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Description EDIT: hi i dont write creepypasta anymore or draw this kind of stuff so please dont ask me to and also i probably wont be doing any more and the only reason im not storing this deviation is because of how many people read it. so yeah just keep in mind i wont be doing anything else like this ever.


An illustration for a Pokemon Creepypasta I wrote. See below in the comment if you want to read it.

I had a dream about it, then decided to write it.



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Recently, I have gotten back into the Pokemon series. I have played all the games except for Red/Blue. I was having a hard time getting a copy, none of the local video game stores had any new or used copies and my parents wouldn't allow me to use ebay. But a couple weeks ago, my friend lent me what looked like an old Pokemon Red cartridge. He told me he didn't know if it was a working copy (It didn't look like it was, it's appearance made it look like it had been hammered multiple times). Apparently, his friend's dad had got it at a yard sale somewhere across the country. He got it for a great deal, the owner wanted to get rid of it so badly he only paid a quarter for it.
This didn't really matter to me though, all I wanted to do was play the game. I inserted the cartridge into my gameboy, and turned it on. Thankfully, it flashed to the copyright information. It took me to the starting screen, the game had no save information. This didn't surprise me, the game was so beat up I was just thankful it worked properly. I started a new game, and staying true to the plot, named my character 'Red'. Soon I took my first steps into Pallet Town. Making my way over to Professor Oak's lab, I named my rival Gary to keep it simple (the whole Green and Blue controversy had always confused me) and selected Charmander as my starter.
I made my way over to Viridian forest, all while appreciating the simplicity of the game. Soon, I was initiated into my first real Pokemon battle, easily winning with my Charmander. The screen returned to the normal view of the forest, but instead of it letting me walk away, the bug catcher prompted me into a conversation.
"Now I shall stand, forgotten . . . "
This statement confused me quite a bit. I tried to talk to the Bug Catcher again, but he wouldn't respond. Was this some part of the plot restricted to Pokemon Red? Shaking the idea off, I continued on. Every trainer I met said that after I battled them. Reaching the exit to Viridian Forest, I exited and reentered to attempt to speak to the trainers once again. They did not respond, but something had changed about their position. They were all facing to the right.
I proceeded to my first gym battle, and won with a bit of effort. After the battle, I expected the gym leader to say the same words as all the previous trainers- but instead, a box popped up that read these words:
"Having served my sole purpose, I shall rest in silence."
then surprisingly, he made his way out of the gym. I quickly walked out of the gym after him to try to see where he went. He was nowhere in sight. I went back into the gym, and he wasn't back in there either. In fact, none of the preliminary trainers were there. I rushed toward Viridian Forest, and upon entering I noticed all the trainers within it were gone.
I continued on with the game, receiving eerie responses after every battle. After I had finished an area, they all faced a direction that was usually due east. After I defeated the gym leaders, they gave me the same responses as the first and walked out of the gym. The only time the response varied was when I faced Gary, who replied with 'I still have a purpose."
Soon, I arrived within the vicinity of Lavender town. I entered the city and it started to play the eerie tune, giving the feeling of death creeping around every corner. But as I walked into the town, what I saw was much more frightening. The whole layout of Lavender Town had changed, the whole of the city uprooted and replaced with a horrifying sight. Around the ground there were multiple skulls and bones. In the center or the terror was a giant, leafless tree. On some of the tree's branches, there rested multiple skulls. The sight paired with the theme was overwhelming. I tried to turn down the volume, but the music only grew louder as I turned it down. My gameboy began to shake because of the intensity of the sound waves. I quickly turned it back up. Was this even possible? Recovering from the intensity of the music, I observed the scenery closer. I focused on the tree and noticed that all the branches that had skulls were consecutive on the left side- leaving a few on the right side empty. It was filling up. Deeply disturbed by this thought, all I wanted to do was get away from the town. I tried to quickly walk across the town to the exit, but as I entered the field of skulls Red's steps slowed down gradually- as did the town theme. As I began to reach the exit, his steps started to speed up again.
What had I just seen?

After I beat the trainers on route 10, I exited and returned to see the routine turn of all the trainers. This time they were facing south. Then I realized- they were all facing toward Lavender Town.

