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Watch the video of this deviation being created here! :3I originally wanted this as a new preview for my flash but i decided to make it its own deviation :3
I used Paint Tool SAI
Time: 1 hour 30 min~
I like LOVE constructive criticism when it's helpful and relevant. Please give it if you have it and my work isn't older than one month after uploading.
EDIT: Soooo I've just found out that the colors on this look waaaaayyyy different on my laptop than it does on my computer's monitor. I made this on my laptop and now I'm kind of regretting doing this on my laptop... orz
Anyways, Im sorry if the colors look strange/off on your monitor but it was so much better looking on my laptop Q_Q
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Comments: 36
hanasarah [2015-09-15 09:10:52 +0000 UTC]
your picture is sooooo cuuteee
hi, i m from indonesia, there is japanese festival in my university, so may i take this picture and print it as a sticker
thanks
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2SHJAN [2011-08-20 07:25:16 +0000 UTC]
OMG LLLLLLLLLLL
his so cute i'm gonna use it as my wallpaper
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hahalyssa In reply to 2SHJAN [2011-08-20 07:32:06 +0000 UTC]
thank you! its so nice to know that its worthy enough to be your wallpaper
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2SHJAN In reply to hahalyssa [2011-08-20 07:39:39 +0000 UTC]
of course it worth
be confident of your skill it's really cute cute.... L
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hahalyssa In reply to 2SHJAN [2011-08-20 08:44:03 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for the encouraging words! really thank you!
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KikSter11XxKikixX [2011-08-17 19:45:22 +0000 UTC]
I...I love it.
I think it might have been more awesome if you added more shading to his clothes, but still, this is cool, too.
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hahalyssa In reply to KikSter11XxKikixX [2011-08-17 21:06:15 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the tip! i'll go ahead and try to fix that for you
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hahalyssa In reply to deidaraloverchia [2011-08-17 10:36:38 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much! that means so much!
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deidaraloverchia In reply to hahalyssa [2011-08-24 13:57:31 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome, dear.
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Knifapotamas [2011-08-01 00:54:52 +0000 UTC]
Alright, some feedback for you. ^^
To begin with, he's just ADORABLE. Overall, I really love it.
Just a few things I would change: I'd put more detail into his irises, shading on the color there to make them stand out a little more, and I'm not the biggest fan of the background; I think it looks a little rushed and like it was just thrown on there as an after thought, it's not the best compliment to the picture. Overall, as I said, I really love the picture, though; it's a lovely style, I love how it's so cute and simple and crisp.
All in all, great job, and keep drawing! Oh, and btw, we have the same name. Cool beans. >8D
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hahalyssa In reply to Knifapotamas [2011-08-01 01:39:58 +0000 UTC]
yay a critique! i'll make sure to fix the eyes. i was having the same thought too about the irises ^_^
and im not quite sure to do about the background to be honest. do you have any suggestions to help me out? :3
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Knifapotamas In reply to hahalyssa [2011-08-01 15:44:39 +0000 UTC]
Yup, their shape and everything is great, but I think you should just add some shading, lighter at the bottom and darker at the top to make them stand out more. :3
I'd definitely lose the fuzzy purple airbrushy part. It's too soft and a little sloppy looking, I think, it clashes with the clean, crisp lines of the centerpiece. The purple's too bright as well. It detracts from the main art and pulls the eye away, especially since L is made up of not very vibrant colors! I'd either lose the background entirely and have it transparent, or make a non-airbrushed background with a base color of a not-very saturated blue, I think. You could go for an outline (hard brush) with that, or maybe just let it be a solid rectangle, plus some embellishments. It's up to you. C:
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hahalyssa In reply to Knifapotamas [2011-08-01 21:14:52 +0000 UTC]
thank you soo much for the advice! i appreciate it!
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LuciusStone [2011-08-01 00:08:54 +0000 UTC]
this is ridonkulously adorable!!!
the only thing i will say is that the purple outline takes away from the picture :/
but i still love it!!
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hahalyssa In reply to LuciusStone [2011-08-01 00:47:28 +0000 UTC]
thank you! ^_^
do you think it would be better to remove the purple outline and to make the background just white/transparent? i'd really like to know :3
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LuciusStone In reply to hahalyssa [2011-08-01 11:03:48 +0000 UTC]
i would just leave it white but you could also try a black background with a white outline around L (like just now) but male the black fill the page...
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hahalyssa In reply to LuciusStone [2011-08-01 21:14:17 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the advice i appreciate it! ^_^
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Lasslim [2011-07-31 20:01:33 +0000 UTC]
Booo! I like L's creepy soulless eyes better!
ily and your L anyways! <3
IT'S ADORABLE!!!!
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Mushr00mCom1t33 [2011-07-31 17:15:28 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD...
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