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gytalf2000 — Chaos Defeats Telekinesis by-nc-nd

Published: 2013-11-07 14:33:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 799; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 26
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Description Marvel Girl has gone to the Gytalf-verse's "Fray's Town" on some personal business. "I rarely get out to this odd hamlet. It has a decidedly weird vibe to it... Hey! Panther Girl is fighting some odd beast. And it looks like she is losing! I've got to help her!"


As Jean rushes to the scene, the entity called "Gweem-Twiks the Chaos Beast" unleashes a powerful blast of eldritch energy which knocks Panther girl completely out cold. "You're finished, Professor Campbell Now I can... UUUHHH!!!"


Marvel Girl has launched a telekinetic attack! "You fiend! get away from her!" The sexy redhead smashes Gweem-Twiks against the wall of a nearby building. Then she hurls a garbage dumpster at the odd beastie. CRASH!!


"That should take him out, I think... OOOHHH!!"  Gweem-Twiks recovers and zaps the miniskirted beauty!


"Oh, you are quite beautiful, Marvel Girl. But I will prevail... ACK!"


Jean has focused her energy into a beam of pure kinetic force, striking her ugly opponent square in his misshapen face.

"Now I can follow up with a purely psychic attack -- AAAAAAIIIIIIEEEEEE!!!   AAAAAAIIIIIIEEEEEE!!! "


Big mistake, Jean! The utter chaos within Gweem-Twiks' mind overwhelms the gorgeous young mutant. "Uuuuuhhhhh... wh-what... on earth... s-so utterly c-confusing... uuuuuuhhhhhh...."


Somehow, Marvel Girl rallies briefly, and attempts to telkinetically shove a large wooden plank at her opponent. However, Gweem-Twiks assumes control over the projectile, and hurls it back at her. WHACK! Struck in the head by the hefty plank, Marvel Girl is now quite stunned and discombobulated. The Chaos fiend knows that she is pretty much out on her feet now, and zooms in close. He delivers a potent blast of eldritch energy at the faltering redhead -- ZAP!! 


"OOOHHH!!"  Rendered unconscious, Jean collapses to the pavement. WHUMP!


Gweem-Twiks then raises Jean's perfect body up within a magical energy field. "Ah, so pretty! Marvel Girl's telekinetic abilities are impressive, but she has no chance against my Chaos Magicks. And now, she can join Panther Girl in captivity!"

A similar field is erected around Monica. "Come with my, my unconscious lovelies!" There is a flash of blinding light, and Gweem-Twiks disappears, along with his scantily-clad captives.


Well, this can't be good for our sexy superheroines...

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Comments: 4

Luckyman64 [2013-11-07 14:56:45 +0000 UTC]

Nice. Good job with Jean here, especially on her boobs.

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gytalf2000 In reply to Luckyman64 [2013-11-07 15:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Like I told Blades-123, this image is derived from a dream. Normally I don't do mainstream Marvel characters other than the Wasp.

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Blades-123 [2013-11-07 14:41:20 +0000 UTC]

I love her uniform!

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gytalf2000 In reply to Blades-123 [2013-11-07 14:46:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, ain't it nice?


Jean had a nice KO in the first issue where the sexy miniskirt appeared [X-Men, Volume 1, Issue #43 (Marvel, April 1968) ] :



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This deviation is actually derived from a dream that I had the other night, where Marvel Girl and Panther Girl were both KOed by the Chaos Master Gweem-Twiks. Fun stiff!




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