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gnome-oo β Girlfriend Balloon TF Sequence
Published: 2014-08-02 13:59:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 99552; Favourites: 602; Downloads: 552
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Commissioned byDon't have much to say about this one, it sort of speaks for itself. The subject was a good sport.
Enjoy.
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Can't wait until in 400 years that this is possible
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A Helium addiction strikes another person. Not my really thing but since it's in my inbox I'll give it a shot. The sequence as a whole flows well probably due to the use of repetition in the clothing, and the balloon.
It's not perfect though by any means the shading the final character doesn't match the initial balloon and as such implies it's not the same material, which I assume is what you were going for by giving the final subject a sheen. Remember similar objects of similar texture should have the same shading.
Speaking of shading the lighting is a bit off the balloon and the shading on the character seem to imply a slightly different directional light, also on the final frame the shadow is perfectly underneath the subject, when projection wise it should be at an angle behind her a bit based on the implied light source.
Keep on drawing and don't think appealing to niches doesn't mean you avoid critiques ~
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Thanks for the critique, unsolicited as it was. I wasn't really avoiding it, though there are ways to request them (and I hadn't).
Still, in all honesty, I appreciate that -you- appreciate fetish art is still art. My style and ability keep evolving, and while I strive for consistency, there's an old saying, "completion not perfection".
Sometimes, you just need to put the stylus down, so to speak.
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I feel that a lot of people could benefit from a critique every now and then even if it's a bit discourteous (Like returning food at a restaurant). Most people who need help don't ask or have a legion of yesmen (usually kids who are too cheap to commission so they sweet talk in hopes of free gifts) inflating one's ego.
Yeah I go by the "Good enough" Philosophy myself, where Naturally I'll learn more if I did the whole thing over again, but if kept doing that I'd never get anything done, since the moment you finish something you're already better than when you began. So go with what feels good enough and apply what you learned to the next sequence, rather than perpetually do over an older one.
I'm glad you responded positively though I'm never sure how these go I try not to judge on subject matter but try to see it as what the concept was and how well was it executed. Yours was fairly decent, you got a general understanding down with some more experimenting you could really push into some high quality works.
As a final tip I'd recommend trying some different angles on characters though the 3/4 view helps with the repetition and sequence unity but it can make the characters feel a bit stiff.
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That's what was called for with this drawing, but I take your meaning.
But, if you're looking for something more along those lines, this sequence has a better series of different angles.
Thanks for your comments.
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I can't help but be reminded of when Mr. Mackey's head turns into a giant balloon on South Park.
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Very cute sequence, and the girl is beautiful.
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People have the strangest fetishes.....
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And stranger still, there are people so mystified by the oddity of the weird they need to voice their amazement in the comments.
To be fair, maybe the name of the multi-million user site you stumbled on is meant for cosplay photos and pictures of Disney Infinity collections, but I'm guessing it's the wonderfully weird that keeps people coming back.
That said, welcome! 1995 called, they'd like their amazement at the existence of expansion communities back.
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.......I'm going to shut up now.
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Hm thatβs a new one. A and excellent one to be sure, nice job
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lol i like the sequence of how she gets inflated, nice one!
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One of the more smoother transformations.Β
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It was a recommended upgrade. Couldn't be done in three.
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I gotcha.Β I love a good transformation or inflation sequence.Β You're one of the best at it.Β
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Thanks, I appreciate it.
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My name is Ryan gnome-oo, can I ask a question.
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Not here. Send me a note, please.
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