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Gorghte — Haiku Spring Break '08
Published: 2008-03-01 21:40:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1334; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 17
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March 18thfar away castles -
my princess dreams of
our future
March 17th
austere no longer
colors return
to the world
March 16th
spring fever
the heat of our passion
melts more than snow
March 15th
rain threatens
unable to dim
rainbows
March 14th
a break in the clouds
kindles the day,
matching my heart
March 13th
time dawdles
knowing I lust after
tomorrow
March 12th
wake in darkness
fighting inertia's pull
morning coffee
March 11th
amorous lovers
bound to each other
by more than rope?
March 11th
fog condensing
strangling
bad drivers
March 10th
next winter
avoid the weather
hibernate
March 9th
satisfaction
at a job well done
and a broken shovel
March 8th
What do I behold?
A fresh scent, sparkling counters
must be spring cleaning
March 7th
trapped -
cold blanket envelopes
everything
March 6th
Yawn!
a gaping mouth
empty
March 5th
crystal daggers
shatter upon impact
look out below!
March 4th
icy roads
hope of spring
slips away
March 3rd
melted snow -
new in ground pool
for my neighbor
March 2nd
bare trees
still at rest
broken clock?
March 1st
snow covered earth
reflects brilliant blue skies
lifts my spirit
Comments: 65
that first one is really beautiful...
it calms me in a way that i cant really describe. thank you for creating it!
are the trees branches supposed to be the hands of the clock?
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Thank you. Glad you like it!
As to the question, not really. I tried to come up with a way to show that they missed their wake up call.
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I'm really fascinated with the color of sky reflected in the shadows of the snow. It teaches me a great deal as an artist. Cool of you to note it in this haiku!
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Actually, you have expressed beautifully the words that I would of like to have said - the snows here are so beautiful when reflecting the blue of the sky - I have been noticing it for the last couple of weeks thinking a haiku should be written about it. You have done a wonderful job!
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it was rainy here in NZ I think...
but the sound was wonderful.
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