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GoodStNero — Fluttermac
Published: 2011-08-01 01:20:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 6260; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 91
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[The above work of fiction contains shipping]This was made as a birthday gift for a good friend of mine. I'm actually uploading it by his recommendation.
The title is just a placeholder until I come up with something more interesting. (If I come up with something more interesting)
This is my first attempt at fan-fiction, so harsh criticism is welcome and expected.
This story contains and references characters and settings that belong to Lauren Faust and/or Hasbro.
[UPDATE]
This story now available on Google Docs: [link]
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Comments: 51
Mmhmm. I remember wondering how Big Macintosh got hurt, and I thought it'd be a good focal point for the story.
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this is to hard to read can you make a different version of this DA style
report back to me please!!!
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If you check the description, it links to a google docs version. And if you don't like the google docs version, that version is easily downloaded and changed to another style.
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This story is so wonderful 
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Many thanks for the kind words
It was always my intention to leave this as a one-off, but it seems like a lot of people want some sort of follow-up. I may have to consider it.
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You're welcome dear.
Oh yes, I'd want to see a follow-up of sorts
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Her hair always struck me as more of a very light purple than a shade of pink.
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Are you going to continue it? I love how it is going so far. All the characters are spot on! :3
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I'm glad that you like it.
I actually don't have any solid intentions to continue this one. I'd like to leave it as just a scene. I have thought about maybe doing a follow-up short scene, but it's a relatively low priority.
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I was totally blushing and giggling through the whole thing~ xD
I love your writing style,and this story was purely adorable. <3
As you can probably see by my avatar, I adore this couple. xDDD
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I'm very glad you liked it.
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Many thanks.
I don't think there will be a part two, though. I'd like to leave it where it is. I might be putting out some new stories over winter break, though.
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Absolutely wonderful! The writing is excellent, the characters portrayed marvelously, and I could feel all the emotion Big Mac and Fluttershy felt. You also managed to work it into an exact point in the timeline that was never fully explained.
This receives my highest seal of FanFiction approval! It's Practically Canon!
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Wow, many thanks for the kind words.
I'm very glad that you liked it.
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I wish, that'd be cute.
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Ah. Nope, afraid not. It's completely shipping.
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It's a good one, I think.
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I also like Rarimac.
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It was no problem! Are you planning on writing more?
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I have an ongoing story right now that I'm working on, and a couple of other rough ideas that I may eventually get to. I don't know if I'm going to do any more with this specific story, though. I'd kind of like to leave it where it is.
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It's cute how it's been set so I agree with you there.
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Aw, that was so cute. And it also explained how Big Mac got hurt and could not work for that AppleBuck episode. Good work.
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No problem, but anyway what is not to like about it.
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I'm glad to hear it!
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When I found out I added it to my favorites without remebering to comment I felt awful
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Quite all right.
It's always nice to hear people's thoughts, but I hardly expect a comment for every favourite.
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Ok it just didn't feel right to me
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That's odd. It's a .pdf file being run through Google Docs.
If you have a .pdf reader like Adobe or Sumatra, you could download it and open it from your computer. It's strange that it won't load, though.
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yeah the download worked just fine on the part with the bunnies and the apples but deviantArt text is easier on my eyes. White and black kind of strains
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Ah. I tried to upload it as deviantArt text initially, but it kept getting all kinds of weird HTML stuff in it.
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OMG that was great, was kind of hoping for a little more romance in the last paragraph but I'm satisfied
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I'm very glad that you like it
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This is a brilliant piece of literature. It has very few mistakes(almost none that I can see), spelling or otherwise(and of course we're ignoring the fact that you didn't use apostrophes for everything, but that's alright.). You got the characters spot-on, and the Apple family's accents. I would, however, suggest utilizing a hyphen when cutting something off.
Just as alwa-
CRACK
Sorry to sound like I'm criticizing something so amazing! It really is great!
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Quite alright. Nothing is learned without criticism.
I'm very glad that you liked it so much, though.
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Yeah, but really, you should try writing more often. If they're even as close as good to the quality that was displayed there, I'm sure they'd be amazing.
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Thanks
I have some ideas written down, but it'll probably be a while before I can find the time to write them.
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