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Time: 1 hour 6 minutesI've gotten significantly faster at vectoring and I've become a lot better than when I first started! I always hated Twilight in Season 1 but Season 2 has made her such a bad-ass. This vector took no time at all and I love how it turned out! The eyes were a blast and I'm really loving her simple hair
Please leave comments and critiques! I want to know what you guys like and what I need to improve on!
More ponies incoming!
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Comments: 27
Flutterflyraptor [2013-01-17 07:46:41 +0000 UTC]
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First for the positive.
1: You've got her colors all nice, and smoothe.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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2: And her lines, are also all nice, and smoothe.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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And Now for the negative.
1: Twilight's cutiemark, looks a little off to me, it seems to be missing a few stars.
2: And Twilight's eyes, while good, also seems to be a little off.
Overall, this is a BEAUTIFUL vector, you've did a great jobe.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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You should be proud of your vector, and I'll surely add it to my Twilight Sparkle favoritese.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Actually, if it's okay with you, can I use this vector?
I'll even credit youe.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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zorkfox [2011-12-08 05:32:15 +0000 UTC]
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You did a bang-up job with her; very very close to the model! Her smile and expression are perky and lively: I feel like she's very interested in (and happy with) whatever is engaging her off-screen. The colors and lines of her mane and tail are particularly good.
There are so many good things that I had a little trouble spotting room for improvement, but I studied her for a while and came up with a few basic changes that would spruce her right up to top form.
β’ The line of her belly should go behind her right hind leg, rather than in front of it.
β’ The outline on her tail seems extra-thick.
β’ The gradient in her eyes is too dark and ends up blending with her pupils.
⒠Also on the subject of her eyes, they seem to be missing the two tiny wedges of lighter color that are usually present in our precious ponies. -e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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You've done a much better job than I could do; I'm barely able to sketch over the course of several hours. That you could do this in an hour is super-impressive to me. Keep up your awesome work, fix those little details, and you'll be in like Flynn!
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J-Webb [2012-02-06 03:39:03 +0000 UTC]
Mind if I use this vector in a wallpaper? Credit will be given.
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13-Drastic-13 [2011-11-09 03:33:32 +0000 UTC]
Wow! This is great! If I be sure to credit you and everything, can I use this in a deviation?
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Wertyla [2011-10-16 02:46:37 +0000 UTC]
Cute!! (By the way, you spelled "divine" incorrectly... That's my nerdy Twilight Sparkle side kicking in...)
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Denryuu [2011-09-28 00:48:26 +0000 UTC]
Twilight's badassery levels vary wildly from one episode to another, so yeah. The fact she gets to be on EVERY episode doesn't help.
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Trildar [2011-09-26 16:14:29 +0000 UTC]
It looks good, and it's a lot faster than anything I've done. The cutie mark could use some work though, the white stars should be more than just speckles. Also the body outline color seems a bit strange, though I suppose that's personal preference.
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Gratlofatic In reply to Trildar [2011-09-26 19:27:40 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I'll edit the body outline and make it a little more her colour. I'll also redo the Cutie Mark right now ^^
Update will come soon
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supermeneer In reply to Gratlofatic [2011-09-27 19:24:38 +0000 UTC]
Because fuck you, that's why. xD
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cheshire-cat16 [2011-09-26 08:26:17 +0000 UTC]
I like it, nicely done. Dont know how to create vectors so cant really critique but it looks just as good as the show to me.
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adamlhumphreys [2011-09-26 05:56:14 +0000 UTC]
I donβt like to criticizeβ¦ please donβt think Iβm a jerk , but I would definitely use vector layers for color so paintbrush leftovers canβt exist.
Of course I still like it!
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PinkiePocalypse [2011-09-26 04:23:21 +0000 UTC]
Awwwwsome, but, dang vectors stealing line art spotlight XD, nah, line art has its own category, just, meh. Love the twi though
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