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GRAVEWEAVER β€” Loss of Purpose Creepypasta

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Description EDIT: hi i dont write creepypasta anymore or draw this kind of stuff so please dont ask me to and also i probably wont be doing any more and the only reason im not storing this deviation is because of how many people read it. so yeah just keep in mind i wont be doing anything else like this ever.


An illustration for a Pokemon Creepypasta I wrote. See below in the comment if you want to read it.

I had a dream about it, then decided to write it.



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Recently, I have gotten back into the Pokemon series. I have played all the games except for Red/Blue. I was having a hard time getting a copy, none of the local video game stores had any new or used copies and my parents wouldn't allow me to use ebay. But a couple weeks ago, my friend lent me what looked like an old Pokemon Red cartridge. He told me he didn't know if it was a working copy (It didn't look like it was, it's appearance made it look like it had been hammered multiple times). Apparently, his friend's dad had got it at a yard sale somewhere across the country. He got it for a great deal, the owner wanted to get rid of it so badly he only paid a quarter for it.
This didn't really matter to me though, all I wanted to do was play the game. I inserted the cartridge into my gameboy, and turned it on. Thankfully, it flashed to the copyright information. It took me to the starting screen, the game had no save information. This didn't surprise me, the game was so beat up I was just thankful it worked properly. I started a new game, and staying true to the plot, named my character 'Red'. Soon I took my first steps into Pallet Town. Making my way over to Professor Oak's lab, I named my rival Gary to keep it simple (the whole Green and Blue controversy had always confused me) and selected Charmander as my starter.
I made my way over to Viridian forest, all while appreciating the simplicity of the game. Soon, I was initiated into my first real Pokemon battle, easily winning with my Charmander. The screen returned to the normal view of the forest, but instead of it letting me walk away, the bug catcher prompted me into a conversation.
"Now I shall stand, forgotten . . . "
This statement confused me quite a bit. I tried to talk to the Bug Catcher again, but he wouldn't respond. Was this some part of the plot restricted to Pokemon Red? Shaking the idea off, I continued on. Every trainer I met said that after I battled them. Reaching the exit to Viridian Forest, I exited and reentered to attempt to speak to the trainers once again. They did not respond, but something had changed about their position. They were all facing to the right.
I proceeded to my first gym battle, and won with a bit of effort. After the battle, I expected the gym leader to say the same words as all the previous trainers- but instead, a box popped up that read these words:
"Having served my sole purpose, I shall rest in silence."
then surprisingly, he made his way out of the gym. I quickly walked out of the gym after him to try to see where he went. He was nowhere in sight. I went back into the gym, and he wasn't back in there either. In fact, none of the preliminary trainers were there. I rushed toward Viridian Forest, and upon entering I noticed all the trainers within it were gone.
I continued on with the game, receiving eerie responses after every battle. After I had finished an area, they all faced a direction that was usually due east. After I defeated the gym leaders, they gave me the same responses as the first and walked out of the gym. The only time the response varied was when I faced Gary, who replied with 'I still have a purpose."
Soon, I arrived within the vicinity of Lavender town. I entered the city and it started to play the eerie tune, giving the feeling of death creeping around every corner. But as I walked into the town, what I saw was much more frightening. The whole layout of Lavender Town had changed, the whole of the city uprooted and replaced with a horrifying sight. Around the ground there were multiple skulls and bones. In the center or the terror was a giant, leafless tree. On some of the tree's branches, there rested multiple skulls. The sight paired with the theme was overwhelming. I tried to turn down the volume, but the music only grew louder as I turned it down. My gameboy began to shake because of the intensity of the sound waves. I quickly turned it back up. Was this even possible? Recovering from the intensity of the music, I observed the scenery closer. I focused on the tree and noticed that all the branches that had skulls were consecutive on the left side- leaving a few on the right side empty. It was filling up. Deeply disturbed by this thought, all I wanted to do was get away from the town. I tried to quickly walk across the town to the exit, but as I entered the field of skulls Red's steps slowed down gradually- as did the town theme. As I began to reach the exit, his steps started to speed up again.
What had I just seen?

After I beat the trainers on route 10, I exited and returned to see the routine turn of all the trainers. This time they were facing south. Then I realized- they were all facing toward Lavender Town.

