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Published: 2014-04-25 06:17:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 802; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 2
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OHMAGODTHATBACKROUND*Dies. Repeatedly*
My lovely mentor Riv suggested the setting and helped me through getting this one done. So once again this is deadicated to her awesomenes (bow to the queen. Congrats if you know us enough to get that joke)
Not much else to say here. Enjoy!
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Oh, I'm officially accepting commissions if your interested
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Like the name suggests, it is a perfect balance of background and a fitting character to match it. For I don't know much about why there seems to be multiple moons or planets of some sort, I am sure that is what it actually looks like in the source you gain it from.
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Huzzah! Queen River approves~
I really like the way you did Cynder's eye here. You're getting better~
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Gives it a mystical feel
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Thats the intent
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actually curious what it would look like with the northern lights also in the background... (sorry, just thinking out loud..)
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XD I'm actually have a arora picture with Kuro planned out.
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Are planets in the background as well? Sorry just always wanted to see that combo for 2-3 years now X )
(as well as shooting stars)
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I'll think about it 
You could also commission me for a pik like that BTW
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Well from what I've read so far I can't finally really anything at bad to say, and... how many side stories are there? o.0
Yeah spreading out my traits is kind of an understatement in my story... there's literally two of me in "EOD", one is my more kinder side, the other is the side that has almost no mercy (Mine you would have to read to fully get, like I said before I'm introducing new concepts [hopefully]). But the thing with my characters is that I want to give them a lot of love... boy I'm going to be hated book 3 and 4...
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It really is better not to insert yourself to much into your work though, trust me.
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Don't worry, my run ends book 4...
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That's still a lot. A lot of people will ignore it just for the self-insert. I don't read them either, actually. There's only been one I can stand, and that was because it was incredibly funny, even if he was a terrible sue.
So, I'll start the picture when you've done LOC1 if that sounds fair. And I'll fully post it when LOC2s about half done
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perhaps, perhaps not, at any case there's a lot of suffering for that character at that point in the saga. And yeah sounds fair, you want me to send the details about the pic now though or later? (Also the picture has nothing to do with the story)
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Alright, also have you read the reviews that I already gave you?
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Yup. I always read them
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Did you find them okay? (If not then I wont waste your time)
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Finding reviews is easy 
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I meant did you like them
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I'd like it if they discussed the chapter more, as I'm planning to rewrite loc1 and it could be helpful, but if you don't want to that's fine
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No problem (And I hope eventually you'll try out "EOD")
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Maybe, I'm not really big on reading Spyro anymore, just writing it
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Well if you do ever feel like trying it out, I hope you enjoy it : )
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Would give you at least 10 dollars for a commission like that, though sorry to say that there would be no Spyro characters or even dragons in the picture XP
So I'm not sure how interested you would be in doing it
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I could do it
Though my parent's are beeing stubborn as heck about paypall at the moment XD How would you feel about "paying" me with reviews on fanfiction? It'd have to be a lot, but your were planning to read LOC anyway, right?
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Yeah I'm still planning on reading it (Been procrastinating with a lot of stuff lately: Reading your story, writing "EOD", finishing my wolfsona, etc). Now with the reviews, would you want one for every chapter? Because some would be detailed more than others (depends if there's a twist in the chapter).
Also just because there aren't dragons in the picture doesn't mean there aren't animals, there are two (just wanted to note that XD)
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I'd prefer it XD That's up for negotiation though.
What animals? I have trouble drawing some, but I'd try
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I'm not the most detailed reviewer, a lot of the time I mainly just give 1-2 sentences tops (blame it on my lack of ability to describes things... getting... slowly better though)
As for animals, they are wolves, 2 of them
one is Krystal an OC of my from "EOD" but she's in her wolf form
the other would be me in my wolf form (if you want an explanation for that I'll tell you in a note)
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Sure I can do that.
If you just say one good and one bad thing I'd be happy. I'd like it if you could do LOC1 and 2, and the sides stories. (Since Before the Legend:Fade Away has such short chaps, you woudn't have to do every one of them) The Kingdom Hearts crossover is up to you, if you know enough about KH or just want to.
Word to the wise, though. Self incerts are usually not a good way to go with stories, they tend to come off verry sue-ish, witch can only really work on occasion. It's better to spread out traits in yourself you want to exsplore. In LOC, Spyro's part of my determination to try and deal with life' ***ing s***, Myst is the part of me that tries to understand and ratinalize and see the world in black in white, Cynder often says the things I wish I could if I weren't so bloody timid, Viriti is a bit of my dealing with being a bit of a social abnormality due to ashburgers, plus in a way me just wishing their was a magical cure for the cancer somebody close to me has. Kaboa is a bit of my common sense.
Travix is just bloody (pun INTENDED) fun to write! XD
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Thanks! Nice to sss you commenting
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I completly read this as Nice ass first DX. I'm tired. Welcome goldie!
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