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Okay, I am very tired sooo I made it one big pic lol.

Worplertinger: first of all I'm not completely up on the bird-like hands... but my job is redlining not designing lol. But, one thing with it is that the arm, if it were a normal skeletal structer should be moved up a tad. (the right arm I mean lol) And, nother small design thing: What really set the W-tingy apart from the jackelope is not only it's wings, but also the fangs. This is a design thing, not a redlining, so I wasn't sure if this was something you'd thought of or not .-.

Next is the Teacup Ein. So adorable, you should be proud I was wondering if the feet, they looked alien and as though they didn't work at all, so what if they were just a bit more puppy-like? Close together so that the 'uselessness' of them is not nearly so apparent? Also... his crotch feathers... look like... they are hiding a crotch or are his many... peeps >.> lol but that will probably look different with shading XD

The cockatrice, looks wonderful, this was much more masculine/scary looking and like I said, I love range of emotion :3 The 'thumb' portion of the wing looks wonderful on the right wing, the left wing is a little like two fingers, so to change that would be nice. slight change in the foot to match each other (broadening near the 'toes' and that big toe being moved down a bit). And I loves him taillllls *.*

Hainu, this was the guy you said you have the most issues with. That left 'hand', maybe if it were more claw like? As though it were just about to take a swipe at someone. And I don't know what it is with you and putting legs akimbo but you enjoy it! lol. If the back left paw were to match the right then it would be facing the same angle (basically the side) I am sorry I suck at feet lol. The horns are... off O.o, just I can't tell if it's asymmetry or just me being over-analytical ._.;;; And finally those wings, this is a design issue more than anything else, are they supposed to be from his mid-section instead of his shoulders or near there? because that's fine, just not the structure I'm used to ^^

The Water Dragon. This is one of my faves, and I think you could tell from the stream's reaction to him, he'll be really well received I loved how you did the feet in this one, those long, elegant fingers X3 But, with those long fingers, imagine trying to 'fist' them, they wouldn't probably bend and fold into your palm as our fingers do, so they would probably show from the sides of his hand. The horn on the left side of his head appears to be missing XD just a little note And, with his right wing, it looks... laggy lol. Imagine if it was mirroring the other wing it wouldn't be right beside it but would be more up by/behind the head (As outlined by the gesture of the blue line lol). This would be especially true since he seems to be turning.

THE QING IS FUCKING PERFECT O.O

This was another fun thing, and I'm glad I was able to get it in before starting work tomorrow XD

Amadoptables and all of these designs are (c) and
The only part that's mine are the redlines

Description
Okay, I am very tired sooo I made it one big pic lol.

Worplertinger: first of all I'm not completely up on the bird-like hands... but my job is redlining not designing lol. But, one thing with it is that the arm, if it were a normal skeletal structer should be moved up a tad. (the right arm I mean lol) And, nother small design thing: What really set the W-tingy apart from the jackelope is not only it's wings, but also the fangs. This is a design thing, not a redlining, so I wasn't sure if this was something you'd thought of or not .-.

Next is the Teacup Ein. So adorable, you should be proud I was wondering if the feet, they looked alien and as though they didn't work at all, so what if they were just a bit more puppy-like? Close together so that the 'uselessness' of them is not nearly so apparent? Also... his crotch feathers... look like... they are hiding a crotch or are his many... peeps >.> lol but that will probably look different with shading XD

The cockatrice, looks wonderful, this was much more masculine/scary looking and like I said, I love range of emotion :3 The 'thumb' portion of the wing looks wonderful on the right wing, the left wing is a little like two fingers, so to change that would be nice. slight change in the foot to match each other (broadening near the 'toes' and that big toe being moved down a bit). And I loves him taillllls *.*

Hainu, this was the guy you said you have the most issues with. That left 'hand', maybe if it were more claw like? As though it were just about to take a swipe at someone. And I don't know what it is with you and putting legs akimbo but you enjoy it! lol. If the back left paw were to match the right then it would be facing the same angle (basically the side) I am sorry I suck at feet lol. The horns are... off O.o, just I can't tell if it's asymmetry or just me being over-analytical ._.;;; And finally those wings, this is a design issue more than anything else, are they supposed to be from his mid-section instead of his shoulders or near there? because that's fine, just not the structure I'm used to ^^

The Water Dragon. This is one of my faves, and I think you could tell from the stream's reaction to him, he'll be really well received I loved how you did the feet in this one, those long, elegant fingers X3 But, with those long fingers, imagine trying to 'fist' them, they wouldn't probably bend and fold into your palm as our fingers do, so they would probably show from the sides of his hand. The horn on the left side of his head appears to be missing XD just a little note And, with his right wing, it looks... laggy lol. Imagine if it was mirroring the other wing it wouldn't be right beside it but would be more up by/behind the head (As outlined by the gesture of the blue line lol). This would be especially true since he seems to be turning.

THE QING IS FUCKING PERFECT O.O

This was another fun thing, and I'm glad I was able to get it in before starting work tomorrow XD

Amadoptables and all of these designs are (c) and
The only part that's mine are the redlines