Driven by pure curiosity, I continued on. Battling my way through the rest of the game, the trainers continued to disappear, repeating the same lines. Eventually I reached the Elite 4. I beat the first 4 quickly and faced Gary. I defeated him. This time instead of saying what he usually said, these words flashed on the bottom of the screen:
"We will all be waiting in silence."
and he turned and walked out of the room. Confused, I tried to move, but I couldn't. I sat watching.. waiting. Suddenly, another figure emerged and stood in front of Red. The battle initiated. The trainer who had challenged Red to a battle was... Red? On the other side of the battle screen was his own sprite. The battle screen read:
"You have challenged yourself to a battle!"
Automatically, my Red sent out his level 73 Charizard. The opposing Red sent out a level 100 Charizard. Naturally, the level 73 Charizard was defeated. Next, Red sent out a level 68 Raichu. The opposing Red sent out a level 100 Raichu. The other Red had the exact same team as my Red, except more powerful. He wiped out my Red's team.
The screen returned to the view of the two reds standing face to face. Words appeared on the bottom of the screen... Red was talking.
"Your purpose has been served."
"End it all . . . Before you exist alone"
"Forever"
At once, my Red turned and walked out of the room. The screen turned black. It returned, fading in to the image of the modified Lavender Town. But that wasn't what was unsettling... the music had been changed to what sounded like a reverse version of the normal theme, sped up. It was like death was racing toward you.
Red's sprite came walking slowing onto the screen and positioned himself in front of the tree.
"I do not want to be alone forever . . . !!!"
And instantly, the screen cut black and the music ripped itself into an electrifying, bloodcurdling screech.
The screen faded back in a few seconds later, and the normal lavender town theme returned. The focus was centered on the tree. I tried to open up the menu, but it wouldn't respond. Nothing happened when I moved the control pad, either. Then I noticed. There was one more skull than before the screen blacked out, at the center of the tree... and I understood. Red had killed himself.
Soon it all began to unravel... the skulls littered around the tree were the skulls of the trainers I had defeated along the way. The skulls resting upon the branches were the Gym Leaders, Elite 4, and Gary.
I set down my gameboy, my hands shaking in astonishment. They had all killed themselves. But why? Reflecting upon all the lines they had said after Red had defeated them, they all conveyed the idea that they no longer had a purpose.
They are nothing but characters in a game. Trapped. Once they serve their purpose that they were programmed for, they would sit forever for no further reason to exist. No communication, no meaning. If you think deeply about it, it's worse than hell. Either they would be trapped like that forever, or they could die. They picked the best of the worse. Whatever was waiting for them after they died was surely better than what was going to happen.
But why would Red kill himself? He was the main character. He would always have a purpose until... the one controlling him stops playing.
Eventually will come the day when we all are forced to stop everything. Then.. even Red himself will be sentenced to eternal solitude. His sole existence is to embody you- the player- in the world of Pokemon. So when you stop playing... essentially, it is him who is sentencing himself to death. Defeating himself.
I turned the gameboy off and on. It returned to the starting screen, the save file still intact. I opened it and it returned to the view of the skull bearing tree. I restarted the game once more and tried to select 'New Game'. Text flashed on the bottom of the screen:
"The dead do not return."
and took me back to Lavender Town.



Every day after that, I returned to visit the tree with the dead trainers. It seemed stupid, but giving some kind of requiem to them felt right. The unrest stirred up by the game was somehow calmed. I did this for weeks. Then one day... the internal battery died within the game. No matter how much I tried, the game wouldn't turn on.
Red was gone forever.
And when we cannot access our memories...
There, we have truly died.


-Dragons-roar/Kikeri
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This image is the scene where Red goes back to the tree to take his own life.
His own skull will soon be placed upon the outstretching branch.
The skull he is gazing at is Gary's skull.

Probably, he is thinking if it is really the right thing to do. If he really wants to die. And imagining what it would be like to be alone, in darkness, with no source of communication and no capability for his own thoughts. Just to sit there and stare into blackness.
He is going over the memories of his short existence.
He decides the better choice is to take the path of the others.










SHOUT OUT TO RINKY FOR STAYING THERE THE WHOLE TIME ON LIVESTREAM LOL



Yes, I wrote the story AND drew the picture.
Once again, i usually don't do this buuut...
Text in story (c) me.
Art (c) me.
Pokemon (c) Gamefreak







edit: improved bg and red's features. made larger.
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Comments: 175

corpusbonds [2011-10-17 15:31:37 +0000 UTC]

This didn't scare me at all.
But it did make me think. I guess, it makes you think. I guess it's weird, I never thought about it that way. I know it's a game, but I feel sort of bad..

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RGB64 [2011-09-17 17:28:54 +0000 UTC]

THE THIS CAT
THE IS CAT
THE VERY CAT
THE ... CAT
THE INTERESTING CAT
now read it w/o reading the & cat

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InvaderMouse [2011-09-13 02:57:46 +0000 UTC]

I love how over half of all creepypastas are Pokemon related.

