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Published: 2006-12-21 14:41:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 3187; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 56
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This was something I put some time into, so I would like you to think about it and leave me a comment. Do you like the style? Hate it? Tell me what you think.Related content
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Thanks (its too dated for me, but hey that happens)
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Pretty good! An amusing comic in a small space. The character design reminds me a little of TheBoo on DA -- sorta goth-y and spare. Her lack of a mouth and featureless eyes limit her expression possibilities, but it works OK in this pic. (It IS a her, isn't it? I guess it could be a guy getting BE'd, which would be funny too.) I'd have made the "poof" panel a little larger and more spikey, and put a little more space around it, to help define it better as the transition between the before and after panels. The picture is a little dark overall, which makes details (like shading in her shirt and hair) harder to see. Keep up the good work!
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Oddly enough she does have a mouth, but when it's closed it is never drawn (tends to blend easily with the hair, like the nose[which is only seen from the side]) I think the poof would of been a bit better it went from top to bottom the whole way. I think the problem I have is using a muted color scheme.
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