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Published: 2011-08-16 11:00:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 15314; Favourites: 194; Downloads: 277
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We will continue...continue with the strip
very hard work but well here we go again with the story of Lyra and Bon Bon
sorry this Story will contnue on the page3 this is a short page
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Page 01 "First meet p01" [link]
page 02 "First meet p02" [link]
page 03 "Warmth p01" [link]
page 04 "Warmth p02" [link]
page 05 "simptoms p01" [link]
page 06 "simptoms p02" [link]
Page 07 "Anxiety p01" [link]
Page 08 "Changes p01" [link]
Page 09 "Changes p02" [link]
Page 10 "Changes p03" [link]
This is a work inspired by a lot of fanfic's
translated by
adpted by
Written by me
sketched by me
and colors by me
if you want to help you're welcome, is a hard work
Especial thanks for the support and ideas to and & &
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Comments: 148
thank you, then stay tuned, i hope you enjoy the comic
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Equestria is the last place I would have expected to be at war.
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why not? the war is an effect of the civilization
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It just seems ridiculous, especially for a children's show.
Though I will give the benefit of the doubt since this story is taking place in the past. Perhaps the war's over in the show.
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thanks!!! it will not disapoint you
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I know you wont. Keep the great story coming. B)
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De primera, pero creo que lo que sigue va a ser bien triste... Papi desaparece y Bon Bon no sabe que ahora es el jefe de S.H.I.E.L.D (Supreme Hoofquarters Investigations for Equestria Law Defense)! Nah, en serio, voy a buscar una paΓ±uelines desechables...
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NO a pesar de tu teoria, no es Nick Fury.
siempre es bueno ver que te sigue haciendo chillar mi historia
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Y ahΓ uΓ© hace Nick Fury? CreΓ que la cabeza de S.H.I.E.L.D. se llamaba Neigh Fury! Y gracias por alborotar mi temperamento altamente hidraulico!
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hahahahahahahaha LOL
buena esa hermano
genial genial
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Bueno, si a alguien se le ocurriΓ³ un David Hasselhoof, por quΓ© no un...bueno... ya sabes. Y como medio fandom ve a Equestria metida en tantas guerras, no estarΓa mal haer los respectivos Howling Comandos...claro que solamente me acuerdo de dos o tres.
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bueno de hecho quiero pedirte un favor te lo mando por nota
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Contestada. Solo un detallito se me pasΓ³, lo quieres mdeio conocido de Neigh o es militar aparte? Claro que con toda esa ferreteria a cuestas, se podrΓa llamar Pony Stark!
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no algo original, y si es militar
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One of the over-arching themes of my fics is that Equestria is constantly under threat of war (that's why we see so few stallions and colts on the streets, they're all off fighting) by races fleeing something happening beyond the Everfree and over the mountains. Is it okay with you if I describe the armor in my upcoming works as appearing like the one worn by Bon Bon's father?
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PD: The armor of Bon-Bon's Father is for a low rank officer Sargent
i think what the golden ones belongs to high officers, or royal guards
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go ahead, i'll be honored if you do that, please send me a note when your fanfic is finished.
You and me have the same theory about the Stallions in ponyville
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I've already published several fan-fics that refer to it, but my most recent one really went into it. It was about two generals in the Regular Army of Equestria, which is startlingly close to what you drew here.
Thanks for the permission, and I'm enjoying this work!
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ok your Fan fics will go directly to my tablet, y will check you with calm
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GREAT STORY! X'3 LOVE IT!
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thank you! im glad you love it!
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You're Welcome! X3
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poor poor bonbon
wonderful comic but soo sad.
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I hope you ejoyed at all
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for make you feel sad, sorry
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dont worry, maybe just a bad understanding
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After reading/musing-over-pics through these I'm left wanting moar xD
Great stuff thus far, Lyra-BonBon is always cute, digging deeper is great (and something I didn't expect to see in comic strip form xD)
2 hooves up
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wow, i ma glad you find this one diferent, i hope you want to keep reading
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Most definitely
Keep up the good work
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Oh wow. This is shaping up beautifully. Again, it's amazingly powerful for a comic, and the art style's very...dreamlike, like a recounting should be.
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Wow,do you really think that?
Thanks, i will do better
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I'd like to see that.
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Oh man, this comic is really touching. Fantastic work, really well done
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Thanks a lot, thanks for your support commenting
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thank you, im glad you enjoy my comic
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I have no words to express my joy
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I'm liking the direction this is going....keep up the good work dude.
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thank you, im glad you liked, i will do
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A war? Whoa! Great job again! I really love the design on Bon Bon's father
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Thanks a lot, i will draw in a illustration
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You're welcome
I look forward to it ^-^
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