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GothaWolf — CoV ch3 p80 - OLD version
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Someone has a big trouble
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PL
2. A: Co się stało?
3. V: Świetnie, została zainfekowana...
V: Dlaczego nie powiedziałaś nam, że cie ugryźli? Teraz będziemy musieli cię zabić.
4. N: Ja... ja przepraszam... proszę, nie krzywdź mnie... Vampiry są silne. Ja mogę... mogę pomóc ci! Proszę nie pozwól mi umrzeć!
V: Wampiry piją krew, a my nie mamy czasu, aby sprzątać bałagan jaki zrobisz podczas pożywiania się.
5. A: Neila może pić krew Ashibi.
V: Mogłaby, ale co z Hemofilią Porfiryczną*? Chcesz być również zainfekowana?
A: Ashibi... Ashibi zna sposób, aby się nie zainfekować, tak tak.
6. V: ...
7: V: Jeśli tego sobie życzysz. Robię to aby cie uszczęśliwić, naiwny mały kocie.
V: Ale jeśli sprawi nam kłopoty, nie będę zwlekał z opuszczeniem jej, a ty zrobisz to samo.
8: V: Nakarm ją i naucz jak się zachowywać odpowiednio.
*Hemofilia Porfiryczna - inaczej wampiryzm lub wampirza choroba.
Story by hellwarior and GothaWolf
Illustrations by GothaWolf
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Comments: 34
"Now we're gonna have to kill you"
HAHAHA! Wow, the amount of dislike he has for her is comical.
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Yeah, that's true.... xD
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It looks odd against her red hair.
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OH... OH... OH MY GOD! VAMPIRE NEILA! She is SO EPIC that is gonna beat Edward Cullen sorryass! XD XD YOU.ARE.PURE.GENIUS!
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1. Sux to b Neila.
2. For once, I can actually see sound reasoning behind Valen's logic, if not a bit harsh.
3. Furball's letting someone who is basically a damn near stranger drink her blood? I want her as a friend!
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cause many ppl did say that on this time some stuff could be illogical
well i did bite myself over this idea, but still i belive that further explanation of stuff around them will get ...more sense or so i hope
and im talkin about 3
but really when i think about it, if you like someone i think it would be first thought that better to give something from yourself then letting a maniac like valen just kill him/her/it
sry for bad english, i suck i know
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stała sie wampirzycą? O.o nieźle, cora bardziej sie wszystko rozkręca : D
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I będzie się rozkręcać dalej ^^
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I hate Twilight and Oblivion vampires walking in daylight...
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she will sparkle in sun ! so don't worry we won't make twilight...
...
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wait a sec...
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Oh (mud)crap!Next time Valen should watch out while making out with Neila.Next destination is Ruins of Yansirramus.Double time people!
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When Valen says "Now we gonna have to kill you" it should be "we're" not "we". I hope this helps some 
None of your language mistakes bother me but I know you ask to be corrected and I just want to help
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BTW, Valen's lines should be more like the following in order to be grammatically correct:
"Why didn't you tell us they bit you?"
"But if she causes trouble, I won't hesitate..."
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Corrected, thanks for pointing
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Poor Neila, her life just keeps getting worse and worse. 0_o Now how on Tamriel I did not make the connection between the vampires and her nightmare, I will never know... I purposefully got myself turned in Oblivion repeatedly. XD
Also, Ashibi is extremely kind, I really like her!
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Yeah, I wish to have a friend like Ashibi ^^
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A jednak się nie przejmuje... prawda, że krew z marmuru źle schodzi, ale bez przesady
I czy aby na pewno minęły trzy dni?
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Mówiłam
I tak, trzy dni minęły, mimo, iż nie pokazywałam akcji dzień po dniu, a mały przeskok zrobiłam.
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Ach tak - trzy dni na dojście do ruin.
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I was afraid it could turn out like this, poor Neila (again)
I kind of like how coldly Valen reacts to Neila's vampirism.
Even if Valen is a bastard, I love his character, he causes so much different reactions from people he's bound to be awesome
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I understand you, usually I have a weakness for "bad" characters from movies, anime, etc. ^^
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