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Reduxist [2011-09-04 02:05:11 +0000 UTC]

Honestly, this idea scares me. Not only does the technology grows sentinent, but it gains a futilistic/ nihilistic philosophy. Even if someone forgets about some characters, someone else will learn about them in turn. Others will continue to cherish them. The way I see it, the only way they would live forever alone is if someone acknowleged their existence and didn't care about them. That being said, if every human being just died out... they technically wouldn't exist.

... And there's my two cents!
Sorry if I was going a bit too much over my head!

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DeathLee28 [2011-08-30 01:55:18 +0000 UTC]

dark...

I LOVE IT

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Chrome-The-Uxie [2011-08-22 20:16:11 +0000 UTC]

you need to make more!

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JacobHein [2011-07-31 05:33:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow that's impressive, good sir.

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Moonlightscene [2011-07-28 16:13:53 +0000 UTC]

that
was
AMAZING
fksajfkjsdkdldfd

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Jambolayo [2011-07-26 20:44:30 +0000 UTC]

You dreamt all that? Bloody hell, you have an amazing brain.

But you're right. I never thought of the trainers or Gym Leaders. Not even the Elite Four. I just forgot about them...

They made the right choice though, in my opinion. Sad an option as it was, who would truly want to spend the rest of their lives doing nothing but standing in the same position?

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GRAVEWEAVER In reply to Jambolayo [2011-07-27 03:28:20 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you. Well my dream went vaguely like that, I added most of the details in after the thought to make it interesting.
Also thank you for your insight on the story, I like hearing what other people think about the trainer's situation.

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Jambolayo In reply to GRAVEWEAVER [2011-07-27 14:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem! I love reading meaningful Creepypasta. Gives you something to think about.

It's an amazing concept though! Will you write more in future, even if it isn't dream-inspired? I'd love to read something powerful like this again.

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GRAVEWEAVER In reply to Jambolayo [2011-07-28 07:28:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm putting most of my ideas into original work now, but I might write another creepypasta sometime if a good concept hits me

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tinyemi [2011-07-18 04:37:24 +0000 UTC]

wow, amazing~ You gave my stomach a ride :>

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Jhuyu26 [2011-07-11 02:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Huh. Thanks to N in Gen. V, I feel bad every time I catch a PokΓ©mon I'm never going to use, but never have I considered the trainers... I'll be honest... To this day I have to keep telling myself that "it's just a block of data." No matter how many times I say it, I still feel bad...

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Deidara9523 [2011-06-21 04:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Really made me think. I loved it

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ShawtyLongLegz [2011-06-14 21:11:17 +0000 UTC]

Woah, this story is just...woah. Don't worry Red! I won't let you die! *pulls out gameboy*

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BunbunDango [2011-06-14 17:18:45 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting. I like it.

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happy-chick [2011-06-11 04:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Your story makes me want a hug

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star-girl-twenty-one [2011-06-04 15:45:24 +0000 UTC]

Whoa. I can't believe you had a dream like this! This is totally crazy! But, it speaks to me, in a creepy way. The trainers who died, and all that, was creepy. The Lavender Town thing, was very VERY creepy. What they said, was even creepier. But over all, it was a pretty scary, kick ass story!! Thanks for the story, and GREAT drawing! Red looks hot, and Asian, which makes him hotter lol

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PuppyAkamaru [2011-06-03 03:04:47 +0000 UTC]

dude, this is a dream? Freaky. that's like... super scary. it made ME jittery while reading it!

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Before-Color [2011-06-03 01:03:34 +0000 UTC]

This make me want to play my games forever and ever and ever...ever...ever....ever...........ver.....er....never..

But honestly I always felt this way. I played my emerald game again and again. Restarting over and over. It was my first pokemon game and I hated playing it after the millionth time but I kept doing it...I.. didn't want to feel the guilt maybe. This speaks to me and that's really creepy. I finally trashed that game. Thank God. I felt trapped xD

Now I'm worried about my pokemon Soulsilver and Black. D:

Anyway, great creepypasta! -waits for the nightmares xD-

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Lazyhog [2011-06-02 19:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Well...when I read it was the typical "cartridge creepypasta" I lost interest on it...I don't really want to offense you...eh, don't get me wrong

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GRAVEWEAVER In reply to Lazyhog [2011-06-02 22:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Well what else could it be. There isn't any other way to make a game related creepypasta other than having the cartridge switched. Having an original cartridge just do weird-ass things isn't realistic nor does it make any sense. Not only that, but no one would even slightly believe it.
That's probably why it's typical, because it's the most logical option to start off a creepypasta.

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Lazyhog In reply to GRAVEWEAVER [2011-06-03 17:49:52 +0000 UTC]

I've seen a lot of good pokΓ©mon creepypastas that aren't the typical "I got a cursed cartridge from somebody and bad things happened" but I guess you are right.

