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GohoshiSuruNyan — CB Week Day 2

Published: 2010-09-22 15:20:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1798; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 5
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I'M SORRY THE BACKGROUND FAILS AMAZINGLY.
But I wanted to get a "bare" feeling for Brainy's room - if he was just brought up in Colu instead of raised with affection as is rumoured, I don't think his room would be brightly coloured or even full of many possessions at that age.

For the second day of Clark/Brainy week on .
When They Were Young Wednesday: What if they met when one or both of them were kids?
Brainy's about six or seven here, Clark's about nine or ten.
I KNOW THEIR AGE DIFFERENCE WOULDN'T MAKE THAT POSSIBLE BUT JUST WORK WITH ME HERE.

THE PLOT BEHIND THIS... WHATEVER IT IS.
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Clark wasn't good remembering faces. Names stuck in his mind like glue, but trying to add features to some of the faceless people from his memories always proved a problem for the Man of Steel. But every so often, he found it worked the other way around.
He remembered as a young boy the first time he had properly explored the early extents of his powers, flying far into space and exciting himself with the findings of new planets and stars. However, one planet instantly piqued Clark's curiosity above all the others he passed - a mechanical world with tall buildings and wide skies.
But it wasn't the features that caused the planet - the name of which he was still unsure of - to nag at the back of his mind, it was the boy he had sighted while exploring, the only inhabitant to have set eyes on the Boy of Steel in all his escapades to other worlds.
He had flown up to a top-floor window in hopes of getting a peek inside the homes on the strange planet, only to find a young alien boy staring straight back at him with piercing eyes, his small mouth hanging half open in surprise. And Clark had been surprised too, when the first thing the boy did wasn't to scream or call for his parents, but to open the window.
Clark couldn't ever forget the warmth he felt when he held the small boy tightly in his arms, feeling a scrabbling cling in return, or the way the alien's wide eyes lit up with excitement and a hint of fear as the future Superman took him for a flight above the tallest buildings on his planet.
...But really, his memory had stored all that - even equating through new information that the planet must be Colu - yet he still couldn't remember his playmate's face at all.
He was brought back down to Earth by a tap on his shoulder, tilting his head down to see Brainiac 5 staring up at him with deep purple eyes.
"Clark, are you listening to a word I'm saying?"
Something clicked.

Ohhh gosh, TL;DR.


ANYWAY ENJOY THAT AND SHET.
Ffff, I got really into writing there.

OKAY I'M SUBMITTING THIS BEFORE I TYPE ANYTHING ELSE.
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Comments: 20

disneymickeygirl459 [2016-02-07 04:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Dear lord, this is what my dreams are made of!! XD

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PokeSpeBanette [2013-12-24 22:44:36 +0000 UTC]

THAT SHOULD TOTALLY BE A FANFIC SERIOUSLY

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Kaith-Sith [2013-08-18 05:12:42 +0000 UTC]

The story.....so cute. I can image that happening in the toonverse. Like right before he evolves. Faving this.

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Roxj [2011-03-16 05:53:09 +0000 UTC]

really yer work is so cute XD

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Storm137 [2010-10-14 23:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Awww! And the ficlet is just plain adorable!

I love the way it ended. The hoodie! I love chibi Clark and his hoodie.

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jesusmysavior911 [2010-09-30 03:01:56 +0000 UTC]

this rocks so hard that it should crash like a meteor on Culo and earth. i love the story with it too!

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DarkJ3 [2010-09-24 17:02:37 +0000 UTC]

Clark, you can sure be dense sometimes. XD We all know it's Brainy just by the hairstyle!

This is such a cute scene and story! I like the idea that Superman would fly around when he got his powers, and go see other planets. His mom would be mad that he's peeping through windows, though. She raised you better, Clark!

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GohoshiSuruNyan In reply to DarkJ3 [2010-09-24 19:46:44 +0000 UTC]

It's not the hair Clark looks at... ;D /shot

Thank you! I think he might do that too, because who doesn't want to be able to fly around and explore space?

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shadowbitch5 [2010-09-22 18:07:23 +0000 UTC]

WOW. even more amazing. sounds so cute. how can this come out so awesome. the storys great!

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PriestessOfNox [2010-09-22 18:00:15 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS SO CUTE!

I love widdle Brainy sitting at his window and widdle Clark's expression looking at him. I love their outfits and I find the background is cute.

But the best part HAS to be the cute story in the summery; and you say you can't write. I think it's adorable but how did Clark fly to Brainy's time? Oh well suspension of disbelief.

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GohoshiSuruNyan In reply to PriestessOfNox [2010-09-22 18:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ;u;

I CAN'T write. I just like to mess around. xD
I WAS WONDERING THAT TOO. But I have three theories.
1: Time on Colu passes VERY SLOWLY.
2: If Brainy was born organic and then had the robotic parts integrated, that could take a VERY long time.
3: CLARK FLEW THROUGH A TIME WARP SOMEWHERE.
I think the third is more likely.

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PriestessOfNox In reply to GohoshiSuruNyan [2010-09-22 18:17:02 +0000 UTC]

I VOTE FOR #3!

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GohoshiSuruNyan In reply to PriestessOfNox [2010-09-22 18:24:04 +0000 UTC]

#3 IT IS.

Fuu, I hate being in a different time zone from most of the rest of you. I want to see more stuff for C+B week, but I know I'll only be able to see it when I get home from school tomorrow.

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PriestessOfNox In reply to GohoshiSuruNyan [2010-09-22 18:33:31 +0000 UTC]



:< At least you'll still be able to see it later.

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GohoshiSuruNyan In reply to PriestessOfNox [2010-09-22 18:36:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but I have to suffer through History and ICT and Science and Maths tomorrow before I get to go home. ;n;

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PriestessOfNox In reply to GohoshiSuruNyan [2010-09-22 18:47:04 +0000 UTC]

You can do it!

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GohoshiSuruNyan In reply to PriestessOfNox [2010-09-22 18:48:05 +0000 UTC]

I'LL DO IT.
I'll amuse myself in History by drawing tomorrow's entry.

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PriestessOfNox In reply to GohoshiSuruNyan [2010-09-22 19:37:33 +0000 UTC]

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Yu-Gi-Ah [2010-09-22 15:37:32 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWW XD!!!! *read the story* AWWWWWWWWWWW X3!!!! This is soooooo CUTE XD! I love the drawing I get what you were trying to show with the empty room, very cool and I just love the story especially the ending *giggles* And also love how you don't show Brainy's face adds to the fic ^_~! I can't wait to see what you have for tomorrow XD!

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GohoshiSuruNyan In reply to Yu-Gi-Ah [2010-09-22 15:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like/understand it! ;u;
Oh gosh, I should start on tomorrow's picture soon!

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