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Gr8gecko β I'll play with your chew toy~
Published: 2017-01-21 20:38:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 356; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Another crit~
I actually love this drawing! The soft coloring and shading are great! The fur has plenty of detail to it and the anatomy is decent! The design for the char itself is adorable and I love the multi green tails!
The only negative things I can say about this is the mouth being on the side of the head (but don't get me wrong, I do that too) and one of the tails. That one tail in the front of all the rest has a weird fused-to-the-butt-of-the-char look, maybe move it down a little bit.
Other than that, this piece is great, keep up the amazing work boi!
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This is fairly good! I like the pose, expression and design! Though I'm not sure where the light source is coming from. it's a little confusing and having a light source is important to know where to play the shading. I can see where a light source probably is, it's just some of the shading placement is a little weird.
Don't be bothered by my 3 star originality, that's my average point, I've just seen quite a few pictures in a similar pose.
What I think you could improve is the limb placement, the hind leg that's fully shaded looks a bit off anatomy wise. I suggest that you place it in similar placement as the other one. The top of head also kind of makes it look like she has a tall and rounded skull. this could be just fluff but to me it gives off a weird skull shape due to the short fur appearance. This next one is a little bit of a nit pick but the stomach area (right after the front legs) doesn't really connect well with the chest.
Other than that this is a pretty well made piece! There's more energy and atmosphere in it which is good, I love how the eye looks and your shading is defiantly improving! I hope this helped c:
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Wait that's what it means XD
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t y :"""""""333
im surprised u weren't concerned about the title B3
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tyyy uwu
Eeh, I feel like my anatomy is getting worse though :/
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No, its getting better '.'
Np! ^^
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Not to me. Look at the leg x"0
and the head, and it's just
eew,,
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Well... i like it... A LOT. :'>
Im also making this mystery character and ill post it very soon, ill tag u so u can see it and if u like it ill make u one.
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:"D
Oh that sounds awesome! I can't wait to see it :"0
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Ty^^ Still needs improvement though
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Np!
I think it looks good but change to YOUR liking!!!!
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RememberΒ
I'm very dirty mindedΒ Β Β Β Β
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-le gasp again - :000000000000000000000000000
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whai would it be a problem? : 0
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lol idk
you kept on saying "le gasp" XD
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-lwe gassssssssssssp- :0
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