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Published: 2011-08-21 11:43:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 19194; Favourites: 298; Downloads: 584
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I dedicate this comic to , for their great support to this bad artist, thanks for your confidence, I hope to do my best not to disappoint their efforts, and all those what make possible this comic.Previous
Page 01 "First meet p01" [link]
page 02 "First meet p02" [link]
page 03 "Warmth p01" [link]
page 04 "Warmth p02" [link]
page 05 "simptoms p01" [link]
page 06 "simptoms p02" [link]
Page 07 "Anxiety p01" [link]
Page 08 "Changes p01" [link]
Page 09 "Changes p02" [link]
Page 10 "Changes p03" [link]
This is a work inspired by a lot of fanfic's
translated by
adpted by
Written by me
sketched by me
and colors by me
if you want to help you're welcome, is a hard work
Especial thanks for the support and ideas to and & & &
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Comments: 361
Everything stays,
right where you left it,
Everything stays,
but it still changes,
Ever so slightly,
Daily and nightly,
in little ways,
Everything stays...
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Y... se termino, buena historia para antes de dormir.Β
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That was beautiful, I like how you are using Assassin's creed crossover. Very nicely done you have earned a watch.
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I'm impressed he managed to limp home at all in that state.
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i'll be looking forward to it
poor Bob Bon
she has just suffered too much
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......................BUCK!!!! WHY?!?! Everywhere I go theres a medical nightmare waitin on me!Im a medic for a reason damnit!
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I'm crying because of this....beautiful
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thank you.. i luv this.. a had a wonderfull dream of all parts, and I LOVED IT! please, do more!
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i just read these all the way through and i love it plz keep it going.... ur work is beautiful and need to reach an end if this is the end its good. but it has a lot of potential and i think u could take this above and beyond most of the other lyra bon bon stories..... whatever u do just keep up the good work.....
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I like it. I just wish it would continue...
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Well, that was very sad.
But this is a little weird. He looks like returning straight from the battlefield, where no one survived, and when he crawls back the house no one, NO ONE, did anything with him. WTF? Hello, medics anyone?
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the dying man's first instinct is not always the most wise
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Well, maybe.
But my point is, they must some medic/doctors in that battlefield, right? Why there no one do something with him?
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good pooint is a big hole in the story
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Perhaps they got ambushed and became KIA?
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that is another good point
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I cried. and just for that im watching u
This is why i love the fandom
Nicce, all i got to say
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hehehe gracias carnal espero te haya gustado, y checa el resto de mis comic igual tambien te gustan
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Claro que me gusto, Espero con ansias la continuaciΓ³n
Solo que, si me permites hacer una critica, bonbon da miedo en el ultimo panel. Pero eso ya son detalles menors
pd: lyra embarazada holly shit, que le paso en el bosque? parece que no nomas la atacaron fisicamente, IUKWIM D:
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bueno cosas que he ido resolviendo con el tiempo
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Is it okay if I use these lines about peace in my submit?
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sorry for the late but go ahed you can use it
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Thanks!
And By the way, EPIC comic.
Keep up the good work.
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Man..I wish you would contnue this.. Its rlly awesome
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here are two more stripes
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i'm thinking the story is gonna get much darker especially around how lyra became pregnant.
but anyway the story is amazing.
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well i think is mare like a balance, but we continue with the comic
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Yeah. I found it. Now MOAR is needed. *waits patiently*
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