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Published: 2011-11-22 10:29:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2036; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 22
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Rough pencils, page 10/10 of the comic I'm working on with ~ekllips , based off of a scene from Tamora Pierce's Song of the Lioness series.EDIT: Fully finished with letters and tones. Done done done!
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Awww, these two <3
I admit a small part of me was disappointed they didn't end up together. Not that I have anything against George, or Thayet for that matter. Quite the opposite.
Anyway! You did a great job illustrating this scene. You have a real gift for showing the emotion on people's faces.
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Lovely - you draw faces with genuine expression rather than stock ones, for one thing
I just wonder if the position of the final speech bubble makes it unclear that Jon's speaking, since it doesn't have a tail to make it clear who it belongs to? If the figures were moved a little down-and-to-the-left there'd be space there'd be space above Jons' head for the speech-bubble, and I feel it might work better.
Just a thought, though.
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Thanks! And agreed-- I reuploaded the edited version.
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The whole comic was great <3 You did it so beautifully 83
Well done
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Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Everyone's commenting on how much they love this scene and I never have (was a George fan from the first book) - anyways, this is STILL beautifully done and I enjoy it a lot - and given my feelings toward the scene itself that says a lot about your talent.
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To tell the truth, I also preferred George. 
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This is one of my favorite scenes ever - so nice to see it so beautifully illustrated!
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Why thank you!
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You know I love you for taking over this scene?
My favourite Alanna/Jon moment! ;___;
And you did it beautifully! ;D
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Thank you so much!
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You're very welcome (:!
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I really love these all. Your chunky inks and balance of black and white are fantastic! I'm excited to see what it looks like when the whole thing has tones and letters. :]
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Thank you! I have the first three pages finished and uploaded, and I'm uploaded letters now.
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To double check, is this your final version or do you plan more?
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These are the final pages! There's a title page for the entry, though, that ~ekllips will be completing.
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Then you and ekllips have the 5th entry completed, Great work! Take a break if you can, you both deserve it.
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Nice ending, with the silhouettes! I really like your drawing style. Great work!!!
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the pages.
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