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Published: 2011-03-13 17:41:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 6055; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Description Detective Conan Doujinshi.
Mermaid-like Love Page 25 - The End

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Mayonaka-no-Sasayaki [2017-01-14 07:58:37 +0000 UTC]

This was so amazing and beautiful and heartbreaking and....(bawls 😭) I want them to be canon but I know they won't and it hurts and you created such a remarkable doujinshi! I love it so much! I really hope to see more of CoAi/ShinShi from you! Thank you so much for this!

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Pongponggo [2016-08-30 17:02:07 +0000 UTC]

So sad ToT

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mimimioM [2015-07-25 22:51:00 +0000 UTC]

Awww I like it so much β™‘β™‘ you are an ai chan fan like me .It's touch my heart with the sad feeling of haibara . It makes me very sad and I wanted cry β™‘β™‘ can ask you? . Can I publish this doujins in Dctp (detective conan translation project?? I will write your name and a link to your deviantart . I think you will have more of views β™‘β™‘

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mimimioM In reply to mimimioM [2015-12-05 11:13:59 +0000 UTC]

Awwww you are so kind <3 I was waiting for your reply thank you ❣ (I know i m really late but I forget my password. I ll post it today if it's okay)

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grayfirefly In reply to mimimioM [2015-07-30 04:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm really happy that you liked this story! Β And sure, please go ahead, you can post it in Dctp. Β 

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D34D4RT1ST [2015-01-22 06:38:12 +0000 UTC]

This story was beautifully told and sadly is probably the most canon Doujinshi I've read of Conan X Ai. I've always felt bad for Haibara. Compared to the cast of Detective Conan, she's seen some pretty grim things. I shipped Ai and Conan pretty hard thanks to that. I don't want her to have a sad ending.

More on the note of your Doujinshi. The art was pretty fantastic. You kept with a style and didn't stray from it. The art was very similar to the original art of the Conan Manga with a kind of shoujo manga style added to it. The characters personalities seems just like they are in the Manga. I dislike it when in fan fictions characters say or do things that they'd never do in the original source. All in all, you did a great job making this.Β 

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xEvangeliine [2012-11-16 18:34:27 +0000 UTC]

Awww this is soooooo sad But a beautiful story with great pictures!

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grayfirefly In reply to xEvangeliine [2012-11-18 23:16:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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MinniWitch [2012-03-26 15:37:22 +0000 UTC]

I really like your story
(sorry for not could say more, I'm bad at english ^^")

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SeichiKyoyama [2012-01-13 13:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Those words. . . sounds really like Haibara. Love it, you should do more

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grayfirefly In reply to SeichiKyoyama [2012-01-16 04:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I'll try. x'D

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xiai96 [2011-06-23 02:11:00 +0000 UTC]

I like it,including the sad ending.
It's the best doujinshi I've ever seen.
And I love AiCon very much!
I saw it on chinese Baidu fansites the first time~

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xiai96 [2011-06-23 02:10:27 +0000 UTC]

I like it,including the sad ending.
It's the best doujinshi I've ever seen.
And I love AiCon very much!
I saw it on chinese Baidu fansites the first time~

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grayfirefly In reply to xiai96 [2011-06-25 23:41:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.=') Oh, really? Can you send me the link please?

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xiai96 In reply to grayfirefly [2011-07-30 03:48:59 +0000 UTC]

[link]
-w-

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blackrainbow4869 [2011-06-19 07:37:59 +0000 UTC]

it was really a sad ending
anyway, great doujinshi!

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grayfirefly In reply to blackrainbow4869 [2011-06-20 00:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. =']

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LonelyHoshi [2011-04-26 01:27:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I love how you made Ai's words sound. It sounds so professional too! I'd love to see another doujin.
Also a question. Do you write/draw them all then upload or do you upload a page as soon as you're done?