Driven by pure curiosity, I continued on. Battling my way through the rest of the game, the trainers continued to disappear, repeating the same lines. Eventually I reached the Elite 4. I beat the first 4 quickly and faced Gary. I defeated him. This time instead of saying what he usually said, these words flashed on the bottom of the screen:
"We will all be waiting in silence."
and he turned and walked out of the room. Confused, I tried to move, but I couldn't. I sat watching.. waiting. Suddenly, another figure emerged and stood in front of Red. The battle initiated. The trainer who had challenged Red to a battle was... Red? On the other side of the battle screen was his own sprite. The battle screen read:
"You have challenged yourself to a battle!"
Automatically, my Red sent out his level 73 Charizard. The opposing Red sent out a level 100 Charizard. Naturally, the level 73 Charizard was defeated. Next, Red sent out a level 68 Raichu. The opposing Red sent out a level 100 Raichu. The other Red had the exact same team as my Red, except more powerful. He wiped out my Red's team.
The screen returned to the view of the two reds standing face to face. Words appeared on the bottom of the screen... Red was talking.
"Your purpose has been served."
"End it all . . . Before you exist alone"
"Forever"
At once, my Red turned and walked out of the room. The screen turned black. It returned, fading in to the image of the modified Lavender Town. But that wasn't what was unsettling... the music had been changed to what sounded like a reverse version of the normal theme, sped up. It was like death was racing toward you.
Red's sprite came walking slowing onto the screen and positioned himself in front of the tree.
"I do not want to be alone forever . . . !!!"
And instantly, the screen cut black and the music ripped itself into an electrifying, bloodcurdling screech.
The screen faded back in a few seconds later, and the normal lavender town theme returned. The focus was centered on the tree. I tried to open up the menu, but it wouldn't respond. Nothing happened when I moved the control pad, either. Then I noticed. There was one more skull than before the screen blacked out, at the center of the tree... and I understood. Red had killed himself.
Soon it all began to unravel... the skulls littered around the tree were the skulls of the trainers I had defeated along the way. The skulls resting upon the branches were the Gym Leaders, Elite 4, and Gary.
I set down my gameboy, my hands shaking in astonishment. They had all killed themselves. But why? Reflecting upon all the lines they had said after Red had defeated them, they all conveyed the idea that they no longer had a purpose.
They are nothing but characters in a game. Trapped. Once they serve their purpose that they were programmed for, they would sit forever for no further reason to exist. No communication, no meaning. If you think deeply about it, it's worse than hell. Either they would be trapped like that forever, or they could die. They picked the best of the worse. Whatever was waiting for them after they died was surely better than what was going to happen.
But why would Red kill himself? He was the main character. He would always have a purpose until... the one controlling him stops playing.
Eventually will come the day when we all are forced to stop everything. Then.. even Red himself will be sentenced to eternal solitude. His sole existence is to embody you- the player- in the world of Pokemon. So when you stop playing... essentially, it is him who is sentencing himself to death. Defeating himself.
I turned the gameboy off and on. It returned to the starting screen, the save file still intact. I opened it and it returned to the view of the skull bearing tree. I restarted the game once more and tried to select 'New Game'. Text flashed on the bottom of the screen:
"The dead do not return."
and took me back to Lavender Town.



Every day after that, I returned to visit the tree with the dead trainers. It seemed stupid, but giving some kind of requiem to them felt right. The unrest stirred up by the game was somehow calmed. I did this for weeks. Then one day... the internal battery died within the game. No matter how much I tried, the game wouldn't turn on.
Red was gone forever.
And when we cannot access our memories...
There, we have truly died.


-Dragons-roar/Kikeri
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This image is the scene where Red goes back to the tree to take his own life.
His own skull will soon be placed upon the outstretching branch.
The skull he is gazing at is Gary's skull.

Probably, he is thinking if it is really the right thing to do. If he really wants to die. And imagining what it would be like to be alone, in darkness, with no source of communication and no capability for his own thoughts. Just to sit there and stare into blackness.
He is going over the memories of his short existence.
He decides the better choice is to take the path of the others.










SHOUT OUT TO RINKY FOR STAYING THERE THE WHOLE TIME ON LIVESTREAM LOL



Yes, I wrote the story AND drew the picture.
Once again, i usually don't do this buuut...
Text in story (c) me.
Art (c) me.
Pokemon (c) Gamefreak







edit: improved bg and red's features. made larger.
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Comments: 175

DevilAngelOfTheSea [2016-07-20 04:51:50 +0000 UTC]

He look just like me now

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NoirSilent [2015-04-03 19:50:37 +0000 UTC]

Pretty cool!

