Yeah, I still kinda feel like a terrible person. xD; That one party-pooper. Curses.
And yeah, I got a friend whose really good in writing. Has a pretty high level degree for different sorts of writing. He's willing to help out if you want. c: I said I'd like him to your page and the summary and so he'll let you know if you should maybe improve it a little. Hell, maybe you don't and he'll just tell me I'm an idiot. xD It'll probably be this scenario.
And for the Harry Potter comment, you mean the summaries were long there too..? Because I got the first two books next to me and they only have like... 3-7 lines just stripping the plot down, the rest just seem to be reviews from different sources. I get that this bigger books you can have bigger summaries but yours might just be a bit long and tells a little too much. But again, that might just be me. (Man, I hate it when I act so confident but then I just start doubting my own words aha) c:>
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Aww thanks!
OH!! Sorry!
OH that would be so very awesome of you! This all has to be right and I'll have to tell you in notes why despite being the only one there may be a reason you were meant to call me out on this! I always believe their are reason's for things!
No they were short but it laid his life struggles out.
I wanted a short one but I had NO CLUE how to write my story that short without it sounding stupid!
I know the feeling!!!
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Aha, I might be totally wrong. xD I'm not exactly a writer. I try to be but I'm more of a visual author than an actual writer. Can't do anything remotely essay related. :I But sometimes I just know some things that make things better... maybe it's because I watch a lot of reviewer type stuff online and just start seeing flaws in things. It doesn't mean I'm right by any means, but sometimes just sorta gotta share the opinion and maybe someone might benefit from it. xD Unlikely but maybe. Hopefully my friend can help you. c: If he even needs to, but yes.
Yeah I know the feel. :T Summarizing things with big plots is really hard, that's why I bug other people to help me with this sorta stuff. xD
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Well we shall see!
It maybe! I know from beta reading that everyone sees different problems so being more outside might actually be a good thing.
I can get any of my own family members beside my sisters and mother to look at it and they don't know! So im lacking outside the loop opinions!
I will be immensely grateful if he can help me shorten that! I will add him to the dedication and what ever else I can do!
Yes! Summaries are BLAH!
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Outside feedback is always good my friend. |D I'm using that as a weapon when it comes time for my final piece in animation. Our tutor has a reputation of asking us to do work and then tells us to change things (sometimes huge portions of the story or animation) and usually very last minute. She would be basing judgement from her own opinion and my group of friends and her don't exactly see eye-to-eye. So we're using outsider opinions to we can counter whatever she might say against our work, since her argument is usually 'oh no one what's to see that' etc. xD So yeah, feedback is always good.
I think he should of contacted you by now. :u Did he help?
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OH yes I know it! My novel is being tore apart as we speak lol! Although I was told that for my first it had few issues.
Ah that is wise!
Nothing yet.
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