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Published: 2004-02-03 22:05:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 175; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 124
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Description i didnt want to submit this...but its been a while since i've done anything. i need to move on to things. please realize this is really personal to me. im posting it because i wonder if anyone else relates...i feel so alienated right now.
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Heres a poem I wrote to explain it:
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Up the stairway...to my mind.
Leads to a place, no one will find.
Entrapped and entangled, Unaffected by your love.
I sit strapped in.
Never to be found. Never to be discovered.
Only connected to:
My own insanity, My own past fears...
Cognitive reinforcements of tomorrows never to come.
Why did I ever come here ? What caused such a fate ?
Who dare to assign such a destiny ?
As if I'm in a tunnel, light at neither end.
I keep running...looking for a way out.
Hitting a wall ever time I fall.
Standing up only to float to a floor.
I have created this place.
My own cell...my own insanity...
My own entrapment...
If only to escape...to break free...
To feel your love...
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Comments: 8

never2late2hate [2004-07-30 04:52:46 +0000 UTC]

thats amazing

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goatstack In reply to never2late2hate [2004-07-30 16:39:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks...glad you like it.

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polinius [2004-06-21 08:09:16 +0000 UTC]

Interesting drawing, and the poem is pretty cool also.

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fearful-toxicin [2004-06-16 08:27:34 +0000 UTC]

Very cool pic

The poem I can to relate to right now

I just move have no friends no nothing

Im so alone

and I feel so bored of life

and Excausted

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shallowinnocence [2004-02-26 18:41:53 +0000 UTC]

sooo, i got bored in website, decided to read this again for some reason, and yeah....had quite a different effect on me now reminds me of some lines to a chester song...( from linkin park) da song is called "the morning after" and the lines that it brought to my mind were
"Caught up against the wall again
Tied with chains and ball again
Never seize to amaze the night
So i just sleep, sleep, sleep,
But please don't...

Wake me til the morning after
Wake me til the morning after

Cut and bruised by the fall again
Lick my wounds like a dog again
Is that a light at the end of the tunnel that
I see I see please let it be but don't...

Oh, I'm so tired, there it has to be an end
To the pain I feel when I'm awake and alive alive alive
Alive and I'm not dreamin, oh"

maybe the connection is not as apparent to you, and maybe it is, im not sure if this makes sense outside of my own mind..lol, anyway, i don't know if you'll even read this or anything since last i knew your dad wasn't letting you come on this site....ahhh well, maybe ill just copy and paste this later if i talk to you on aim sometime soon, i do have a lot i want to tell you and talk to you about so...yeah, lata!
Amanda

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johnhawks [2004-02-04 16:29:48 +0000 UTC]

Whoa.
Good.

-JH

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thecorr [2004-02-03 23:49:56 +0000 UTC]

it's very touching (and i love how you draw!)

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shallowinnocence [2004-02-03 22:28:28 +0000 UTC]

like i said...i love this...im glad you decided to put it up...and i do like the colors you used for behind the final drawing, but really i do like da poem lots and just the progression of it is awesome

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