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thesignless75 [2014-08-17 22:32:43 +0000 UTC]

this......is.......beautiful      

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akari-jaganashi [2014-05-02 17:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Very creepy, you set up a good atmosphere and the twist at the end, well done! >.> I could hear Mr Creepy Pasta or CreepsMcPasta reading this

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ZuesKillerProduction [2014-01-25 00:06:46 +0000 UTC]

Acheivement unlocked: nostalgia killer.

+20 gamerscore

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Vegakrikland [2013-10-27 21:04:29 +0000 UTC]

This is so awesome!

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Tsukasa57 [2013-10-05 16:23:47 +0000 UTC]

dig it

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Spacey-Xannabelle [2013-07-29 14:10:22 +0000 UTC]

i'll never see my games the same way ever again..

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Synaesthetic1 [2013-07-22 02:56:34 +0000 UTC]

I might have just gotten creeped out there...

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LovinoLover5042 [2013-07-13 17:38:25 +0000 UTC]

You my good sir are a true artist

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LovinoLover5042 [2013-07-13 17:38:05 +0000 UTC]

That was AMAZING!!!!!!!!*EPIC BROFIST*!!!!!!!!

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Vincent-Valdez [2013-06-07 23:26:21 +0000 UTC]

This was magnificent...a true masterpiece...I'm glad to see that you have such talent in writing.

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killingkilledorbestu [2013-05-24 04:45:33 +0000 UTC]

:3

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DragonTruLoverManiak [2013-03-12 13:33:46 +0000 UTC]

sad. bravo!

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Wolfrunner1999 [2013-02-07 02:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Awww so sad! Great job on it!

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Doom-Kitty7 [2012-12-09 07:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Poor Red D': That is so sad!

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AnUnknowngirlfromJto [2012-10-22 03:41:19 +0000 UTC]

In my opinion, this goes up near Lost Silver on the top Pokemon creepypastas.

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goliegirl [2012-09-26 19:44:53 +0000 UTC]

wow... makes me want to cry n hug Red

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Starcat28 [2012-08-22 01:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this was good!

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Zorua101 [2012-08-03 18:35:29 +0000 UTC]

This fan art is awesome, it even looks 3d. I read a ton of pokemon creepypastas and this was one of them. I even wrote my own, link in signature. But it isn't very scary.

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TreeDVelociraptor [2012-07-30 02:05:58 +0000 UTC]

That pasta is actually pretty good, and far more original than most pokemon creepypastas. Good job.

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Jaytsa [2012-07-20 00:03:20 +0000 UTC]

This was a very... well, creepy, Creepypasta. And the way you drew that scene.... I love it.

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spawndemonik [2012-07-11 03:18:11 +0000 UTC]

That was just great. I've never thought about how the NC's have no point in being there anymore after the game is done with them.. Just a wonderful story, and going straight into my favorites!

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PianoPandah532 [2012-07-11 02:53:39 +0000 UTC]

An amazing creepypasta I must say, it was not entirely bone-chillingly frightening or gory but it had enough creepiness, and sort of sadness to send a chill down my spine. The artwork complements the story perfectly! You've done an astounding job on this!

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Miki-Alazne [2012-06-11 05:37:38 +0000 UTC]

This is so sad... The picture is so well made and gloomy... It reminds me of Glitchy RED

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GRAVEWEAVER In reply to Miki-Alazne [2012-06-12 17:00:41 +0000 UTC]

ive never read that one, but im glad you like this~

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Miki-Alazne In reply to GRAVEWEAVER [2012-06-12 18:35:38 +0000 UTC]

I haven't read it either but I hear alot about it so I got the gif of it~ Also your work is awesome!

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PsychoSheepParty [2012-06-04 22:10:39 +0000 UTC]

this actually has a point. Those poor pixel people really don't serve a purpose after you've battled them....poor guys

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BlueMoonScorpio [2012-06-02 20:27:46 +0000 UTC]

I really like how this drawing is done.

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GRAVEWEAVER In reply to BlueMoonScorpio [2012-06-12 17:01:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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BlueMoonScorpio In reply to GRAVEWEAVER [2012-07-19 23:55:17 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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VioletLobo [2012-06-01 23:39:20 +0000 UTC]

wow one of the best creepypastas i've read so far

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Neddea [2012-05-29 22:41:23 +0000 UTC]

I
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THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS!!! Great, great story! And the drawing, as well... Keep on it!

