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Published: 2007-11-28 17:16:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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To hold and squeez, hurt and please.. is this what it means?You tear at my soul and rip at my fabric of being. Burrowing deeper into my hole of depression, i cant help but feel my transgression.
I feel hated, unwanted, unneeded, and dissipated.
i guess i feel with out....
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sweetXnothings13 [2007-12-01 14:53:49 +0000 UTC]
this describes perfectly how i feel
beautiful, truly beautiful
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gurujackbob In reply to sweetXnothings13 [2007-12-01 14:57:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, as yours did for me..
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sweetXnothings13 In reply to gurujackbob [2007-12-01 15:03:27 +0000 UTC]
you're a beautiful poet, and if you ever set down your pen, the world would of suffered a great loss
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gurujackbob In reply to sweetXnothings13 [2007-12-01 15:18:10 +0000 UTC]
Wow o_O really? it was my first attempt at poetry.. i thank you greatly! and i felt the same about yours. you put it in a way that completely described my feelings.
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sweetXnothings13 In reply to gurujackbob [2007-12-01 15:21:25 +0000 UTC]
i've been told i have a knack for that... ^^ glad though
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