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Published: 2017-07-15 08:45:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 32210; Favourites: 470; Downloads: 236
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“We don’t take too kindly to meddling snoops,” Mr Newland sneered as he stood in the doorway of his storeroom with his arms crossed. “Did you really think you both could sneak around my reputable establishment, then flutter your eyelids at me if you got caught so I’d let you go?”

    I wanted to point out that Mr Newland’s establishment was far from reputable. Firstly because of the illegal animal smuggling operation he was running from within his pet store. Secondly because any truly reputable establishment wouldn’t have to resort to binding and gagging a pair of young ladies to stop its secrets from being revealed.

    However, the said binding and gagging prevented me from such a defiant comment. All I could reply with was an angry, “Yyyyy ccclll tthhhhsss rrrppptttbbbll?” through the white cloth pulled over my lips and tied off behind my head underneath my brown hair, while writhing against the ropes snugly binding my hands, legs and feet. Across from me my best friend Rachel stamped against the floor of the storeroom with the high heels of her boots as she moaned through her own gag and struggled against similar restraints.

    Mr Newland gave a wheezing, confident laugh as he watched us struggling. “I have a very important deal involving some baby chimps within the next couple of hours, so I can’t deal with you both now. In the meantime I’ll leave you both in here to have some fun. I think some of my old pets that escaped their pens might be hiding away in here. So at least you’ll have some company.”

    “NNNMMMMM!” Rachel protested, but neither she nor myself could prevent Mr Newland from slamming the door shut on us, sealing us in darkness.

    We didn’t have time to reflect on our latest predicament. We had to start struggling and struggle hard. I tugged and twisted against the ropes holding me fast while Rachel did the same, the small storeroom filled with our muffled, frustrated grunts. The space was very enclosed, and we kept on bashing and kicking against each other as we tried liberating out legs. But nothing was coming loose, to our immense frustration.

    Suddenly Rachel heard a scurrying sound from the shelves above her head. What was that? She tried scanning the room for the sign of the creature but saw nothing but darkness. As for me, I couldn’t shake the sensation something creepy was now crawling over my skirt.

    Terrific...now we really had to get out of here…

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So a while back my a good chum of mine vwyler did some pics of my characters. These pics are amazing, bringing a cartoony feel and flair to Sara and my other characters. With vwyler's permission I'm now going to start posting some of these pics on my profile, maybe with a bit of backstory to flesh the scenarios out a bit more.

Here's the first pic done of the girls, featuring on Sara and her best chum Rachel as, once again, they get caught snooping around. They seem to have got the attention of some animal friends too, how disney-esque Let me know if you like this pic and maybe I'll post some more.

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Comments: 31

HannaHilflos [2024-02-12 22:47:31 +0000 UTC]

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swordnshield [2020-05-09 19:47:11 +0000 UTC]

Nice little story!

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swordnshield [2020-05-09 19:40:28 +0000 UTC]

Very cute and sexy damsels!

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Jet948 [2018-03-31 18:13:39 +0000 UTC]

And that's why , my dear girls  , you must always carry taser and pepper spray when snooping around or things like this will happened .

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Golavus In reply to Jet948 [2018-03-31 22:06:53 +0000 UTC]

It would certainly help

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Torqual3D [2017-08-14 03:02:51 +0000 UTC]

In Nancy Drew - The Secret in the Old Attic, she is tied up and left with a Black Widow spider

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Golavus In reply to Torqual3D [2017-08-14 06:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I remember that scene. One of the images which sticks in my head (I think I discussed this before) was an old Nancy Drew book cover I found in my library where she and Bess and stringently chairtied and gagged right there on the front cover. I think it was a rare UK only edition and I've never seen it since...

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Torqual3D In reply to Golavus [2017-08-14 17:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow, please find that cover!