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amitoxi [2012-04-27 20:47:33 +0000 UTC]

Interesting dream you had there, I like how you were able to convey it neatly into a creepypasta.

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codejunkie1 [2012-04-03 16:39:19 +0000 UTC]

I have been reading creepypastas for a few months, but 2 questions always circled around my head.
1) What exactly are creepypastas? I think they are horror-style fan-fics revolving around Pokemon Red, Blue, and Yellow. Can you reassure me that it's right?
2) Why are they even called creepypastas? It is one of the STRANGEST names for something I've heard in a LOOOOONG time.

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GRAVEWEAVER In reply to codejunkie1 [2012-04-03 19:58:37 +0000 UTC]

1. Creepypastas are stories that twist and create horror stories about anything, not just pokemon. They have creepypastas about other videogames, music, tv shows, or just creepy stories about no theme in particular.
2. They are called creepypastas because they are creepy, and you copy/paste them to your friends- 'pasta' is slang for paste.

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codejunkie1 In reply to GRAVEWEAVER [2012-04-05 21:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Honestly, I just post creepypastas onto the wiki. Sadly, I haven't made one yet and my friend who wrote down the story idea I told him hasn't responded yet.

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NekohimeSekushi [2012-02-25 00:06:17 +0000 UTC]

o_o

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vsyoravno [2012-02-15 22:11:13 +0000 UTC]

I've recently gotten interested in creepypastas so I've read tons of them by now, but this is one of the few I can't get out of my head. Maybe because it's something (I think) occurs to many people when we get so into a game. Especially in the case of RBY when, once you beat the Elite 4, there was literally nothing else to do - I remember being nine years old going back and talking to everyone after that, and it was just empty and depressing because they were like ghosts frozen there forever as if it was the moment you first interacted with them.

I really like this picture because it captures the atmosphere so well. Something about that foggy grey. It's not scary, even with skulls everywhere - it looks very calm and peaceful, and Red looks like he's calmly accepting what he must do. /long-winded comment

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BubbleBats [2011-12-28 06:53:17 +0000 UTC]

It's ok i never stop playing my games my his stories will continue cuz even if i defeat the gaem i always keep playing for more and more pokemon and hidden missions but even if the game is fully complete i will start a new and replay because i love them so much ^^

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BlueShadesComics [2011-12-28 06:06:09 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Nintendo should make just one or two copies of their next Pokemon game like this to fuck with people. I'm a terrible person

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BibloManiacz [2011-12-26 02:42:36 +0000 UTC]

I cannot describe this in any way, other then; Amazingly awesome.

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nimbusphoenix [2011-12-21 02:15:23 +0000 UTC]

So sad. So sad...
Great creepypasta though

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8oku-no-vriska [2011-11-21 05:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I love this! :') Is it alright with you that I used this as my Tumblr background?

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GRAVEWEAVER In reply to 8oku-no-vriska [2011-11-21 05:54:08 +0000 UTC]

of course its okay ^^

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8oku-no-vriska In reply to GRAVEWEAVER [2011-11-21 05:59:33 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thanks~ ^^

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shinedust [2011-11-02 20:44:21 +0000 UTC]

I think I would like a different ending, not that he died, that's fine...it's creepypasta after all, but something other than, "the game character realized they are game characters and have decided to kill themselves," every pokemon creepypasta ends that way. Mind you, I think you by far have one of the more polished stories here. The flow is very nice, details were conveyed very well...I mean I'm 25 and even though I've only ever played Yellow and Silver, your story brought up so many images for me from my own game that I practically was able to walk through the levels with your story. It's really well written and I love the image that goes with it. I know you said you're not writing these stories anymore, but I hope you're still writing, and still drawing for that matter.

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0-CHROME [2011-10-30 01:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Dude... I've read creepy videogame story's but this... it's by far the most horrifying, gut wrenching, brain-burning story i've ever read, BY FAR. And just the sheer soul someone could put in a videogame story is amazing...
The only reason NOT to fav this, is that the image deeply disturbs, and mortifies me.
WELL DONE. JUST... AMAZING.

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Shadowrunner240 [2011-10-24 18:29:56 +0000 UTC]

You know... the story broke my heart. Just... awful.

And the picture terrified me, but the story completely broke my heart. ;_;

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JenniferTheDark [2011-10-20 23:40:08 +0000 UTC]

This picture/story broke my heart more than scared me, but I love the emotion in this piece <3

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