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Published: 2014-06-28 16:35:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1414; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 0
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Music that goes along with this picture can be heard at the website below!Justin and Miral are ©Michele M Scott
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Ah thank you! I got a lot of comments about the design of that armor set and color use. Truly suits him well. ^.=.^
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It really does look great, good job.
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There we go! ouo It is looking much better~
It would be amazing to see the book get turned into an anime or an animated movie! owo That would be awesome!! XD
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Thanks!!!
Oh yes that it will and I am going to pursue that!!!
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David and I are listening to the music while we stuff envelopes at work! *giggle*
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Oooo!! I thank you! Glad I can entertain you both! I'm going to be releasing another soon! I decided to do a year review with it, even though I know I will have more 2014 art to add later!
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So it is a preview of the review? LOL Hee hee hee Ahhhh me. I just kill me!
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Dang! You wrote music for it too? That's awesome!
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Thanks! That I did a full album's worth.
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XD Thank you much! Yes it was too all over the place!
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Already this artwork is great designing, the angle and posing make it look great. Justin looks really good there while in action ^^
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Thank you much!! It's long overdo for some action shots of Justin. I got another one in the works.
Let me know what you think of the song if you get a change to watch it. Sorry the animation is poor! XD I want to redo this once I feel better!
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Listened just now both Escape from Delphi and King's Dance tracks through and they sounded very good indeed. As soundtrack appeciator-listener-buyer I did like those a lot, instrumental music does get me inspired from various of scenes ^^
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OOO thank you very much! I got 17 tracks total. I was working in Justin's theme but then I got restricted in art work till I feel better.
I'm so happy you liked them!
I was nervous as this is my first music album but I am revealed!
I would have them out sooner too buy but a few songs are spoilers for the book. 
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A lot of people have been saying that! I find it amusing!
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Np. I've been wanting to do a simple animation myself but all that work @_@ I'm allergic to work. lol So kudos to you for taking the time to put this together :3
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Ah yes it is a lot of work!
Anime studio would have made this so much easier and faster...sigh...
HAHA! Thank you!! What do you think of the music? I have another song up there too!
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It's really good :3
I've tried to write lyrics before and they always come out terribly XD I don't think I could ever make music.
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Thankies!!!!
AWW really!!!
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RAWR!!! MMM oh yes I know I do! I'd like to take Miral's place! =3
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Awww yeah! <3
hehehe Same here ^_^ Now how much are tickets for a piggy-back ride? LOL kidding! <3
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HAHA!!! Well just find your self in a situation you need rescuing from and it will be free of charge! XD
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I so love this scene! It was one of the best moments in the book! Davie and I are going to read some more today. I can't believe how fast the day is going by. We need to listen to the music while we are online! Thanks for posting the link!
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You're welcome! I changed the summary to not be so blunt and be more of a hint to the major events. Another writer helped me with that!
Awww! Thank you!! I'm glad you thought so!!
It is, this whole week has! I have been swamped by DA! I need to disappear to get stuff done! XD OH! New song tomorrow!!!
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i think the hair flies to far apart actually, no offense cause it's an amazing image definatly with the perspective from below
although it's to far apart in my opinion. it doesn't look right
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Hmm someone else thought that too. I will have to look at hair being blown up and tossed by wind. Thank you!
What did you think of the music?
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Nice job on the perspective!
The expressions look great, and the shading is interesting!
The only flaw I see easily is Miral's hair, it looks a bit... all over the place, but that's animation for you I guess. xD
Nice job on the gems, also!
All of the music sounds amazing so far!
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AH Seth la!!!!!
Lo!! Thank you!
A combination of cell and soft with the lights. I like it!
Being whipped about by the wind and the descent! XD
Oh the gems yes! Thank you!
I thank you kindly!!!!!!! My first album! It is great to get so much positive feedback!
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You're welcome! :3 And lol yup! XD
As do I like it!
Yes, crazy hair for the win! XD
It sure doesn't seem like your first album! xD
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AWWWWWW!!!! That is so amazingly sweet of you!! I am surprised and excited! Thank you!!!
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Thanks, and you're welcome! :3
If I heard it on the fly I would think you had a major in music! And generally I'm really picky on music too! xD It's not even my favorite genre, but it sounded pretty awesome to me. :3
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Oh wow!! So happy!
