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Published: 2013-07-23 05:24:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 443; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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Description yeah well this is my first time mapping using tiles and stuff. its Roshambo town which appears in my games granite and topaz, the 2nd town to be exact XD. i know this is bad but its a work in progress and i need some advise and how to make it better and how to make my mapping skills better. many things need to be changed such as the fountain, the gym, and the center. hope u guys like it
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Comments: 21

linkTheHero2 [2013-10-08 13:51:02 +0000 UTC]

amm do you rall< want to use gba tiles ??????
( the houses)

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hacker10 In reply to linkTheHero2 [2013-10-08 19:41:02 +0000 UTC]

well i kinda want to use hhss or bw and bw2 tiles

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linkTheHero2 [2013-10-07 11:25:20 +0000 UTC]

make the town smaller or use morre trees .If you don#t make youre maps so big ,you would non't have so much epety space

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hacker10 In reply to linkTheHero2 [2013-10-07 20:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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linkTheHero2 In reply to hacker10 [2013-10-08 09:25:37 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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RianSky [2013-07-24 21:56:47 +0000 UTC]

The first thing I would do is resize the map to be alot more smaller. Its way too big and that means alot of empty space which is a big no no in Pokemon games. I would also work on a tree layout a bit more and make it not so square. Then why is the wild grass there? If there isn't really a purpusse for putting it in, don't do it. You should also be avare of what kind of tile styles are you using because you're mixing tiles up which again is a big no no in maps Aside from that, for you first map is pretty good.

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hacker10 In reply to RianSky [2013-07-24 22:02:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much i will work to improve and im having trouble making a city lots of trouble should i show you a pic of it


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hacker10 [2013-07-23 18:25:23 +0000 UTC]

and if anyone knows where i can find a bigger fountain tell me


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chasemortier [2013-07-23 12:22:05 +0000 UTC]

looks nice but try to put some more things in the grass cuz its a bit to empty

but it looks great

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hacker10 In reply to chasemortier [2013-07-23 18:25:33 +0000 UTC]

and if anyone knows where i can find a bigger fountain tell me

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hacker10 In reply to chasemortier [2013-07-23 18:22:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks and yeah i will do that

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TheSpriterMaster [2013-07-23 10:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Heres my criticism

-The grass sort of needs to be "well" cropped

-There is too much space in the town.It should have flower yards,and some pokemon

-The fountain is too small.

-Try adding more trees.

-I think you should try not to use too much different styled tiles


Advise

-Try studying maps from people like

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hacker10 In reply to TheSpriterMaster [2013-07-23 18:25:41 +0000 UTC]

and if anyone knows where i can find a bigger fountain tell me

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TheSpriterMaster In reply to hacker10 [2013-07-24 08:10:30 +0000 UTC]

okey-dokey

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hacker10 In reply to TheSpriterMaster [2013-07-24 11:04:12 +0000 UTC]

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hacker10 In reply to TheSpriterMaster [2013-07-23 18:23:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks and yeah i will try my best to fix those and i agree

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AxolotlWitch [2013-07-23 05:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Looks pretty cool.

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hacker10 In reply to AxolotlWitch [2013-07-23 05:28:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks, it was my first try so it really means alot.

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AxolotlWitch In reply to hacker10 [2013-07-23 05:30:21 +0000 UTC]

It looks kinda like the Pokemon X/Y Town. With the fountain and stuff. 

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hacker10 In reply to AxolotlWitch [2013-07-23 05:35:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks i was kinda going for that approach, but i think i need a bigger fountainXD

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AxolotlWitch In reply to hacker10 [2013-07-23 17:37:40 +0000 UTC]

lol.

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