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GoldenGriffiness — What Happened While I Was Away...?

Published: 2015-06-08 05:27:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 768; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 1
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Description Oh poor Myst... Have her with Bramble or Akiri. She's sure in for a hell of a shock when she gets home...
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MissRiverstyxx [2015-06-08 11:07:48 +0000 UTC]

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Lemme just put my critiquing gloves on...

Damn, this is cool. I really like how Myst looks to be coming out of the darkness; there's a real sense of depth to it. Although, one of her hind toes appears to be glowing oddly, probably a side-effect of having the glow of the skeleton-ape overlapping it. With a little more shadowing, it wouldn't stand out so much.

Myst's expression is so well done, the perspective of her wings is great, and her pose very fitting. a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/h/t… " alt=" " title="thumbsupplz" />

Great work on the skele-ape, too. Drawing skeletons is so...involved. So many tiny bones. You really did a good job here. However, the skull looks more like the skull of a dragon or a little dinosaur (seriously, I can't look at it without thinking it's a dinosaur e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="93" title="XD"/>) than an ape. Don't get me wrong, it's adorable and well-drawn, but it doesn't look very ape-like. Also, the edges where the colour meets the lines are very pixelated when zoomed into full size, and there are areas of misplaced colour between the thin bones of the arms and legs where there shouldn't be any colour.

That aside, this is a really neat picture. I like.

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IronBrony1981 [2015-06-08 21:30:42 +0000 UTC]

I like it!

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GoldenGriffiness In reply to IronBrony1981 [2015-06-09 02:16:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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IronBrony1981 In reply to GoldenGriffiness [2015-06-09 11:32:47 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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GoldenGriffiness [2015-06-08 07:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Hey can I once again but you for a critique? Really happy with this one

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