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Published: 2011-07-26 23:37:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 291; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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If only you knew who that person wasIf only you knew what she said to me
If only you knew how she treated me
If only you knew how she victimized
and lied and believed her lies
If only you knew
If only
But you don't
And I am afraid to speak
Afraid to be seen as misrepresenting
Afraid to be seen as attacking
Afraid to be seen as lying
Afraid to be seen as doing all the things she did
Afraid to be seen
Afraid to be
Afraid
But if only you knew
Comments: 2
bitybaby45 [2011-07-27 04:46:28 +0000 UTC]
funny, how little things like that escalate into such big problems. i liked your poem, i liked the repetition especially. ^^ & the backstory just made the poem even more lovable, because now i can understand what you felt while writing it.
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Gothic-Threads In reply to bitybaby45 [2011-07-27 05:37:12 +0000 UTC]
thanks! I'm really glad you can relate, that's why I write. So much of the human experience is more universal than people think.
<3
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