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Published: 2009-04-12 21:55:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 11559; Favourites: 955; Downloads: 286
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I have a whole bouncy castle to myself!!!! YAAAAYthis is my entry for the Give Us A Yay Contest
Took me a while, kinda got lazy towards the end
Still, any feedback is welcome (or even a crtique if u can be bothered) and thank you for looking
edit: Tried to fic the jump and made the bouncy castle sort of 'bounce', thanks for all the suggestions
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This is amazingly done, just seeing this is bound to put a smile on anyone's face from any age group. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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The perspective is also very well done, you've given your little emote plenty of room to go nuts. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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My only criticism is that I feel the jumping animation may be slightly too fast, and it's more noticeable at the peak of his jump. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/e/eโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="
But all in all, a brilliant and very original piece sure to delight it's audience. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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thanks a lot for the great feedback, I really appreciate it
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This is so adorable!
What first made me notice this (besides the manic bouncing e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="
As for the little guy (or gal) jumping, I love the expression on its face as well as the color you chose. It makes it stand out from the background and it doesn't get lost in everything else that is going on in this piece.
The only thing I could see that maybe could be improved is the bouncing animation; it could be a little smoother. I feel that once it gets to the top and starts to drop, it's a little jagged.
Other than that, this is wonderful and you portrayed the emotion well. Yay!
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Thank you so much for the fantastic feedback
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No problem... any time!
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Yay!
I just had too, it was too perfect. lol
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OMG, that's totally cute! So powerful and dynamic! Can I use it for other members on DA? I can give you points or something! It's so wonderful!
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It doesn't get much more cheery than this!
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Ah i wish i could have bouncy castle 4 myself too
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I want a bouncy castle tooo.
It's still not very bouncy. Ugh, I want to explain how to fix it, but my english is not good enough.
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!! *bounces with them*
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Honestly.... I thought this one should've won at least something....
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I wish I had my own bouncy castle........... YAY!
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Ho... so cool ^^
I love it, as you did it?
(sorry for my bad english, iยดm Spanish)
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Supposedly The Phone Will Ring
Right After You Do This.
Just read the little stories and
Think of a wish as you scroll all
The way to the bottom. There is
A message there - then make your
Wish.
No attachment on this one.
!
Stories
I'm 13 years old, and I wished
That my dad would come home from
The army, because he'd been having
Problems with his heart and right
Leg It was 2:53 p .m.. When I made
My wish. At 3: 07 PM . (14 minutes
Later), the doorbell rang, and
There my Dad was, luggage and all!!
I'm Katie and I'm 20 and I've been
Having trouble in my job and on the
Verge of quitting. I made a simple
Wish that my boss would get a new
Job. That was at 1:35 and at 2:55
There was an announcement that he
Was promoted and was leaving for
Another city. Believe me...this
Really works!!!
My name is Ann and I am 45 years
Of age. I had always been single
And had been hoping to get into a
Nice, loving relationship for many
Years. While kind of daydreaming(and right after receiving this email)
I wished that a quality person would
Finally come into my life. That was at
9:10 AM on a Tuesday. At 9:55 AM
A FedEx delivery man came into my
Office.He was cute, polite and
Could not stop smiling at me. He
Started coming back almost everyday(even without packages) and asked me
Out a week later . We married 6
Months later and now have been
Happily married for 2 years.
What a great email it was!!
Just scroll down to the end, but
While you do, think of a wish.
Make your wish when you have completed
Scrolling. Whatever age you are, is the
Number of minutes it will take for your
Wish to come true. Ex.you are 25 years
Old, it will take 25 minutes for your wish
To come true).
However, if you don't send this to
People in 5 minutes, you will have bad
Luck for years!!
Go for it!!!
!
SCROLL DOWN!!!!
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STOP!!!
Congratulations!!! Your wish will
Now come true in your age minutes.
Now follow this carefully....it
Can be very rewarding!!!!
If you send this to 10 more
People, other than the 5 that you
Already have to send to, something
Major that you've been wanting
Will happen
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guess wat??? YYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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such an amaaaaaazing yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
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