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Published: 2008-10-09 11:28:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 13429; Favourites: 562; Downloads: 296
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My storyline version of Behania, who is set to start out from humble beginnings and rise to become a fearsome force under Blood's guide. There are some things you cannot learn from your immediate family...All that potential, unleashed. What could she be truly capable of? All we can tell is that the world and its people have made her angry.
Remember, this like all the other pics in this series is owned by me via commission. I probably don't need to mention that again, now.
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Interesting,but she scares me.She looks like she wants to kill.Good job!
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hmm... this version of Behania wins hands down ^^
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you need to do another pic of her battling Game's version
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That'd be a very one-sided fight.
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yeah i know ut it would be good to see more of your Behania
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That's awesome.
She looks badass.
Your Behania reminds me of this dude's version of Blossom. Once naive and blinded but then under the guidance of a dark master, turns into a formidable,fearsome force. They see what humanity really is and decides to destroy it.
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Too many young supers suffer from that naivety. They gotta be UNLEASHED!
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Wow. Cute Loli-Art. I like this Style. Mystic, cute and a little bit sexy.
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She's shed the naivity that used to rule her life, if other people had their way. She now realises that there are bad people in this world and that no amount of peace will change who those people are.
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Yes. Her touch kills off body cells, making them worthless. Or she could harden your arteries to stop your blood flowing.
She could shrivel your eyes up and turn them into wrinkled old prunes.
She could dehydrate your brain and it will crumble and wither.
She could kill off your muscles so that you can't even stand up.
She can fry your nervous system so that you cannot feel anything and your body does not respond.
Kinda like that.
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you know, after seeing all the girls on your ava....this one doesnt look good at all, maybe the outfit... i dunno, it just, doesnt go with the others, even bio, blaze and blood powersuits look better than this
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Well that's ok. Not everyone's gonna like it...
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it's not that, it's more like, she doesnt fit with the others, her suit is more like RPG instead of armor/mech like the others, she looks like a magess of sorts
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Considering her power, mage-ish is a fair description...
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Wow this is done really well!
I understand you own the image via commission, but shouldn't you at least put it somewhere that GamefanPPG owns the character?
I see many derogatory comments aimed at GamefanPPG's character as well, such as:
"This is the only kickass version"
"Ain't no better Behania than this!"
You probably shouldn't be letting people draw her without the original creators permission either.
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You're probably not aware of this but Gamefan sanctioned all changes I made to her and approved both her and his inclusion in my tale. It's all a lock now.
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Maybe Gamefan did sanction the changes at the time, and allow you the usage of his character in your stories. Maybe he gave you the opportunity to write her as best you could in the story, allowing you to change the clothing, the powers, and the look. At the time maybe you both did not know what was going to come of the story, maybe Gamefan thought you would focus on Biohazard and Behania? Then things happened, and you changed her beyond what Gamefan could have imagined. I do believe the situation has changed now, and that you have changed her too far.
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The focus isn't gonna be on Behania and Biohazard, it'll be on HIM and Biohazard. That was probably the greatest controversy of my entire DA career - his admission and reaffirmation that he loved one of my fictional characters moreso than an RL girl who had slaved away so much time for him (and somehow still does). That revelation caused him to stab me in the back and create this rift when all he REALLY had to do was apologise, admit his mistake and move on.
He gave full permission for his character's use the story (which is a go-ahead since I've built a major part of the plot around his charicature) as well as the relation with Bio after his wife's 'untimely accidental death'. And since the love angle with Bio ended in a complete backflip on his part, why should my story not reflect history?
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I hardly think though that you should continue writing the story after all this has happened, and so many things have changed. Opinions and viewpoints have become skewed, and writing a story about a real person who you are currently in conflict with does not seem the best course of action. The stories are fictional and written for fun and the enjoyment and entertainment of the readers. Why put in a real and very unhappy feud. Seems to me the opposite of what people would expect in a story.
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Unfortunately, he's already in the story and will merely take a stronger focus later on.
And who knows - people may actually LIKE my portrayal of him. Saying that I will simply defame him through his persona in the story just cos he's done some incredibly stupid stuff is very shortsighted of you and anyone else who thinks that.
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I hope you are able to make his character well, and portray him properly, disregarding then the feelings you have towards him. Its not shortsighted seeing as how you have drawn both him and his character being killed, its only natural to expect something like that in your story. I hope you do not do anything like that in your stories, or portray him unfairly.
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He will be portrayed fairly, perhaps too fairly.
Oh, and since it turns out Game's Behania is a futanari, I guess me keeping my version is good for all those who thought she was a more normal girl.
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Hopefully he will be portrayed just fairly enough.
Funny how that one time sort of picture was discovered and how you are using it. You neglect to mention that you obtained the picture unfairly using your connections with Bleedman, promising him you would not misuse or spread it. At least that is how Bleedman viewed it.
Funny how it did eventually get around, and showed to Gamefan and his friends by one of your pawns. I sincerely hope Bleedman won't be trusting you on that level anymore.
Behania is a regular girl, but it is always fun to expend and become more diverse. I see no problem with that type of picture, what I do see a problem with is how you are using Behania now to hurt Gamefan.
On to the topic of pictures that were supposed to be kept private, I really enjoyed that little air cadet loli you had drawn for you.
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I didn't obtain it unfairly, I found it on ED. How they obtained it is anyone's guess.
All my pics ended up there too. As for what my friends do with pics like that without my knowledge, I can't control that.
And yeah, Bell in uniform is cute. Classic example of the above situation.
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oo she's about to kick someone's butt, isn't she? can I help? 
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Sure thing! This is the only kickass version of this character
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what program did it?! This is super!!!!!!!! SUPER!!! if I make mistakes- sorry, I'm so Poland...
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I copyed Behania on a piece of paper so that I can remember her forever, she's mai fav.
It took me 5-10 mins to copy her, I have a talent for copying it takes me second to copy anything.
(I'm not bragging, I just like thattalent of mine)
But of course mine that I copyed can never beat the awesome look of yours!
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Hey can I draw Behania in my style??? She's my fav
I like to be all power style and fighting! Check out my profile its all 'bout power!
I am a BBBIIIIggg fan of u too!
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Yes you can draw her like this!
And I agree it's good to see a girl who can fight and defend herself. I don't like the typical naive schoolgirl look.
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yeah me too and just to tell u
biohazard and her daughter are both reeeaaallly cute! very suitable title too! "cute controversy!" awww.
and when draw bleedman style your art looks awesome!
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Yeah... when people cheat on their girlfriends for a character, you know they're good
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hehe (to tell the truth...I don't
understand a thing in that sentence!)
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It means she is very good at causing some debate and fun!
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yeah like when look at her i see that too! 
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yeah like when look at her i see that too!
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She's so cool! What program did you use for her?
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I wished I Could get commissions from bleedman but 
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lol I want to try and draw my Oc's of Jack and Rohge in bleedman's style. I want to know if I could make chibi's like his.
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