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GrishamAnimation1 In reply to Archibald-DW [2018-11-23 00:27:17 +0000 UTC]

As long as there is no cussing on this piece, I'm fine with that.

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Archibald-DW In reply to GrishamAnimation1 [2018-11-24 05:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Well, first of all, I would like to say that I really like how the character is drawn, & it captures the rubber hose drawing style pretty well. However, it doesn't quite do the same when it comes to the rubber hose animation style. It's pretty good for a first attempt, but the action plays a little too fast, & the movement is notably stiff, especially by rubber hose standards, as the style is known for its fluid & bouncy movements. I would suggest adding a little bit of squash & stretch, adding a few more frames, & bending the knees & elbows a little bit more. Overall, even though the lineart is a little shaky, this is not at all a bad animation test. But it doesn't quite reflect the style that it seems to be going for. 

I hope this critique was able to help. Keep up the good work. ^-^

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GrishamAnimation1 In reply to Archibald-DW [2018-11-24 05:22:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Nice critique, but I can't go back and redo the whole thing.

Don't worry. There will be more coming soon, with more expressive animation.

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