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Golavus In reply to Torqual3D [2017-08-19 14:40:52 +0000 UTC]

I've been trying, but I only ever saw it in that one library. Seems to have disappeared forever. Shame, it was a doozy

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Rockner In reply to Golavus [2017-10-08 03:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Are you referring to this, by any chance?

This is a copy of The Clue in the Velvet Mask. I'm not entirely sure what edition this is, but I'm pretty certain it's from the U.K.

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Golavus In reply to Rockner [2017-10-08 17:48:04 +0000 UTC]

YES! That's it. That's what I've been searching for all these years. I feared it was lost forever I am in your debt sir. Would you mind if I was to share this with the rest of the DA gang, it has played a big role in how I ended up here.

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Rockner In reply to Golavus [2017-10-09 16:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Sure, go ahead. It's not like I own the image or anything. Glad I was able to lay your mind at ease. I, too, was strongly influenced by Nancy Drew and other girl detectives back in my formative years. Now as an adult, I've become something of a Treasure Hunter of girl detective fiction.

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TheRavenousRaven [2017-07-19 22:42:23 +0000 UTC]

Nice picture. Wonder why the spiders are heading towards Sara.

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Golavus In reply to TheRavenousRaven [2017-07-20 22:41:09 +0000 UTC]

Maybe she'll get superpowers if one bites her. That'll show Mr White and Emerald...

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TheRavenousRaven In reply to Golavus [2017-07-20 23:00:53 +0000 UTC]

In fact now that you mention it, it would be cool to see Sara dressed up in a Spider-Man outfit and have her web sling her way around Carrington.

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Golavus In reply to TheRavenousRaven [2017-07-21 20:12:14 +0000 UTC]

No big skyscrapers in Carrington for that I'm afraid...

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TheRavenousRaven In reply to Golavus [2017-07-22 15:21:52 +0000 UTC]

Still it'd be pretty cool to see her dressed like that.

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Vesper2D [2017-07-16 04:32:24 +0000 UTC]

I love the cartoony feel of this illustration! The talent of the artist and their confidence in their style are very evident. I remember seeing some Sara art by them before! It's clean, colorful and very fun.

I'm looking forward to your next uploads.

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Golavus In reply to Vesper2D [2017-07-16 07:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I like it too, it's a fun twist on the usual art of Sara which depicts things a bit more realistically. He's a great artists yes, more coming soon I think.

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Spetsnaz08 [2017-07-15 19:37:20 +0000 UTC]

What an amazing surprise! I remember well Vwyler's pics, the first sara's pictures that's I saw. I love them, especially that of the night club. A beautiful memories 

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Golavus In reply to Spetsnaz08 [2017-07-16 07:34:58 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked the surprise.

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Amy-and-Jill [2017-07-15 14:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Great stuff 

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Golavus In reply to Amy-and-Jill [2017-07-16 07:35:05 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it

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Amy-and-Jill In reply to Golavus [2017-07-16 21:20:54 +0000 UTC]

It's awesome, keep it up

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David-presents [2017-07-15 09:10:04 +0000 UTC]

vwyler is definitely a talented artist.  Nice to read a quick vignette with Sara and Rachel.

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Golavus In reply to David-presents [2017-07-16 07:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Felt like an extra vignette would make it worth uploading at my end.

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Sorodolo In reply to David-presents [2017-07-15 13:48:39 +0000 UTC]

Maybe you could upload my renditions and accompany them with short tales too! 

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David-presents In reply to Sorodolo [2017-07-15 17:27:45 +0000 UTC]

If you're happy that I write silly and innocent stories, then I could probably come up with a few short tales to accompany some of your artwork.  Just send me a note with links for information about your OCs and let's see what happens.

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FascinationJorogumo [2017-07-15 09:01:27 +0000 UTC]

I Love it

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Golavus In reply to FascinationJorogumo [2017-07-16 07:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it

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FascinationJorogumo In reply to Golavus [2017-07-16 09:33:13 +0000 UTC]

Yay

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