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Description By candlelight, clockwork hands come alive.
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TexasDreamer01 [2011-12-24 06:46:17 +0000 UTC]

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GraphiteColours In reply to TexasDreamer01 [2011-12-24 13:42:11 +0000 UTC]

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TexasDreamer01 In reply to GraphiteColours [2011-12-25 02:30:23 +0000 UTC]

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Bakape [2011-01-02 17:01:43 +0000 UTC]

Describes me or any writer out there all too well.

I love the metaphor about mechanical hands, stressed by the generic labour of the day "coming alive" to create. Simply brilliant!

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GraphiteColours In reply to Bakape [2011-01-02 17:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

Interestingly, that wasn't the image I had in mind when writing this, but I really love your interpretation of it! I hadn't thought of it that way, but now that you mention it - I suppose it does fit quite well.

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Bakape In reply to GraphiteColours [2011-01-02 17:35:22 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

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3wyl [2011-01-01 14:38:05 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, I like the imagery and how you're suggesting something that is beyond the physicality of this realm... hell, we could even be stepping onto magical land here. o.O

I like how it's not something as cliche as "midnight" but "candlelight" instead, which suggests that... perhaps the hands don't come "alive" in its literal sense.

I guess you could interpret it in many ways.

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GraphiteColours In reply to 3wyl [2011-01-01 17:32:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

This was inspired by Philip Pullman and Neal Stephenson - two of my favourite authors ever - so I was looking at a quasi-fantastical, historical-sci-fi, steampunk-esque era with a flavour of magical realism, if that even makes sense.

I tried to leave it open to interpretation (as I believe all literature should be...), but I also had a deliberately ambiguous image of the "hands" in my mind as I was writing it: either clockwork hands as in a real clock, or mechanical hands on a puppet...

Thanks again for such a thoughtful comment.

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3wyl In reply to GraphiteColours [2011-01-01 19:21:41 +0000 UTC]

Ah... awesome!

O.o

Just about!

True...

Interesting stuff for sure.

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curlscat [2011-01-01 02:31:38 +0000 UTC]

Cool. I like it.

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GraphiteColours In reply to curlscat [2011-01-01 17:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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