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ghost-the-wolf [2011-05-30 06:59:22 +0000 UTC]

THAT...WAS...EPIC

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Magma-Whip In reply to ??? [2011-05-19 21:02:25 +0000 UTC]

You made a very good job with your story, there is one mistake though...Red wouldnΒ΄t be alone forever, since there are many NPCΒ΄s on the game who arenΒ΄t trainers, possibly the only reason of why he killed himself would be cause he had no longer any purpose.
But keep up the good work anyway

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GRAVEWEAVER In reply to Magma-Whip [2011-05-19 23:26:49 +0000 UTC]

he cant go up and interact with those npcs himself.

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Magma-Whip In reply to GRAVEWEAVER [2011-05-20 02:14:28 +0000 UTC]

oh, good point.

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zeldo-kun [2011-05-13 00:57:02 +0000 UTC]

that was one hell of a story D:

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fakedeviantID In reply to ??? [2011-05-09 04:04:48 +0000 UTC]

It makes you think everything has a soul. Incredibly well done.

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Doylehi In reply to ??? [2011-04-21 12:08:22 +0000 UTC]

BEST POKEMON CREEPYPASTA OUT THERE. Now, excuse me as I go play my old emerald version.

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GRAVEWEAVER In reply to Doylehi [2011-04-22 23:54:47 +0000 UTC]

awww thank you! im glad you like it

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ZackFaire13 [2011-04-07 17:27:03 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous art!

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Ichi887 [2011-03-30 07:37:47 +0000 UTC]

I Love This Picture

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ChibiDomino [2011-03-30 02:49:39 +0000 UTC]

h-hey. i don't expect a quite response to this.
but im making a creepypasta!red RP account for LJ, mind if I use this for an icon?

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GRAVEWEAVER In reply to ChibiDomino [2011-03-30 06:22:54 +0000 UTC]

sure thats fine

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LugubriousSNAIL In reply to ??? [2011-03-29 04:01:17 +0000 UTC]

This is some delicious pasta. :3

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PokemonTrainerHaley [2011-03-11 23:43:41 +0000 UTC]

Gosh, going to sound like a big nerd here but:

What you're saying is true in the story, after you beat a trainer, they just sit there, nothing for you to do. But when you finish, the main hero is like them, left there to do nothing, purpose done.

Now I feel bad for beating a game. DX But, I send my teams other to my newer games, so it lives on. -cough-nerdtimeover-


I LOVE the story, and the art work is WONDERFUL! 8D

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Thejewelkitten [2011-03-07 01:13:39 +0000 UTC]

WTF, If I look at the tree IT LOOKS LIKE IT MOOVES. D:

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Snowpelt-IceClan [2011-02-08 03:16:54 +0000 UTC]

Great pasta AND drawing!

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Elsdrake [2011-01-30 22:14:47 +0000 UTC]

i would play the game

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BrookRiver [2011-01-29 22:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Is it odd if I instantly knew what the characters meant by "My purpose has been served" when I first read this creepypasta?

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Jester-ne [2011-01-23 03:00:36 +0000 UTC]

DON'T BUY GAMEBOY POKEMON GAMES CROSS-COUNTRY WHEN THE GUY SELLS IT TO YOU FOR JUST A QUARTER, DAMMIT.
A quarter. For a POKEMON game.
At least charge 10 bucks, come on man.

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MrStubenhocker [2011-01-16 18:47:39 +0000 UTC]

I cannot ever get enough of Pokemon creepypastas. Ever.

Gorgeous picture, by the way.

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DrMopZodiac In reply to ??? [2011-01-13 05:47:19 +0000 UTC]

You should send that to gamefreak. I can see that as an advertising campaign to KEEP PLAYING DAMMIT

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riccardodirigo In reply to ??? [2011-01-10 16:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh geez Dragon
Creepypastas don't usually bother me at all but..
This one kind of made me shudder a little.

It's definately well detailed in the sense of providing a nice, scary storyline to it.

And your picture certainly does paint the whole thing out for me.
The depth to it is what really makes it creepy <3

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ViviRouce [2011-01-02 03:29:47 +0000 UTC]

This is
1:sad
2:true
3:Amazing

Why is it that pokemon.... even if the stories are fake, and written to scare or entertain...
It has a meaning that really talks to people.... It always talks, you just have to listen.....
Pokemon has a deeper meaning...

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eadricson [2011-01-01 23:38:05 +0000 UTC]

This is wondefully disturbing. Thank you for sharing it.

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eadricson In reply to eadricson [2011-01-01 23:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Sorry about the double post. My comp. is acting weird and it said that my post wasn't posted.

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eadricson [2011-01-01 23:37:31 +0000 UTC]

This is wondefully disturbing. Thank you for sharing it.

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