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grayfirefly In reply to LonelyHoshi [2011-04-26 04:05:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. =']

Oh, I drew all of the pics then uploaded them the same day. Because I often wanted to change the story/ the conversations between the characters/ certain scenes so I found myself coming back to redraw one page many times. That's why it's impossible for me to upload a page as soon as I was done. >.<"

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Sockmonsta [2011-04-22 11:06:48 +0000 UTC]

That was beautiful!
You really are capturing exactly what Ai's untold thoughts are~
Magic~

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grayfirefly In reply to Sockmonsta [2011-04-24 02:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. =']

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Sockmonsta In reply to grayfirefly [2011-04-24 03:36:09 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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doicao [2011-04-10 10:27:01 +0000 UTC]

May i share this on chinese fansites?I will credit you guys of course.

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grayfirefly In reply to doicao [2011-04-17 00:15:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh, ok. In fact, I'm really flattered that you like my works. =')

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doicao In reply to grayfirefly [2011-04-17 05:08:30 +0000 UTC]

Because they are too beautiful!

Baidu's friends also like you beautiful picture, are looking forward to your new work =v=

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grayfirefly In reply to doicao [2011-04-20 02:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. It's really nice of you to say that.

And I'm very glad that they like my works. =']

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mysticswordsman21 [2011-04-08 11:11:54 +0000 UTC]

O M F G


I m your fan. I m totally your fan.
You re my idol.

I want to draw CoAi doujinshi too, but my skill is too weak.
Orz

About the story though, I expected slight nice scene. XD
Maybe, like.. Conan noticed Haibara's sad thought,
He smile to her and says something like, at least, "Are you okay Haibara?"

XD XD

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grayfirefly In reply to mysticswordsman21 [2011-04-10 03:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Lol, no way, you're kidding, right?
Your drawing and coloring skills, especially coloring, are so much better than mine, seriously. >_<"

I believe you can draw CoAi doujinshi if you want to.

I think Ai is good at hiding her feelings so if she doesn't want Conan to know what she's feeling or thinking, I doubt he can notice it. But your idea is nice anyway. x']

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mysticswordsman21 In reply to grayfirefly [2011-04-10 06:25:03 +0000 UTC]

I m not kidding -.-

You know, to "draw a manga" and to "paint an artwork", they re clearly different.
Each needs different technique mastery.

Drawing manga requires:
- fast drawing
- high accuracy (less anatomy mistakes)
- deep and wide knowledge about expressions and anatomy
- imagination n creativity to arrange the pages, to generate concept on each page
- patience to draw many scenes

I can do an artwork quite well, but I can't draw a manga yet >.>
If I am to make one, it ll take months or years to finish.. lolz

Come onn,, let the little detective have some sense XD

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grayfirefly In reply to mysticswordsman21 [2011-04-20 03:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Woh, I never thought so much about the differences between them. >n<"

Thank you so much for your kind words. I love your artworks and it's really a honor that you liked my story. =']

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mysticswordsman21 In reply to grayfirefly [2011-04-20 08:35:55 +0000 UTC]

yep they re really different
no, it s such honor that you like my artworks >u<

you should make more Conan x Ai doujins!!

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vikachew [2011-03-17 05:21:18 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful.. The story flows smoothly as Ai's feeling is revealed in perfect timing, so i (reader) can enjoy/feel the same way.
The drawing is awesome, as always. The details of your drawing is almost professional-like. Great, great job

However, although this kind of angst (may i say?) has been always be the general idea of one-sided love b/w Conan and Ai, I still think that Ai's feeling is not always this sad. There must have been some more-romantic moment b/w her and Conan at some point. And I think you should try to make more happy-ending CoAi doujinshi...

But I don't mean to do some request about it or anything, I was just saying that maybe you could make some doujinshi with lighter atmosphere. You know, like one of your fanfic "Blind Man's Buff". Totally like it

Anyway, this is aaaaaaaaaaaaaaweeeesome

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grayfirefly In reply to vikachew [2011-03-19 02:03:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I do love drawing details but I'm not sure if it's professional-like though. xS

I understand what you suggest. It's just that (well, I've never ever been in love so correct me if I'm wrong)I always think if you love someone who can't love you back, no matter how many romantic moments you have between you and him, deep down, you can never really be happy. But I guess you're right, even though I didn't mean to make this doujinshi have such a heavy atmosphere. xC

