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Published: 2012-05-26 10:41:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 397; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 5
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Description What is it
that we feel,
we fragile ones,
deep inside
when we try
to peel away,
layer by layer
a soul
in anguish
as one
who prepares
for bed,
for rest.
My layers loom
blue and red
at rest.
No rest
and restless
in the night...
But in morning,
grey.
Walk away.
We feel
the thrill inside
of life
and love
and deep beauty
but no one
can know
the truth...
The gods laugh
at us
from above...
peel away
the love.
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Comments: 30

Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2015-04-13 15:59:03 +0000 UTC]

Really impressing my dear such wisdom

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GUDRUN355 In reply to Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2015-04-14 11:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks. I appreciate your nice comment.

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Huks905 [2012-07-13 21:13:50 +0000 UTC]

The poem is so fluid <3

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GUDRUN355 In reply to Huks905 [2012-07-13 21:18:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your kind comment and especially for reading. Poets have a hard time finding anyone who really reads their stuff. I so appreciate it!

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Huks905 In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-07-13 21:41:07 +0000 UTC]

YES! I always have to force (ergh, I mean...nicely ask my friends to read my stuff)
Please keep on writing 'cause your poems are amazing

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GUDRUN355 In reply to Huks905 [2012-07-13 21:49:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you. I really mean it too.

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Blazinmoon [2012-05-31 02:37:39 +0000 UTC]

your really good im officially a fan!

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GUDRUN355 In reply to Blazinmoon [2012-05-31 02:40:48 +0000 UTC]

I thank you so much!

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Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2012-05-28 11:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. I really love this one

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GUDRUN355 In reply to Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2012-05-28 11:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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dreamingshadow18 [2012-05-26 17:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Such depth. It has an almost fragile quality to it. Beautiful.

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GUDRUN355 In reply to dreamingshadow18 [2012-05-26 17:52:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I never know how these things will turn out.

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dreamingshadow18 In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-26 18:00:23 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes that's the fun part. You're breathing life into the piece so to speak.

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GUDRUN355 In reply to dreamingshadow18 [2012-05-26 18:03:49 +0000 UTC]

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andrekosslick [2012-05-26 11:24:04 +0000 UTC]

It is a quiet melody. Of the different cursing of life. Colors become like in the rainbow broken. And tones of the soul. Breathe the broken melody in the gray morning back. An iceberg of emotions hinders the sun of the love. And coldly and soberly the morning sleeps. Only a laughing is the melody of the first scream of the rooster.

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GUDRUN355 In reply to andrekosslick [2012-05-26 11:41:32 +0000 UTC]

I love the scene you paint with my poetry and the way you understand the raw emotion. Thank you, Andre, for this gift to my words.

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andrekosslick In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-26 11:48:57 +0000 UTC]

Your words are a gift,you flower.

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xXUnknownAurtherXx [2012-05-26 10:45:24 +0000 UTC]

wow O.o

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GUDRUN355 In reply to xXUnknownAurtherXx [2012-05-26 10:47:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I wrote it while standing in the rain.

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xXUnknownAurtherXx In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-26 10:48:27 +0000 UTC]

ooo the rain is best place to write poetric^^

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GUDRUN355 In reply to xXUnknownAurtherXx [2012-05-26 10:49:37 +0000 UTC]

You right! ^^

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xXUnknownAurtherXx In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-26 10:52:55 +0000 UTC]

^^its easy to set the mood there

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GUDRUN355 In reply to xXUnknownAurtherXx [2012-05-26 11:06:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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xXUnknownAurtherXx In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-26 11:10:58 +0000 UTC]

^^ welcome

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GUDRUN355 In reply to xXUnknownAurtherXx [2012-05-26 11:18:37 +0000 UTC]

^^

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xXUnknownAurtherXx In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-26 11:21:26 +0000 UTC]

woooo XD lol i havent slept all night and i think im losing my mindXD

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GUDRUN355 In reply to xXUnknownAurtherXx [2012-05-26 11:25:54 +0000 UTC]

Me too. Thank God, I have the weekend off. I'm totally turning my phone off!

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xXUnknownAurtherXx In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-26 11:26:33 +0000 UTC]

XD yay for weekends

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ScottiBug [2012-05-26 10:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Deep... So deep

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GUDRUN355 In reply to ScottiBug [2012-05-26 10:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Very much.

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