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grumpygrimone In reply to derfs51 [2013-02-01 05:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Lol, provided most of the dialouge. I think it worked well.

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derfs51 In reply to grumpygrimone [2013-02-01 05:13:28 +0000 UTC]

I have to read it again. it nice you are adding dialogue into your work.

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grumpygrimone In reply to derfs51 [2013-02-01 05:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, it is a change for sure. But this way people can read the dialouge a lot better then me having my chicken scrap in the word balloons

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derfs51 In reply to grumpygrimone [2013-02-01 17:09:43 +0000 UTC]

It makes sense, instead of just keep asking you about the stories.

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grumpygrimone In reply to derfs51 [2013-02-02 00:22:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh I don't mind any questions to help give an understanding of the story. I hope to get better with script and plotting to allow for better dialouge and pacing.

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derfs51 In reply to grumpygrimone [2013-02-02 02:44:43 +0000 UTC]

The good thing about this dialogue is that it's simple yet effective. even though you may not do it as often, but it helps to keep the stories easy to read as possible.

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grumpygrimone In reply to derfs51 [2013-02-02 05:20:56 +0000 UTC]

True, but you do have those who like a more analytical plot.

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