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GothaWolf — CoV ch2 p54 - OLD version
Published: 2010-04-17 23:49:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 3237; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 38
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Yesterday I caught a cold and I wasn't able to finish a new page. Maybe it's because day earlier I was at the blood donation campaign, so I was a bit weakened and the weather is very changeable... Dunno.
Anyway... Today I felt a little better and I finished a new page.
Now it's 1:50 am and unless I have a fever again, so I'm going to sleep. Enjoy reading
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2. N: Tak się zastanawiałam... Nie chce cie zawieść, ale wiesz, że nie potrafię walczyć ani rzucać zaklęć, więc dlaczego kupiłeś mi ten pancerz?
3. V: Dlatego, że odsłania dużo twojego ładnego ciała i wyglądasz w tym kusząco. To wszystko.
6. V: Idziesz?
7. N: gdzie idziemy?
V: Do gildii magii.
8: V: Jeden z moich starych przyjaciół ma dług do spłacenia.
Story by hellwarior and GothaWolf
Illustrations by GothaWolf
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Comments: 35
*snicker* Luving the 4th panel
Is 'repay' intentional? Or should it be just 'pay'?
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I think that repay is correct.
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Isn't Valen a damn womanizer? >xD
I really like Neila's expression.
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Yep! He IS womanizer indeed
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Ah ah ah! Nice. Valen, you naughty naughty elf.
Also you lucky lucky elf. You're right just as a Lepricaun.
XDXD
Anyway, good comic.
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I like the houses in the back that much. Everytzhing is drawn so lovely!!^^
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Alright, well...
Panel 2: Neila's speech bubble should say "...but you know I can't fight or cast any spells..."
Panel 8: Valen's speech bubble should say "One of my old friends needs to repay me from the past."
Otherweise, this is great, Gotha. 
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Awsome! Nice expression use
I can't wait for the next one
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I'll try update a new page next week, or maybe earlier.
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wow, ale jej powiedział <"D
czekam na kolejne strony : D
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Postaram sie najpozniej w przyszlym tygodniu nowa strone zamiescic.
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You don't even know how glad I am to hear it 
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Valen mściciel komornik ciąg dalszy. Czekam na zmiane akcji
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Msciciel komornik.... dobre! xD
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It's exciting to see a new page, as always :].
Two small corrections for language:
It should be mages, not mage.
And also, the last sentence is a little awkward...it should be needs, instead of need, but I would recommend "One of my old friends has a debt to repay." or something along those lines, as it is somewhat smoother...
But other than that wonderful work XD...
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Ok, I'll correct it
And thank you! ^-^
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No problem, I'm happy to help (and be a smartass) 
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Neila's face is priceless!!! 
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