Oh can you do me a fav and look at the new summary
silver-dolphins-saga.deviantar…
i was told the other was to blunt by another writer....and a spoiler be another person...suck cause now m y video has 70 views and I need to take it down possibly.
Honestly for all the time it was up no one complained till now! I want to be sure it still sounds good!
silver-dolphins-saga.deviantar…
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For a summary, it still sounds pretty good to me.
If you want me to be as critical on that as possible, I would say the person who said it was blunt may have meant it felt a little generic, but part of the reason that format may be generic is just because it works... I'm not a professional writer, that's just my opinion.
If that's what you plan to put on the front inside cover or back cover of the book, then I wouldn't take a summary route like that, but that's just me. If I were planning to put something on the back or front inside cover of a book, I would put an intense moment, or an important death for that, and leave with the reader not knowing what will happen but being strongly hinted towards what may happen. Possibly you could try hinting at the characters somehow but not giving names if you don't want to spoil things; anywho, I think that makes the reader intrigued by the mysteriousness of the book and wondering what will happen next, so they pick the book up. And again, that's just what I would do.
The only negative part about this is that it doesn't tell the reader much about the book.... perhaps you could try that, and take a poll on what makes them want to read the book more, as that's a big definition of a summary, to me. - Something that introduces you to the book, and makes you want to keep reading, in our case.
Don't feel pressured to do what I say though, it is your book.
And I must say there will, chances are, always be someone disliking something, it's hard to please everyone.
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Thanks.
By blunt they meant flat out saying Irana kills his parents. Instead of hinting that something happened which the new one does. His parents are mentioned but they aren't mentioned escaping. Did you think it was a book destroyer to know that? See tis fits what you said an important death...perhaps just leave out that Irana did it?
ah yes this is for the book cover! So it's no good!
Everyone but two people now like the book based on the summary in the video. They want to know more. But that summary is lacking a lot too. You read the first 60 pages that is about as far as the summary should go I was told. Based on that do you have suggestion on what pulled you in?
I have been looking over various summaries of things I have read and I just can't figure out how to word mine short enough with enough power.
Im reading this one www.amazon.com/Mistborn-The-Fi… close to my story in some aspects. It has so much back ground and history in a short summary. I was told no by a certain someone, so I am confused loL! I wanted a summary more like this but not sure how to spin it.
I have never been good with summaries! XD
That may be a good idea!
In the mean time I think I should pull my video so I don't spoil anymore....just not sure what Im going to put there in its place.
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I hinted at the death by having them present visiting but not excepting then I added Justin seeks vengeance to the new summary making you question it yet again. Why is he seeking vengeance? I hinted at her father with attempts to help him.
Yes plz take that all out!
Darn to bland =/
Miral Akemi a common human girl living and working with her father in a castle on the Island of Delphi. Her father is her only friend and family; her own people have rejected her for being different. Her curse is the unusual gift of water magic. As if her life couldn’t get any worse, a prophet arrives with a dire warning for her to flee to Arisdale – the largest elder race kingdom, well known for it's hatred of humans.
Justin Arisdale, crown prince of Arisdale and a Velociraptor, is visiting Delphi with his parents King Johanas and Queen Anelda, and his brother Agar. He runs into Miral during her escape from Delphi. Justin attempts to help her father and learns of the prophecy. Miral, Justin, and Agar find themselves in a desperate race to escape the Queen’s army of mindless townspeople and a bloodthirsty demon from their nightmares. Justin must use his wits and gift of earth magic to fight his way with Miral to the ship and home to Arisdale. Justin seeks vengeance and vows to stop Queen Irana Delphi before she brings the darkness the prophet forewarned of upon the whole world.
Can Justin fulfill his mother’s dreams of unity? Will Miral find a place she can belong? Together can they save the world before all is lost?
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Phew okay it's hidden sorry about that! x'D 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
And sorry for being so slow on these replies I have too much to do!
Hmm that summary is much better!
My last and only concern at this moment: I said it was generic a bit because of the issues before, but also a bit because you just say, Miral is a common human girl, and
and Justin is a velociraptor, but if you want to convey that in the summary all is good from what I see at this moment.
All good!
That is ok!
OH GOOD! XD
Oh?
Again I have no clue this is what two other authors helped me come up with. Common human woman and Justin is the crown prince and a velociraptor so that tells you there is a wealth, status and race difference from the start.
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