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vikachew In reply to grayfirefly [2011-03-22 12:42:04 +0000 UTC]

never, really? well i've been there once (with the misery of one-sided love, hurt, etc, etc). Although it seemed impossible to reach, but i always try to see it in a positive way. It didn't end up well though, but it's something i'll always be grateful for

that's why i want ai to be happy too, because i don't know what aoyama-sensei will do about her haha

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grayfirefly In reply to vikachew [2011-03-25 01:12:40 +0000 UTC]

Lol, I guess I'm kind of stone-hearted or something. x'D Well, I like your spirit. I guess as long as it's love, no matter it's returned or not, it'll always be something precious to you, something you treasure for the rest of your life. x']

I want Ai to be happy too but somehow I always end up drawing/writing stories like this.

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vikachew In reply to grayfirefly [2011-03-26 06:05:50 +0000 UTC]

"I guess as long as it's love, no matter it's returned or not, it'll always be something precious to you, something you treasure for the rest of your life" Yeah you got that right

Well there're still a loooooooot of time for you (and for me too) to draw more and maybe you can make something different. But you don't need to worry about it though, I like your drawing and please keep it that way

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grayfirefly In reply to vikachew [2011-03-31 05:31:03 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you. ='] I'm glad you love them and it does mean a lot to me.

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vikachew In reply to grayfirefly [2011-03-31 12:49:58 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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xDivinelyEtherealx [2011-03-17 00:40:15 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous piece, epic finish!
Haibara should replace Taylor Swift. She's much better at evoking the pain of one-sided love...

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grayfirefly In reply to xDivinelyEtherealx [2011-03-19 01:07:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.
I kind of like Tayor Swift's music, even though most of her songs sound the same.

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InuLoverNr1Hitomi [2011-03-15 20:48:36 +0000 UTC]

Aw! Already?!

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DragonriderBorealis [2011-03-14 15:24:22 +0000 UTC]

Like Jean, I'm a ShinRan-Shipper.

Still I see that Ai feels more for Conan than just scientist and test subject.
I think you captured her feelings very well. Staying as close as possible but far enough to not get burned. Thank you for that Doujinshi

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grayfirefly In reply to DragonriderBorealis [2011-03-16 01:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for reading it. ='] I do think that the relationship between Ai and Conan can be described as "very close but also very far"

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Jean-Doyle1412 [2011-03-14 05:05:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm personally a ShinRan fan, but the story is heartwarming regardless and the art is amazing. Good job

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grayfirefly In reply to Jean-Doyle1412 [2011-03-16 01:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Jean-Doyle1412 In reply to grayfirefly [2011-03-16 08:48:41 +0000 UTC]

no prob. You'tr an amazing artist, u deserve the praise XD

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Kiel95 [2011-03-13 21:18:47 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwwwww, that was so sad TT^TT

but i must say, you are amazing... sad but... i loved it... i thought this was amazing, and i loved it!

if you make more, believe me, i will def read it, and i will probably fall in love with it!

you ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(maybe you should make a story afterthis, where conan falls for ai and stays a child, or they go back to normal and fall for each other then.. either way... CONAI FTW! oh and YOU'RE FREAKING AMAZINGLY AWESOME PERSON AND I WISH I WAS AS AWESOME AS YOU! I BOW TO YOU OH GREAT ONE!)

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grayfirefly In reply to Kiel95 [2011-03-16 01:39:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm really happy you loved it. Although I didn't mean to make you sad after reading the story. >.<
I don't know about making another doujinshi. It just takes so much time.
Oh, but I think you're awesome already.

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Kiel95 In reply to grayfirefly [2011-03-16 02:38:57 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, well i def think you should make another

either that or create your own i really loved yours! just like how a good story can take a while to complete, so does a good doujinshi (except usually, more people will read a doujinshi then some random story they've never heard of before and have no clue how good it'll be)



now then, good luck! and I <3 u and your work!!

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grayfirefly In reply to Kiel95 [2011-03-19 00:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Lol, maybe in the future but I can't promise anything. xS

It's so nice of you to say that. I think you'll be the only one who want to read my own story if I ever draw one, lol. x'D

Thanks. I love your work as well. They're really cute and funny.

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