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Published: 2020-03-28 19:15:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 414; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description Yo all ! So I decided to practice some lessons I saw in a friend of mine's book. There was a whole chapter about the different steps of the making of a whole comic page (is "strip" the good word, english-speakers ?).

It was a very good exercice, and even if it's not finished (because I don't consider that I have the level to draw a "professional" strip now, far from it ^^), I'm happy with how it looks !

I KNOW there's a lot of improvement to make. Small faces are a mess, the case/box lines are not straight (hey dude i'm a beginner ), and I still don't know how to draw a proper background ! Etc.

I precise there is no scenario behind it, I just improvised the story ^^ Don't pay much attention to the bubbles, I've written those shitty dialogues at the last minute and there are probably a lot of mistakes (like writing "coprses" instead of "corpses"...)

Any comments or tricks about comic strips would be useful

Take care


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Si-Nister [2020-09-07 15:16:13 +0000 UTC]

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Greentulf In reply to Si-Nister [2020-09-07 17:34:47 +0000 UTC]

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Si-Nister In reply to Greentulf [2020-09-08 18:00:43 +0000 UTC]

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Greentulf In reply to Si-Nister [2020-09-09 09:47:01 +0000 UTC]

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Si-Nister In reply to Greentulf [2020-09-09 17:47:29 +0000 UTC]

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Greentulf In reply to Si-Nister [2020-09-10 09:07:58 +0000 UTC]

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Si-Nister In reply to Greentulf [2020-09-10 19:57:04 +0000 UTC]

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PerscenexArts [2020-06-30 19:02:33 +0000 UTC]

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Greentulf In reply to PerscenexArts [2020-07-01 12:33:15 +0000 UTC]

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solomigue [2020-06-24 03:12:35 +0000 UTC]

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Greentulf In reply to solomigue [2020-06-27 17:07:14 +0000 UTC]

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solomigue In reply to Greentulf [2020-06-28 08:04:58 +0000 UTC]

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Greentulf In reply to solomigue [2020-06-28 10:51:45 +0000 UTC]

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solomigue In reply to Greentulf [2020-06-28 19:28:32 +0000 UTC]

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Greentulf In reply to solomigue [2020-06-29 10:03:21 +0000 UTC]

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Lazy0taku22 [2020-05-04 15:29:37 +0000 UTC]

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Greentulf In reply to Lazy0taku22 [2020-05-05 10:00:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, friend Β  the improvement is on its slow way...
Also thanks for all the faves

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Lazy0taku22 In reply to Greentulf [2020-05-05 14:50:57 +0000 UTC]

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Zotco [2020-04-19 10:20:13 +0000 UTC]

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Greentulf In reply to Zotco [2020-04-19 10:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Merci pour ta rΓ©ponse fournie et encourageante ^^
Je n'ai pas l'intention d'improviser une suite de planche (pas fou l'mec !), lΓ  c'Γ©tait pour voir si dΓ©jΓ  je pouvais en faire une seule
Entre deux dessins, j'écris mes histoires, (3 principales qui vont -je l'espère - finir en BD ; la fanfiction de SNK devrait voir le jour en premier ^^), mais j'ai encore beaucoup de choses à apprendre et j'ai clairement pas encore le niveau pour faire tout une série de planche.. Mais je confirme ce que tu dis, cet exercice a été très instructif !


Merci encore !

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Zotco In reply to Greentulf [2020-04-19 10:36:32 +0000 UTC]

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Greentulf In reply to Zotco [2020-04-19 11:45:06 +0000 UTC]

Merci on verra bien !

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Meystos [2020-04-03 16:53:02 +0000 UTC]

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Greentulf In reply to Meystos [2020-04-03 21:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, the exercice here was not only about the drawing, but also thinking about the disposition of frames, their continuity and intern construction, etc ; it's almost like a director who thinks about the shots of them movie, I've been told ^^
In order to give the story fluidity and meaningfulness.

I'm really glad that you think that It's very nice from you !
But I know I still have a lot to learn x)

Thanks again !!

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WatchTheSkiies [2020-03-31 02:24:09 +0000 UTC]

I see your comic will have a lot of blood, good...

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Greentulf In reply to WatchTheSkiies [2020-03-31 10:39:25 +0000 UTC]

this is actually a one-shot I only made for the exercice, but yeah : the few comics ideas that I have are not really "my little pony" ^^

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Oopsers [2020-03-29 00:03:23 +0000 UTC]

THIS LOOKS AMAZING!!!! I honestly can't put into words how good this is!!!!

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Greentulf In reply to Oopsers [2020-03-29 08:00:46 +0000 UTC]

Awwww Thank you very muchΒ 
But honestly, there is still a lot to work on, and this was just some exercice that I did not make very seriously
But again thank you, I appreciate

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Oopsers In reply to Greentulf [2020-03-29 11:43:20 +0000 UTC]

no problem!

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